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| Subject: Epic Quest of Green  Tue 03 May 2016, 8:56 pm | |
| A fic I wrote in 2007, but recently added commentary to in 2016 and fixed things on it. - Chapter 1:
-Chapter One-
*The Special Pikmin
After a red pikmin carried a pellet to their onion,a shiny green seed popped out and floated down to earth,planting itself when it hit the ground. This was no ordinary seed,it had two leaves instead of one. The Pikmin had a shorter nose than the reds. Even though it was not red, it`s eyes were and it`s leaves were a light green. The green saw only darkness, until he felt a warm hand pull on his leaves and that hand brought Green into the world again. He saw who it was,it was the chosen one. So many pikmin had wished to be in the divine presence of the chosen one. He was just about to hug the Chosen One when they picked Green up and tossed him at a nearby egg.
Green landed on the egg and hit it with his leaf as hard as he could,but nectar was not inside it,it was mitites. The smell of the bugs burned his pores and he felt like he was going to die until he was whistled, and the burning sensation disappeared. The chosen one stared past him with amazement. The mitites had secreted red nectar, so the chosen one ran past Green and sucked it up and sprayed Green and the other pikmin. He was faster,stronger,smarter,Green's abilities were optimal. The Chosen One and all the pikmin stared at Green. What Green did not know, is that his leaf was glowing a bright blue instead of red like normal supercharged pikmin.
Green:What?
The blue onion expelled an iridescent orange seed, and the yellow onion expelled a metallic tan seed. The Chosen One then ran over to both onions and plucked them. He dismissed the pikmin,Green instinctually got into his own group. The orange and tan ran to Green's group to join him.
Green: Hello.
Tan: Hello my name is Tan.
Orange: And my name is Orange.
Green: I can`t wait for the Chosen One to give us orders.
Tan: I can`t either.
Orange: I have always wondered,when was the Chosen One last here?
Green: Probably a hundred years or more,Tan?
Tan: I do not know.
*After a few minutes of talking,a shiny red,blue,and yellow pikmin ran over to Tan, Green, and Orange.*
Red:I am Red, he is Blue, and he is Yellow. We are like you.
Yellow: The chosen one separated special pikmin from the group and nourished us.
Blue: We are special because we are shiny.
Tan: So us six are special?
Blue: Yes,we cannot understand most of his language but we heard him utter the words "Special Creatures".
Yellow: What he doesn't know about,is the ton of colors of pikmin on the spectrum.
Tan: Wow!
Red: What is that, it look likes a smaller floating version of The giant treasure in the "Wistful Wild". It looks like it's spinning around.
Tan: It is shiny and gray. It also has a sphere in the middle, and it has many lights on it.
Blue: The chosen one, we must protect him!
*The Special group ran over to help the chosen one but he was instantly down when the creature hit him*
Red: Olimar!
*They watched in sadness three red pikmin carry Olimar's battered body to the rocket.*
All: Who is Olimar?
Red: The name of the chosen one...
Blue: Hey! I have an idea.
Red: I know,me and Green will attack it.
*Red and Green ran to attack but Green was brutally struck down by one of the spheres. A second hit sent flying a long distance away into a wall. Red was striking the middle of the creature until it turned sideways. He fell off and was pounded into the ground with incredible force. In addition,it also snapped his stem, causing Red excruciating pain.*
Blue: *wipes away tear* You will pay!
*Blue ran towards the machine and jumped on the middle sphere and beat it with all his might. once the creature was almost dead it sent electricity throughout its body,zapping blue. It only stunned Blue instead of killing him.*
Yellow:Take this!
*Yellow jumped on the creature,striking the finishing blows. It began to short circuit while saying "mission failed". It exploded and he was sent high up into the air and before he is killed from the fall Tan caught him*
Tan: Are you ok?
Yellow: A few bruises but otherwise, I`m fine. I'll get Green.
Tan: I will get Red.
Orange: And I will get something to help heal them.
*After Tan and Yellow left, Orange finds a brown egg and shouted to the others, but they did not respond.*
Orange: Might as well break it open. *Beats the egg*
Orange: Almost Done! Yes! I broke it open but what is that white stuff?
*Orange stood there as his eyes grew bigger with look of amazement at the white nectar. He grabbed a clover on the ground and crafted it into a pouch. He tied it around his back and put the nectar in it.*
Orange: I hope this will heal the wounds. If not...I wonder what it will do. I'll give this to Tan first.
*Before Orange began to run to Red and Tan,he spotted red nectar and put it in the pouch.
Orange: OK! Now to Tan.
~Red,Tan,Blue~
Tan: Are you ok? Blue! Are you you ok?
Blue: Ow. It hurts.The electricity is still coursing through my body
Tan: I`ll get Red. *plucks Red out of the ground*
Red: It hurts!!!! *Cries uncontrollably*
Blue: There there Red,it`ll regrow.
Red: It will never regrow, it's snapped too bad!
Tan: He is right.
Blue: I think we should call it the Dumb Creature Who Hurt Us.
Tan: Or, the Ton Bombell?
Red: It felt like a ton, so I guess it would be good.
Tan: God dangit!! Where is Orange?
*Suddenly they all spotted Orange running with some nectar spilling out of his pouch.*
Tan: Yes!!
Red: Pour it on my stem.
Orange: Here it is! *checks pouch* They mixed?
Red: Just pour it on my stem!
Orange: OK *Applies some of the potion to his broken stem and it magically grew back*
Red: Wow!I feel better now.Now for Blue *takes away pouch*
*Red poured half of the the potion onto Blue's charred body and all the wounds vanished*
Blue: That is the most amazing potion ever.
Tan: Let`s take it to Green and Yellow.
Yellow: I'm already here *sets down Green's crushed,battered body*
Red: Here Green. *applys potion to Green and revives him*
Green: All I saw was darkness after I got hit.
Red: We thought you were dead!
Green: Well if I'm talking to you,I`m not.
Blue: I think we are not welcome for letting the chosen one die. Let's take that raft.
Red: I hope it leads us to a better place than this area.
Green: I know how you feel. It is dark,scary,and full of evil enemies.
Red: Onto the raft!
*They all got onto the raft and Red used a stick to propell the boat across the seamingly endless Sea.
Blue: I can swim but these are unknown water,I will call it the Blu Sea.
Red: You get to name it, why?
Blue: We will all get to name a place.
Tan: Well I call where we left,The Frightening Forest.
Red: We are outcasts, plain and simple, that is why everything is scary
Blue: Hey! A whirlpool.
*Right before their eyes,a massive snagret rose out of the water,almost capsizing the raft.It`s scales were a dark purple,it had gills and it's pearly whites were just craving pikmin flesh. The terrifying creature roared at them, drool dripping from it's mouth.*
Red: Aaaaaaaaah!
Green: You will not kill my friends. You beast!
Orange: Yaaah!
*The beast devoured Green and Orange, taking a bite out of the raft and dove back into the dark depths of the Blu Sea.*
Red: Green!!! Orange!!!
Yellow: They were my friends!! Beast! You will pay!!
Blue: [face_cry]
Tan: Now What!! He devoured my friends!
Blue: I will give that beast such a beating! *dives into water*
Yellow: Blue!!
Tan: Not Another Friend! [face_cry]
Red: Can`t cry,I`m the tough one. [face_cry]
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| - Chapter 2:
-Chapter 2-
*The Island of Tranquility
Red: Nooooo!
Tan: I think I will dive in too.
Yellow: We can`t lose another one.
Red: I see land!
Yellow: Land!
Tan: Land! Land! Land!
Red: What about the others?
Tan: I think we will have to row to safety.
Red: What?! I am not going to lose my best friends!
Tan: Then we row near shore and wait...
Yellow: They are probably dead.
Tan: I guess.
~~Sea Snagret~~
Orange: Now what.We`re in it`s stomach!
Green:Escape!
Orange: If we try to escape we will drown.
Green:So we are dead.
Orange:Look!!
*They both turned to see a Frequenzy being digested.*
Green: One of them!
Orange: It's so loud! *covers ears*
Green:Yah. *picks up piece of undigested food*
Orange: Give me that. *throws it at the nanobot*
Green: Direct hit!
*They watched in horror as it was digested and explodes sending a gray goo at them. It splashed all over orange. It soon went deep under Orange`s skin.*
Green: Orange?
Orange: It burns! It's going into my blood stream. Aaaaaaaaaaahh!
Green: Not Orange.
*He watched Orange become a more metallic orange color and lunged at Green,trying to attack him*
Orange: Destroy all organic life.
Green:NOOOOO!! *punches Orange*
Orange: HAHAHHA! You think that hurts me?
*Orange picked up Green by the leg and proceeded to punch him in the stomach until Green kicked him off. Green jumped on him,biting his leg and punching him in the face until Orange threw him into the walls of the stomach,stunning him. As Orange was about to deliver the final punch, Green kicked him into the stomach acid.*
Green: Sorry Orange. God freakin dangit! The nano goo took him over.
Orange: AAAAAAAAAAHHAHA!
*As Orange dissolved, the grey goo seeped out of his pores,crawled up the walls and out the stomach. Green spotted a snowy bulbmin out of the corner of his eyes.*
Green: Hello friend.
Bulbmin: Hello, my name is Snowy.
Green: How did you get here?
Snowy: Those things killed my family.
Green: Oh.
Snowy: I escaped by jumping into what I thought was a cave.
Green: Oh. I'm sorry.
Snowy: It`s not your fault.
Green: We need to get out of here.
Snowy: I'll give you a ride then.
Green: *Hops on Snowy's back*
Snowy: Prepare for a bumpy ride* runs up the throat and out the mouth*
Green: Uh...Glug glug glug.
Snowy: Oops! *swims quickly to the surface* Here you go.
Green:Thank you.
Red: Green!!
Yellow:What about Orange?
Green: He didn`t make it.
Red: Oh.
Snowy: Ok.
Red: BLUE!!
Green: What?
Red: Blue went down to rescue you.
Snowy: I`ll get him. *dives back into water*
Red: Ok. Who is-
Green: Blue!! I`ll go down and help!
Tan: Don't,you are weak right now.
Green: I don`t care!! I gotta save him!
Yellow: No! *holds Green down*
Red: I hope he`s ok.
~Blue~
*Blue was right in front of the snagret, ready to attack but he noticed Snowy swimming toward him.*
Snowy: I saved them already!
Blue: What?
Snowy: Yes. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh! Something's tugging on my leg!
Blue: It's the snagret!
BLue: *grabs rock and throws it at a coral reef the avian serpent was in* Take this!
Snowy:It's collapsing! *struggles and squeezes out of the sea snagret's grip*
*Snowy escaped with Blue just in time. The coral reef collapsed on the snagret, crushing it.*
Snowy: That was only a baby.
Blue: Waaah?
Snowy: Lets escape to the surface first.
*The pair escaped to the surface and climbed aboard the raft.*
Red: It's Blue!!
Yellow: Blue!
Tan: Blue!
Blue: Purple!
All: ....
Tan: You lived.
Blue: Land ahoy!
Red: We have reached land.
*They all stepped onto the red,sandy beach of the island.*
Tan: Aaaah. The sand feels nice.
Yellow: And the coconuts *gets squashed by a coconut*
Red: Yellow.
Yellow: New home.
Blue: Ooh it is a nice home.
Green: Better write this down. Coconuts make nice homes.
All: *walk into coconut*
Snowy: Ooooh, it`s nice and cool in here.
Green:Thank you Yelow.
Snowy: Cool.
Blue: You were saying that it was only a baby.
Snowy: It was. There is a rumor that there's a huge snagret who lives on it's own island,but it's stuck in a cave so it cannot attack.
Blue: So it's not real?
Snowy: Pretty much.
Red: Boy would it be scary if it was real.
Green:I name this, The Isle of Tranquility.
Red: Boy am I tired.
Yellow: Not me.
Blue: What is that bouncy thing that's shooting out electricity?
Yellow: I got it! *picks up bomb rock*
Blue: He sure is a kamikaze.
Yellow: *throws bomb rock at creature blowing it up and releasing the grey goo*
Red: What is that?
The grey goo enters a nearby bulborb and makes it a chrome color*
Bulborb: Kill organic matter.
*The bulborb ate a bur and it dies*
Yellow: That was anti climatic...
Green: More burs! *runs over to a bur and picks it up*
Red: I want one
Green: Ok.
*Green handed them each a bur but it stung their hands*
Red: OOOOW!!
Tan: That hurt.
Green: Oops, here, I`ll get a good view of the Island if I use my leaves to fly. *flies very high*
Red: Now what to do?
Green:~~~
Green: Hey I could be an aerial attacker.
*Green dropped a bur on a dweevil. The bur exploded in a shower of spikes,skewering the dweevil.*
Green: *hovers down*
Red: I found that grey goop but it seeped into the ground.
Blue: Hey, a piece of paper.
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Dear reader,
There are special shards of the Rainbow Jewel located on each of the islands for each of the special pikmin. The colors are White,Red,Green,Blue,Yellow,Tan,Orange.When possesed by the correct master it will change them and give them special powers. A bulbmin might be able to handle one of these shards if one of the specials is killed.All of them are needed to defeat Black,Specter and their minions. They however,have the Black and Purple Shards.
From,
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Red: Wow!
Blue:So Snowy will have to handle the Orange or White one.
Snowy: Orange!
Blue: Ok. He gets the Orange Shard then.
Red: I miss Orange.
Green: I know.
Red: Who is Specter?
Blue: Beats me.
Green: Hey,look on the back it says the Orange Shard is on this exact island.
Snowy: Yay!
Blue: I wonder what it means by change us.
Snowy: Hmmmmm! Physically?
Blue: Probably.
Red: I think they must be the ones making the nanobots.
Snowy: Who will get the White Shard?
Red: I don`t know who.
Blue: What is Oranges immunity?
Red: He could toss stuff.
Blue: And?
Red: I think lava?
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Blue: A countdown?
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Yellow: It's a good thing we have this coconut.
5
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Red: Well Orange is dead.
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Day 1 is over
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green Tue 03 May 2016, 9:00 pm | |
| - Chapter 3:
Chapter 3:
*New Friends come to Aid
*Green was sleeping the day away in a makeshift bed*
Tan: Come outside!
Green: *wiping eyes* Waah!
Red: Look at Snowy.
Green came outside a sees how much Snowy grew.
Green: Holy Pika Z!
Snowy: Wow I grew big.
Green: We can all fit on you.
*It was true,they could all fit on Snowy because he had grown to the size of a normal snowy bulborb.They all hopped onto Snowy as he walked up a mountain.*
Yellow: I freaked out when I saw him.
Snowy: Big growth spurt.
Red: Yes! It was a huge growth spurt.
Green: Aaaaah. Soft
Snowy: I feel something deep in my fur.
*A purple and white pikmin popped out.*
Purple: Sorry.
White: Very sorry.
Red: How do we know you're not with the nanobots?
White: *Shows scar* Is that proof enough?
Green: Oh my god! How did you get that?
White: Specter and Black trapped me and sliced my arm.
Purple: We brought a friend,Oct.
*A squid like pikmin rose out of Snowy`s fur.*
Oct:Hello!
Red: AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH! *falls off*
Oct: *grabs Red* Don`t be afraid,I am a friend.
Yellow: I've seen enough hentai to know where this is going.
Blue: Wee! Another swim buddy.
Snowy: Cave up ahead.
Oct: I would be very interested in learning about you guys.
Yellow: *shivers* I'm cold.
*They entered the cave and saw lightly colored versions of themselves and a few shiny pikmin.*
Red: How many pikmin colors are their?
Oct: When you throw hues,parasites,saturation,and tons of other factors,an infinite amount.
*Suddenly,one of the lightly colored pikmin approached them.*
LightYellow: Are you a foe?
All:NO!
Red: Why are you lightly colored?
Pink: We were darker,but Black raised this mountain,so we lost some of our darkness because the sun saturated us.
LightBlue: Hello swim buddies.
Green: And the jewels?
Lightgreen: Like us, only they had this jewel like substance spilled on them. It was caused by a nanobot.
LightOrange: Don`t I have a counterpart?
Green: Died!
Garnet: That means we can`t form a trio of orange?
Snowy: But I will get the Orange shard.
Garnet:Yay!! The trio is fixed.
Gold: So the trios will be, Orange,Green,Yellow,Blue,Red,White.
Tan: What about me and Purple?
Garnet: Unless he and Jade go to the Dark Side *Imperial March plays*...the trio will not be complete.You,Oct and Silver,none.
Tan: Dang it!
Silver: Yah!
Darth Vader: Join the Dark Side.
Pink: *slaps Darth Vader* You aren't in this story,go back to Star Wars!
Darth: Waah, You didn't have to be so mean.
LightBlue: So we are all the same type but different hues?
Pink: Yes.
Jade: Not joining the dark side.
Purple: We will convince the bad guy to come to our side.
LightOrange: No! We want to kill him,not be with him.
Red: I name this cave, Dream Cave.
Pink: Dream Den?
Red: Dream Cave! This is not the Dream Den!
LightGreen: We have evolved enough to make and use tools.
Silver: *walks in* Hi.
Green: Nanobot!! *tackles Silver*
Ruby: He's just a mutated Gray!
Green: Oops. Hehehe.
Silver: Forgiven.
Gold: Hey Yellow.
Yellow: Hi buddy.
Red: Does this mean the nanobots caused your colors?
Pink: Sadly,yes.
White: Who's my trio buddy?
Pearl: Me.
Bone: And me,ignore the skull on my arm.
Bronze: No LightTan,but Tan, you have me.
Emerald: Hi.
Sapphire: Hi too
Diamond: I`ll be Tan`s buddy.
Silver: I am part of the Steel Tribe,so I am in a different trio.
*A steel red pikmin walked in.*
SteelRed: Who are these nanobots?!
Oct: I am Oct. Nice to meet you.
SteelRed: *punches Oct and kicks Green*
Green: WTF was that about?
Oct: Yah.
Pink: He has just been very mad after nano-goo got into his blood stream. It changed him and his whole tribe
Brass: Big bro,why did you kick him?
SteelRed: Thought they were an enemy.
Green: Hey there little guy.
Brass: *kicks Green*
SteelRed:Brass, Why`d you kick him?
Brass: Thought he was an enemy.
SteelRed: *pats Brass on the head* You`re learning.
Green: To kick people?
Brass: *kicks Green* Shut up!
Green: Ow! *rubs leg*
Brass: *kicks Green* Shut up soccer ball!
Pink: *kneels down to Brass* Why are you kicking him?
Brass: Soccer training.
Pink: Here's a soccer ball, kick this instead *hands Brass a ball*
Brass: COOOOOOL! *starts bouncing the ball on his knee*
Green: Thank you Pink.
Brass: I`m going to break the world record!
SteelRed: Yes you are.
Diamond: Back on track, we will need to trek through this cave and over the bridge.
Pink: Want to see our bulborbs?
Green: You domesticated them?
Pink: Yes.
*Six white bulborbs walk into the room.*
Red:Get away!
Pink: Don`t worry,they're ok now.
*The bulborbs walked over to Snowy,sniffed him, and curled up next to him.*
Snowy: Awww,they like me.
Bulborb1: (Mommy!)
Rest: (Hi mommy)
Snowy: I can understand them?
Green: We should get going.*climbs on Snowy*
*Half of the Pikmin climbed on Snowy's back and the other half got on the dwarf bulborbs. Snowy was at the head of the group. The bulborbs happily followed like a group of ducklings. Like ducklings carrying ants.*
Bulborb1: (My names Qye.)
bulborb2: (Mine is Kei.)
Bulborb 3: (Lyn)
Bulborb: (Jylou)
Bulborb5: (Sonny)
Bulborb6: (Ytu)
Snowy: Wow! I can barely say any of those.
Green: Bridge up ahead!
LightGreen: And it's crumbling.
Green: Like a cookie.
LightOrange: I wish there was an orange.
Red: Not crumbling,melting.
LightYellow: It`s ice.
Snowy: And there is lava too!
Green: And there are nanobots bouncing in it!
OrangeShard: Oh my!
Snowy: The Orange Shard.
*They all dismounted and crossed the bridge,but LightOrange,Snowy, and Garnet stared at the shard.*
Snowy: Wow!
LightOrange: Shiny!
Garnet: Cool!
LightOrange: I should get it because I'm orange.
Garnet: I'm orange too, and shiny.
Snowy: I should get it because...reasons?
*Snowy touched the Orange Shard and his body absorbed it. He glowed a bright orange,his eyes turned green,and his fur became an orange red. The power was so great that it melted the ice bridge,causing them to fall into the lava below.*
Green: Snowy!
Diamond: Garnet!!
LightYellow: LightOrange.
All: [face_cry]
*During their mourning, Snowy rose out of the lava with flames circling him. Light Orange and Garnet on were his back.*
Snowy: We are ok!
Green: Snowy!
Pink: *picks up Light Orange and Garnet by the leaf* Don`t be that stupid again!
Garnet: *Humming Jackass tune*
Green: Now on to that snagrets island!
LightGreen: The boat is not big enough for all of us.
SteelRed: One of the powers of nanobots...teleportation! *teleports them to the creatures island*
*When they reached the island,they saw a snagret a thousand times their size. Only it's head was sticking out of the ground and it could not move.*
Green: Holy ****,****,****ing ****!
Yellow: That's a lot of bleeps.
LightGreen: Whoa,that thing is humongous
Oct: I`ll call it Dexter.
All: ????
Oct: Do you know that creature from this game,this looks just like it.
Green: So it is Dexter's Island,that level in Ape Escape.
Oct: Exactly!
White: What's Ape Escape?
Oct: A game where you catch monkeys.
Purple: Why would you catch monkeys?
Green: *facepalm* I guess if had a dog it'd be Dexter's lab.
*crickets chirped*
Red: Let me guess, the next shard is in there?
Pink: Yes, bleh!
SteelRed: Let's go then.
Purple: I thought the idea was to not get eaten.
*They entered the mouth and slide down the esophagus and into the stomach. Several of the reluctant pikmin were dragged in by the others*
Red:Wow.
Brass: Nanobots.
*They saw a floating antibody. It detected them and attacked Red.*
Red: Yaah! *destroys it*
Brass: That was not a nanobot.
Blue: And neither is that?
*Blue pointed to a jellyfloat with a battery fused onto its head,zapping a brown pikmin.*
Yellow: And here I thought jellyfloats just...floated?
*Yellow ran to the jellyfloat,killing it by removing the battery on it's head*
Brown: Thank you. I am in your debt.
Tan: Buddy!
Bronze: Yes!!
Green: Everyone,I have a game plan.
All: Tell.
Green: We will split up, Me,Emerald,LightGreen,Brass and SteelRed will head up to the creature's brain. Brown,Tan,Bronze,Yellow,Gold,Light Yellow go deeper down... Red,Pink,Ruby,White Purple,and Jade will explore the blood stream. Garnet,Snowy,LightOrange will search the lungs. Diamond,Pearl,Sapphire,Bone,Oct,search the outside and the mouth. Silver,go outside with them and do something. Wait,find a weapon first.
LightBlue: And me?
Green: Pick your nose or something. Wait, find the Crystal Sword.
LightBlue: ?????
Green: Saw it in a book.
Red: And bring the bulborbs with you.
Blue: I`ll go with him.
Green: The sword is outside,so get running.
Gold: Hey! You put us in the bad group.
Brown: Who knows whats down there.
Tan: Yah!
Bronze: We demand a change.
Yellow: Vote, Who wants us to go "down there"?
All: *Raise hand*
LightYellow: Dangit!
*The large group split up into their smaller groups and went into their assigned areas.*
~~~Diamond's Group~~~
Silver: Well,now we have to---
Pearl: Stand guard I guess?
Oct: *falls asleep*
Diamond: Boring!
~~Greens group~~
Brass: Brain, here we come.
SteelRed: Just like your brother.
Brass:Copper? I miss him.
Green: ????
SteelRed: Oldest brother of our family.
Emerald: Oh line *pulls neuron*
Green: Don`t do that,that's the creature life.
LightGreen: Wow?
Brass: Red reminds me of Copper.
Green: He does?
SteelRed: Yes, he does,Copper was only two years older than me.*sheds a manly tear*
~~~Yellows Group~~~
Yellow: Why us?
LightYellow: The intestines
Gold: Boy does this suck.
Brown: Uh oh, everything below us is submerged in water.
Bronze: Back to the stomach.
Tan: Yay!
~~~Snowy`s Group~~~
Snowy: Traveling through the airways is fun but the air ways are getting narrower,I`ll wait here.
Garnet: It's like a water slide.
LightOrange: But with air.
Garnet: An air slide!
Snowy: I think the heat I'm radiating is burning it. I should leave before I damage it.
Garnet: We will delve deeper.
~~~~Reds Group~~~
Red: Why does the blood not drown us?
Pink: It contains oxygen. This creature has a huge ton of oxygen in its blood.
Jade: More than enough.
Purple: This is nasty though.
Red: Nonsense, we bleed the same blood.
Purple: We don't bleed at all Red.
~~~~Pearl's Dream~~~
Pearl: Where am I?
Specter: Hello,you are in meh base *picks up laser* So get out.
Black: Capture her! How about you Phantom? Go capture her.
*A shape shifting orb materialized into a dark red pikmin.*
Phantom: Capture her!
Black: No I told you to catch her.
Pearl: You`ll never catch me!
Phantom: *jumps into mech* Oh really?
Pearl: Oh no! *runs down staircase*
Phantom: *fires missiles* HAHAHAHA! GET A LOAD OF THIS!
Pearl: *falls down the broken staircase*
Phantom: Muhaahhahahahaha!
Pearl: Stairs, my greatest enemy. Not again.
-To Be Continued-
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green Tue 03 May 2016, 9:04 pm | |
| - Chapter 4:
Chapter 4
*Copper`s Log
I woke up and saw my little brothers Brass and SteelRed standing next to my bedside. They didn't know that our entire tribe was killed by these silver beasts. They were asleep during all this. Our tribe,being known for fighting with blades,bravely and fearlessly. I dared not tell them or their lives would be ruined. I looked at my leg and saw a huge gash in it.
We walked to the sacred springs where I put my leg in it and it soothed the pain. Then I saw two dark figures heading towards us with the silver beasts. I told my brothers to run as fast as they could and hide. They escaped but I was captured. The one figure materialized a huge club and all I screamed was "Do your worst,I won`t feel a thing!" Those words were a lie,I felt a immense pain before everything went black.
I woke up,presumably five hours later because the God of Light was slowly traveling below the horizon. I knew I would die because of my wounds. I don't know what compelled me but I slowly asked about my sapience,how was I made, and why don`t we need a captain to lead us? That was slowly answered by an extremely dark red pikmin. I had never seen a pikmin that evil looking in my life.
I kicked his leg and yelled "Who are you you filthy scum" but it didn't seem to phase him.
He only replied "Don`t worry,you will grow to be just like me some day."
"I will never be like you,you heartless fool!"
He pulled out a needle with liquid in it and stabbed it deep into my arm. I let out a cry and desperately tried to get out of the room;it was sealed.
"You know,you are our first experiment young pikmin." he said with a scowl "So why are you trying to get away?!".
"You mean I`m a test?".
"You know that thing I injected,it will change your body and will make you like us." he said in a quieter tone.
My wounds disappeared and my blood felt like that mysterious substance. I ripped a hole in the wall and ran down the tunnel with red lights flashing and doors locking. I looked in the corner of my eye and what I saw was the most frightening thing I had ever seen. It was a huge silver bulbax with fangs, it was notably larger than the Emperor Bulblax and it had one of the figures riding in it. I ran as fast as I could but stopped when the bridge to the outside crumbled and I saw a huge crevice with a molten,blue substance.
The elders told me as a young sprout that if something is burning and it is blue,it is extremely hot. I used to be an Ember Collector but was only allowed to get the red embers but I did see the higher ranks carry blue embers. The only embers hotter were the white embers and only two people could handle them, my father and the red pikmin called Pikkamet,the leader of out tribe. They also handled the green and black embers. The beast launched projectiles at me but they missed and blew a nearby clump of trees up.
"Why! Why do you not join our side,we need you to rule the world." shouted the shadow.
"Why would I work with demons like you?"...and I dived off the cliff and my life flashed before my eyes. I welcomed death willingly, it was better than the alternative.
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| - Chapter 5:
-Chapter 5-
*A Dreamy Development
Red:I believe that-
Jade:What?
Red:That thing was not always in here.
*They all looked over an see a crystalline,shiny sword. Red ran over and picked it up.*
Red: Hmmmm? *swings it around and cuts the sides of the artery*
Jade: No!
Pink: *Get's sucked out*
*The rest of them get sucked out and were expelled in a spray of blood.*
Purple: Nasty!
Red: Ugh. *Wipes off blood*
Jade: Let's try to get back to the front of this island.
~~Pearls Group~~~
Oct: *playing hacky sack with a rock*
Silver: *falls asleep*
Pearl: *wakes up* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHAAAHAAAA!!!!!!
Oct: God! What the hell?
Diamond:Yah!!
Oct: Oh my! Look at Silver. He slept through that.
Pearl: I had the worst nightmare.
Bone: Yippy! I'm Gangsta Bone.
Oct:Are you on drugs?
Bone: Pretty colors!
Oct: *Picks up an orange sunflower like plant* Looks like he got high off this.
Bone: *passes out*
Oct: *falls asleep*
Pearl: Don't fall asleep. They creep into your dreams. I just barely survived.
Sapphire: Why is everyone falling asleep? Come to think of it, I feel sleepy too. *falls asleep*
Pearl: No!
~~~~Green's Group~~~~
Green: I believe we have reached the brain.
*They all looked up to see a huge pink-black brain with a crayon stuck in it.
Brass: Wow!! *kicks brain*
SteelRed:Don't do that. *punches brain* Do that.
LightGreen: Well,now what??
Green: I have no idea.
LightGreen: Let's take naps.*falls asleep*
~~LightBlue~~~
LightBlue: Weeeh! *hits head and passes out*
~~~Dream 1~~~
*Oct,Silver and Bone woke up in a metallic compound from earlier.*
Oct: Wah! Where are we?
Silver: I have absolutely no idea.
Bone: Pretty colors went away!
Specter: So we return,Pik Group?
Phantom: We have a new member,now instead of being the Pikmin Three. We are the Pikmin Four. We have some new recruits too. I know you would like to join us. We will take over the world. Muahahahaahahahaha!!!
Bone: Screw you! We will not join you!
Oct: I second that!
Silver: I agree 200%!!
Specter: *pulls out ray gun* I think you be persuaded.
Bone: RUUUUUN!!
Phantom:Yaaaahhhhh! *fires dark energy at Oct but he dodges it*
~~Dream 2~~
*Brass woke up in what looks like a field with edges on it. He was on a mesa?*
Brass: Aaah,nice nap. Hey whats this? *picks up a book*
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Ch-1 Explaining The Sentient Pikmin--
All pikmin are minions and will wait for a leader. Isolated places like and island or a place where a leader has not visited will evolve to live on their own and fare better and are more intelligent than ordinary pikmin as they rely on a leader.A sentient pikmin will also be spawned if so many of a certain color are born.We left a single group of three pikmin on an island separate from the control group,over the course of 1 year,the test pikmin learned how to live on their own. Now we will not have to watch over them any more,but we wil still monitor them. Exposure to radiation or some chemical might yield interesting effects.
Ch-2 Pikmin Tribes--
After two years,we left a huge amount of pikmin on an island and they began to form tribes. For some reason,no tribal warfare happened due to the abundance of resources. Our three Pikmin had merged with another tribe and they we doing great. They got trapped in a Vicium spill. It seems to increase intelligence at a faster rate. The results were positive at the time despite it being an accident. At least that's what the official report says. Either way, it speeds the process.
ch-3 City Stage--
The tribe seemed to have shared the remaining Vicium with the pikmin on the entire island. They all formed into a huge city and moved their onions to it and placed them there. Our first group knows telepathy now and seems to be using it for good. Everything is going smooth. Too bad they have not learned how to speak. I wonder what they may be saying.
Ch-4 Existense/Origins
We have finally figured out how they came to be. Pikmin used to be animal and plant DNA. The blue though had a mysterious mix of sponge and plant DNA. The onions were ordinary plants,with a slight mechanical advantage that spit out seeds; however one of those seeds fused with animal DNA and became a MOBILE SEED. It crawled back up and got in and the onion copied the pikmins DNA instead of a seeds DNA,stopping reproduction. They crawled into the onion they found cozy and safe from he dangers of the night. The onions refined this mix of DNA into the perfect creature. All the onions separated. One onion went into an electric storm and the onion created a rubber compound to protect it and it's seeds,that formed yellow pikmin. The other one on the other hand got caught in a forest fire,making it fire retardant. Something hit the one onion and that sent it into the ocean,it started adapting to an aquatic lifestyle.
New Pikmin species seem to be made by incorporating DNA of other creatures, or even chemicals into their make up. The other colors remain a mystery to science currently. The first onion that produced the other onions but was destroyed on the ground and that sent a warning message to the other ones. They flew out of danger before their destruction came. It then became common for the onions to fly up at night.
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Brass: I should tell the others.
~LightBlue's Dream~~
*Light Blue woke up in a bright room filled with bananas and monkeys.*
LightBlue:WTF?
*The Peanut Butter Jelly Time Banana walked up to him and urges him to sing the song.*
All: Peanut butter jelly time!
Peanut butter jelly time!
Peanut butter jelly time!
Heyya-Heyya=Heya-heya-heyya-
Peanut butter jelly with a baseball bat!
Peanut butter jelly with a baseball bat!
Peanut butter jelly with a baseball bat!
PBJTB: Yaaaaaaaah!!!
LightBlue: Heyyahhayyhayyayah!
PBJTB: Peanut butter jelly time!!
LightBlue:Hayhayhayayhayahayaaa!!
*Darth Vader and Specter hid in the shadows, doing their own little dance*.
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green Tue 03 May 2016, 9:06 pm | |
| - Bonus Post 1:
|Bonus Post 1|
-Enemy Bios-
>Ton Bombell<
This piece of nanotechnology doesn't like to be messed around with. If you try to attack, it will swing it`s spheres at you. This enemy is one robot you don`t want to fight with without some form of armor on.
>Parasitic Pikmin<
This pikmin require a host. It likes to infect the younger creatures because it's easier. It can infect most creatures but some are too hard to control. It buries it`s roots deep into the hosts brain and begins to assume direct control.
>Sea Snagret<
"This thing is a dang scary creature."Between the red eyes,fin,size and pearly whites prepared to devour anything, it is a very menacing beast. "It has dark purple scales which would max out any fear meter.I would recommend avoiding this creature if you can."
>Charred Blaze<
This nanobot is a bouncing bot with a hot temper and hot flames to boot, It spits extremely hot flames out of it's pores. It has a basic spherical shape. "You better stay on this guys good side or you will get charred."
>Shok<
"This guy has an even worse temper than the charred blaze" It is similar to the charred blaze, but instead of flames, it launches out smaller versions of itself. It's attack is like the Titan Dweevil's electrical attack.
>Cuoy Hammer<
"This thing is a mean, green, hammering machine.It has two wheels and a huge hammer which will crush you if you're not careful.You better show it respect or it will beat you to a pulp."
>Bulbarh<
This ancient form of bulborb is nothing but a mindless,green, eating machine. It's been rumored to be able to devour one hundred pikmin in a single bite. It could take six to twelve bomb rocks to the stomach to kill it. They look like an Emperor Bulblax,but on steroids.
>Bulbuks<
Very small bulborbs with a big appetite,they can eat thirty pikmin in one bite. "Those fangs would make even the toughest pikmin quiver in fear."
>AAA Eel<
This thing can deliver a 'one million' volt shock to you when provoked, the only pikmin that could survive it is yellow but alas they cannot swim so the only way to defeat it is with some sort of weapon...
>Frequenzy<
This enemy has a speaker and will hover around causing massive disturbance of the peace. You better have some thick earplugs before you even think of taking it on.
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When creating some of the enemies, I had based some off of Ape Escape enemies since the series had quite a few robotic enemies in it. That's where inspiration for some of the goofier quotes about the enemies came from too. The idea for them to be fighting nanomachines was an original idea though, but many of the nanomachines themselves were based off of random enemies from other games. Parasitic Pikmin though were already from Pikmin.
In Chapter 1/after, I noticed that the fact the Pikmin knew quite a bit despite being recently created,tis the nature of sillier fanfics. But if you wanted a theory,the fact that the Onions transmit or pre-load Pikmin with certain knowledge,or maybe it's the same bunch of Pikmin but with reincarnation.
Kaen_Drought wondered how the Pikmin were sapient despite my blanket "they're special" explanation at the beginning of the fic, so I went slightly more in depth in a response. He also asked the question to axemblue4 in his Adventure of Orange fics.
Here's a list of the readers.
Original(2007): readers were Kaen_Drought, axemblue4, kyle19939,pikmin-blob,BlackFlame208,pikminlord505,and ChronoTrigger99.
EQOG Collection(2010): Had no readers.
EQOG 1.1(2011): readers were ViperStriker2011,fireball6224,zachpikminman,and Thepikminmaster.
EQOG 2(2008): readers were Xephert(Kaen)/Kaen,fierybulborb77,goddard19,pikminlord505,pikminlord1212,ThePikminMaster,axemblue4,elderblackpuddin.
EQOG3(2010): readers were goddard19,salmonella_772,Thepikminmaster,rssp,and tompikmin03
EQOG4 New Lands(2009): readers were goddard19,Salmonella_772,fierybulborb77,Thepikminmaster.
All but EQOG4 and this combo fic were posted in the summer. However besides the Original, and EQOG2, I have not finished any of them,even the previous repost/fixes of them. I have quite a few unfinished fics around the internet.
As for the fics some of them wrote stuff too,so here's some of the Pikmin stuff they wrote too.
axemblue4(Adventure of Orange series,Pikmin 3,Olimar and Louie's Journey to IGN)
kyle19939(Stranded series/The Green Missions)
Thepikminmaster(Pimik series,Battle of the IGN Users,The Proposterous,Peculiar,Outrageous,Amazing Adventures of Little Pik Pik,Pikminasia)
Goddard19(Crobat and Bob,True Adventures of Louie)
pikminpower1212(IGN:Stranded on the pikmin Planet)
ViperStriker2011(Among the Departed series,Adventure of Fourteen Pikmin,Viper User Casted Fic)
Salmonella_772(Starnded 2)
Kaen_Drought(Strandid)
fierybulborb77(Hunt for Titan Dweevil)
pikmin-blob(Battle of the IGN Users,Lamest Pikmin Fanfic Ever)
fireball6224(Firestone,Epic Adventure of 14 Pikmin)
Blackflame208(Eerie Republic Discussion Threads/MU Maker)
ChronoTrigger99(MU Maker)
Though ironically,I don't think the user green111pikminrules ever read it,or ever commented.
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green Tue 03 May 2016, 9:08 pm | |
| From previous attempts at commentary with little added stuff from 2016. - Bonus Post 2:
|Bonus Post 2|
I had written author's notes in Epic Quest of Green 1.1 in 2011. Note, all the bold in the next two quotes are old comments from a few years ago.
Epic Quest of Green 1.1 said:
----Author's Notes Chapter 1-----
-I wrote this 2 months after signing up....
-Note....this was written four years ago...I've fixed some of the mistakes.
-Originally, Olimar was going to have a big involvement
-Doomsday Apparatus was inspiration for the Ton Bombell.
-I understand that Snagrets don't have teeth, but, this was a crazy creation I thought of....
-----Author's Notes Chapter 2-----
-Yeah. I never really explained too much about anything because I wrote this in the summer......and never had a place to
save my fic, so things seem rushed...
-I loved fight scenes...still do...
-I also liked ghosts and thought it'd be cool to have some ghost/darkness pikmin.
-I liked snowy bulborbs, so I made a character bulbmin like one.
-Things are a bit ridiculous and theres pop culture references throughout the fic....
-Orange is one of the few main characters that dies in the first fic.
-----Author's Notes Chapter 3-----
-I remember this....I really went overboard with characters
-But I usually kill of tons anyways...
-I also seemed to give some minor characters a spot light for no real reason.
-Looking back, I was pretty noobish in writing some stuff....
-I played lots of ps1 and ps2 while writing this, so you'll see references...
-----Author's Notes Chapter 4-----
-Ironically, this was one of the chapters I used a different format after someone recommended it...kinda like viper..
-Green and Black..I sorta picked random colors.
-This was a more serious side....and not the last time I used first person and paragraph format.
----Author's Notes Chapter 5------
This chapter was written as a filler at the time
Yes...random and bad...lulz.
But I also had commentary in Epic Quest of Green Collection in 2010.
Epic Quest of Green Collection said:
This fic series is one I wrote a long time ago and I feel like reposting it with a bit of commentary, it was short,but great.It was written when I enjoyed this board the most It actually has many hidden things in it.. As I wrote the second one, the story became darker and more evil. I decided to repost it cause it locked.Bold will be my commentary.
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This was my first chapter. I started out having the three....but then I decided to just kill Orange even though he
was a chosen character.This also involved Olimar being hurt til later. I had fun writing this. I got good feedback from
Kaen,Blackflame,Kyle, Axem and a few others too.When I wrote this, I had no prior skills in writing(never wrote
anything.I experimented a whole bunch and that was what made it so fun.Back then I felt like my fic was up there with Kyles,Axem's and Sarsar's fics. After that, I posted some bios
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Sea Snagret
This thing is a dang scary creature.Between the red eyes,fin,size and pearly whites prepared to eat anything.It has dark
purple scales which would max out any fear meter.I would recomend avoiding this creature if you can.
This I completetly thought of with nothing to base it off of. This was so much fun, encountering a giant enemy at the
beginning of the fic.
Charred Blaze
This nanobot is a bouncing bot with a hot temper and hot flames, It spits super hot flames out of its large pores.It has a spherical shape.You better stay on this guys good side or you will get charred.
I got some of the idea from Ape Escape
Shok
This guy has an even worse temper than the charred blaze, it is like the charred blaze only it launchs out shok spheres
and its attack is like the titan dweevils attack.
Kind of an interesting enemy
Cuoy Hammer-This thing is a mean, green, hammering machine.It has 2 wheels and a huge hammer which will crush you if your not careful.You better show it respect or it will beat you to a pulp.
Yeah, I had some weirder creatures.
Bulbarh
This ancient form of bulborb is nothing but a mindless green eating machine.It can devour 100 pikmin in one bite.It will
take 6 bomb rocks to the stomach to kill it.
Meh, the cliche giant monster of the beginning
Bulbuks
Very small bulborbs with a big stomach,they can eat 30 pikmin in one bite.Those fangs would make even the toughest pikmin quiver in fear.
Based off of some other fics.
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CH 2- The Island of Tranquility
Was such an ironic name for a chaotic chapter
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as Orange is about to deliver the final punch,Green kicks him into the stomach acid.
The most epic kick...lol. My fight scenes are epically long.
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Snowy: Prepare for a bumpy ride* runs up the esoupagous and out the mouth*
Because they totally could have went another way
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Snowy escaped just in time.The coral reef colapased on the snagret, crushing it.
I wanted faster action, so I decided to have a near death fight against a massive beast pretty early...chapter 2 early.
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The bulborb eats a bur and it dies
Lol. That had to be like the most lol moment of this chapter, so out of place, expecting a huge fight and getting that.
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1
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Day 1 is over
A reference to the good ol' gather your pikmin countdown
I enjoyed writing this chapter. Looking back at how old I was when I wrote it, I think I did good. This chapter wouldlead to many more action filled chapters. I mean many writers fill the chapters with fillers but I kept mine going with constant action
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A bio I wrote soon afterwards for the characters. I also allowed my readers to be a part of the story.
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It was true,they could all fit on Snowy because he had grown to a normal snowy bulborb size.They all hop on to Snowy and Snowy walks up a mountain.
Yeah, they grow up so fast.
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Snowy:I feel something deep in my fur.
a purple and white pikmin popped out.
Purple: Sorry.
White: Very sorry.
I have very interesting ways of introducing my characters
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Then a squid like pikmin rose out of Snowy`s fur.
Why do people rise of of snowy's fur?lulz
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Green: Died!
Contains just a shout, like a little kid.....lol
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Silver in EQG1 is a minor character...so far....
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Brass: *kicks Green* Shut up soccer ball!
a very silly scene
Brass:COOOOOOL!*starts bouncing the ball on his knee*
The running joke....
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6 white bulborbs walk into the room.
Actually, in both fics, there are sets of 6 bulborbs.
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Bulborb1: (My names Qye.)
bulborb2: (Mine is Kei.)
Bulborb 3: (Lyn)
Bulborb: (Jylou)
bulborb5: (Sonny)
Bulborb6: (Ytu)
Yeah, I just took names from wherever to put some filler characters to kill
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Snowy touchs the Orange Shard and it goes into him,he glows a bright orange,his eyes turn green,the lava getts a bit hotter and his fur becomes and orange red.The power is so great that it melts the ice bridge and theyall fall into the lava below.
It turned him into a fiery bulbax
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Garnet: *Humming Jack*** tune*
Minor characters make many references to pop culture
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SteelRed: One of the powers of nanobots, teleportation*teleports them all to the creatures island*
At the beginning, he was a filler character, but I developed him a lot into a main one
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Green: We will split up, Me,Emerald,lightgreen,Brass and SteelRed will head up to the brain.Brown,Tan,Bronze,Yellow,Gold,Light Yellow go deeper down.Red,Pink,Ruby,White Purple,and Jade will explore the blood stream. Garnet,Snowy,LightOrange will search the air tubes and lungs.Diamond,Pearl,Sapphire,Bone,Oct,search the outside and the mouth.Silver, go outside with them and do something.Wait finda weapon.
Yeah. My running jokes involve many of these characters....lol too many.
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Yellow:Vote, Who wants us to go down there.
Who knew my fic would forshadow obama in some way
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LightYellow: The Intestines
More toilet humor
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Purple: This is nasty though.
Ironically, the colors matched the situation
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Specter:Ello,you are in meh base*Picks up laser* so get out.
Another Ape Escape Reference
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Pearl:*falls down piece of broken staircase*
Yes, my fics contained a lot of random injuries in them
Phantom: Muhaahhahahahaha!!!
The evil laugh strikes again
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This was the introduction of the rest of my characters and even though most were minor, many returned later as more major characters. This contained a lot of references.
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green Tue 03 May 2016, 9:09 pm | |
| - Chapter 6 & 6 1/2:
-Chapter 6 & Chapter 6 1/2-
*Allegiances
~~~Yellow's Group~~~
Yellow: Now what?
Brown: We... uhhh? I think?
LightYellow: We need something to find.
Tan: Boy! Let's climb up.
*Everyone climbed up,but Yellow tripped on Brown and slid down the tube into the water. Then the water drained down sucking Yellow down with it. *
Brown:Yellow!
~~~Yellow~~~
*Yellow looked for an exit but found none and gave up.*
Yellow: Now what? What is that? *runs over to a yellow crystal sticking out of the ground.*
Yellow: *tries pulling it out* UUUGGHHHHH! *pulls it out*
*The crystal glowed for a few seconds and fused with Yellow. He gained a lightning bolt on his chest and a magnet spawned into his hands. A bracelet appeared onto his wrist. *
Yellow: Cool! *shoots electricity*
Yellow: AWESOME!!! *makes force field*
Yellow: AWESOMER!!!! *Juggles balls of electricity*
~~~Brown's Group~~~
Brown:I found something.
*A battery stuck out of the wall of the stomach and Brown pulled it out. Light Yellow,Tan,and Brown carried it up but Gold stayed there,pulling out a spear like stick and threw it at Light Yellow, killing him. A Light Yellow spirit rose up.*
Tan: What the heck. You are with us.
Gold: Oh! That? I was never on your side! I have always been loyal to the DARK SIDE! *disappears*
Brown: One down.
Tan: Shut up!
Brown: I was just saiyin.
Tan: Well shut up.
~~~Green~~~
SteelRed: Brass?
Green: He's asleep. How many other siblings and family members do you have?
SteelRed: Many. Mostly made of some metal alloy. We are not nanobots.
Green: So who is still alive?
SteelRed: I don't know,we lost most of our family when they raided that day.
Brass: *wakes up* Zinc,Tin, and Tungsten?
SteelRed: They all died except for Zinc.
Green: Zinc?
Brass: He was a cool kid. He played with us a lot when we were very little.
Zinc: *pops up* Hi!
Green: *falls over* You scared me there.
SteelRed: ZINC! How the? Who the?
Zinc: I fell down and escaped through a cave and ended up here.
SteelRed: Oh boy! Can't wait for you to tell the story. *sighs*
Zinc: Hello fellow hero. Green? I've heard of you. Brass? You have grown.
Green: Why are you...?
Zinc: I just got here.
Green: Do you know about the shards?
Zinc: Of course.Do you know? The Titan Jewel broke into many pieces and only the pikmin of that color can activate it. Parasitic Pikmin can touch any shard.
SteelRed: The Shard that is here?
Zinc: Mu! The Golden Shard! It has been absorbed.
Green: You know this how?
Zinc: I am a trained sage and magician. Pianta!
Green: So you can?
Zinc: Do stuff.
SteelRed: I can too. It is not as good, but still useful.
Zinc: *teleports them all to deserted island* See!
~~~Yellow~~~
*Suddenly Gold popped up in front of him.*
Gold: Hey friend.
Yellow: *zaps Gold* Hi!
Gold: You little! *Picks up a stone and tries to kill Yellow*
Yellow: What?
Gold: I am Darkness!!
*Gold punched Yellow only for Yellow to drop kick him. Gold kicked him down and wrestles. Suddenly a Bright,Jewel pikmin appeared in front of them and lifted Gold with telepathy.*
Pikmin: I am Citrine. The Bright Yellow Jewel of the Jewel Clan. Gold! You have betrayed us! How could you?
Gold: I have always been with the DARK.*disappears*
Citrine: Are you ok?
Yellow: Yahh...
Citrine: Good job.
Yellow: What?
Citrine: I guess we can fly up to your friends. *picks up Yellow and flies up to Brown*
Brown: YELLOW!!
Tan: YELLOW!!
Yellow: TAN! BROWN!
Citrine: Citrine!
Yellow: Where's Light Yellow?
Tan: He uhh...
Brown: Got killed by Gold!
Yellow: WHAT!
Citrine: Oh. He has gone way too far. *teleports everyone to the mouth of the beast.*
Yellow: PEARL!
Pearl: Hey Yellow,Brown. Where are Gold and Light Yellow?
Brown: Gold killed Light Yellow and ran away.
Citrine: Yellow? You have absorbed the Yellow Shard correct? Well you have gained the ability of Anodikinisios or the ability to control electricity with the mind.
Yellow: Wow?
Citrine: Wow of course.
Yellow: You speak strange.
Citrine: I understand that. You do correct?
Yellow: ...Yah.
Tan: Cool!
Yellow: I know.
Tan: ...What is this?
Tan picks up what looks like a crystal and it absorbs into him giving him wind powers and for some reason,a set of pilot goggles.
Tan: The Tan Shard?
Citrine: I believe yes Tan. You have the power of aerokinesious or power of wind.
Tan: Wow.Two in one day. What is the Orange Shard?
Citrine: The power of Vulcankiesous.You can control lava.
Tan: Snowy?
~~~Snowy~~~
*Snowy,after a while, had grown a volcano on his back due to the shard's exposure.*
Snowy:Boy it sure is boring around here.
Snowy:I have some beer. 999 beers of bottle on the wall 999 bottles of beer,take one down pass it around 998 bottles of beer on the wall..
~~~Light Orange,Garnet~~~
LightOrange:Weeeeeeeeeee!!!
Garnet:Fun!!
LightOrange:SUPERFUN!!!
~~~Red~~~
Red: Cool! *swings sword*
Jade: *mumbling*
Pink: Shadows!
*Two shadows spawned in front of the group.*
???1: JADE!!!PURPLE!!
Jade: Yes?
Purple: So...sorry guys.
White: How could you? We were friends forever.
Red: You said you wouldn't go to the dark side!
Jade: I can't join a group I'm already with. *goes with Purple and the ???S*
Red: I should kill you Purple.......I will!
*Red ran up to Purple and swung the sword at Purple,slicing his head off,killing him. The ???s knocked down the entire group.*
???2: You inferior little pests! I believe we should kill them.
???1: We don't like Light Pikmin...and your accent creeps me out.
Pink: Ow..that did hurt.
???1:SHUT UP!
Pink:Mean.
???1: Why don't you join us? We would be the only girls on the DARK SIDE.
Jade: Forget me?
???1: You? Oh yeah.
???2: And a few others...we have to be going.
*And in a puff of smoke,Jade, and the two ???s disappeared*
Red:Dangit!!!!They got away!
Pink:they are traitors...and idiots.
Red:.....?
Pink:They left a to do list on the ground.
~~~Outside~~~
Pearl: Uh wake up.
Citrine: Boy my name is absolutely cool.
Yellow: Wait...What about Bronze?
Bronze: *snore*.
~~~Light Blue's Dream~~~~
PB&JTB: *mumbling to self* I hate my job. For the dark side it is ok.
Light Blue: Hey yayayaayyayahayayaahyahya!!!!
Bronze: Hiiii!!!!! With a baseball bat!
Light Blue: Bronze!!
*The Peanut Butter Jelly Time Banana broke open and out came a gray pikmin.*
Gray: Yaaaha!!
Light Blue: *in karate stance* Let's fight!
Gray: *Gets in to fighting stance* Let's kill you.
Bronze: *holding pie* Let's eat pie!
Voice: FIGHT!!!!!!!!
Light Blue: *punches Gray and lifts him up by the arm and snaps his neck. *
Gray: Too short of a fight. You will die.
Bronze: *eating* Want some pie?
Gray: Ok! *grabs a piece of Pi* Yummy.
*Light Blue grabbed a fork and stabbed Gray with it. A Gray spirit floated up into the sky.*
Bronze: What the Yik. He was eating.
LightBlue: Well let's chow down!
Bronze: Yeah! It's only a dream.
~~~Facility Dream~~~
Bone: *Jumps over a spike* AAAAAAHHH!!!
Silver: RUN!!!!!!!
Oct: *jumps away from a dark blast* Ha!!
*The trio made it to a safe haven where no one would find them.*
Oct: Boy! That was scary..
Bone: *catches on fire* Aaaaaahhahahahahaha
Silver: *tries to put fire out*Noooooo!
Oct: Wait a minute.This is a dream. Right?
Bone: *running* Oh yeah.
~~~Outside~~~
Tan:Trying to put the fire out is harder than I thought.
*A white spirit floated away.*
Citrine: How the?
~~~Dark Pikmin Leaders~~~
Black: Man! Where could they be.
Specter: They won't get far in this labyrinth.
Phantom: We must check on Ghoul.
Ghoul: Right here.
Phantom: You are becoming better young one.
*Several shadows came up behind them.*
???3: Gray has been killed.
???2: Purple too.
???4: Jade has joined us.
???5: When do we get to-
Phantom: Soon.
???6: Bone and Light Yellow have been exterminated.
???1: The Shards will be collected,light pikmin will be killed. We also may have the jewels join our side. Metal tribe has been destroyed. Pik City has not yet been conquered, but I'm sure with our power, it will be.
Phantom: We will complete our tasks.
Specter: What about the future pikmin? Not to mention the Shapes of Power.
~~~Flashback......(chapter 6 1/2)~~~
Green and everyone else climbed out of the massive beast.They were out.But,they were confronted by a beast twice the size of an emperor.It was a gray color and had one giant eye with two pikmin inside it. Were they controlling it?
"Oh my god!!!!" screamed Green.
The Beast used it's claw to swipe up Green but instead,knocked him out. Even though it thought he was dead,it did not eat him. Zinc charged up a blast of magic and shot it at the beast. It didn't do anything. Several Pikmin charged at it but died as it stomped on them and ate them.
"I can't believe it!!You will pay!!" screamed SteelRed,pulling out a sword. He ran up to the beast and sliced off an eye stalk and a claw.
"What will we do?"Asked Red."We have to do something"
White was stupid,he ran up to the beast without weapons. We all know what happens next...
Sapphire,Ruby,and Emerald urged the rest to follow them somewhere. Everyone followed except for the combatants. Silver ripped a stick out of the ground,and fashioned it into a spear. He threw it,hitting the creature directly in the eye.
"Kill it"Exclaimed Blue.Blue found a rock and threw it at the beast,then he started to bombard it with a barrage of rocks.
"......What the..." said Yellow in a confused voice. He thought he saw Orange,but Orange was killed,was he not? He dismissed it as a vision and continued fighting.
Red picked up a bomb rock,and lit it on fire.The fire felt a bit warm to him but he threw it and it wounded the beast.He spotted Orange too.
"This will take some high voltage" Yellow started glowing a bright blue, zapped the beast and fell to the ground. "Ow,it drained my powers,ugh"
"Hey,The Crystal Sword!" Red picked up the sword and ran toward the beast with it.The beast was surprisingly scared and started to run away but Red caught up. As he got closer,the beast started to fall apart.
"You will not kill me!" yelled the beast in it's low robotic voice. In a last effort it shot a laser at Red.
The laser hit Red bringing him to the ground. "Ow!"
He watched as the beast ran off."Damn it! It got away!"
Everyone was astonished at how Red scared the beast away, not even noticing the Orange Pikmin and the Glowing Pikmin.
"Well,our work here is done" said the glowing pikmin.
"I will be off on my way to Australia" said the orange pikmin putting on his sunglasses.
"What's Australia?"
"Here is where we depart."
The glowing pikmin disappeared in a flash of light leaving the orange pikmin alone. The orange pikmin walked away and stole a raft on the beach.
"I am going to charge it so that we can get to our next destination" said Zinc. "It will take a long time"
The rest of the pikmin were ready,they played games and talked, but Tan sat over his friends lifeless body.
"I hope you're ok" then he started to tear up at the thought of losing his friend.
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| - Chapter 7 & 8:
-Chapter 7-
Pik City,Here We Come
and
-Chapter 8-
Pik City Mayhem
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Green: *Wakes up* How was I?
Zinc: We are not in danger,you owe me one.I spent a lot of time charging to get us out of danger.For each person,it takes eight minutes of charging for anyone.The Ghost Pikmin,two minutes and Phantom,no time at all.
Green: What happened?
Brass: Well.This big thing attacked us and knocked you out.
SteelRed: It was bigger than the Emperor Bulblax. Most of the group ran away but some were eaten.Cowards.We fight while they run. It brings me pain to know that there are so many cowards.
Green:Who?
Zinc: Only your original group,me,Diamond,SteelRed,Citrine,Brass,Silver, Pink remain.
Green: Waaaaaaaaaa?
Zinc: Well,Light Orange,Garnet,,Bronze,Oct,Light Blue,White were killed by the evil beast.It slurped them all up in one bite.Everyone who took a stand exept for us,were killed. Everyone else was coward a and left us to fight it alone.It saddens me too. With our power,we could have killed it but...but we didn't.
SteelRed: The others died mysteriously in their dreams,or were killed by the defectors
Green: I don't remember?
Zinc: You have amnesia.
Green: This happened?
Brass: In between chapters.
Green: My god,How long was I---
Zinc: Unconscious? Two hours.
SteelRed: Zinc is almost done charging his spell.
Green: Ok.
Zinc: As a tip. Distance is also a factor. It adds more minutes to how long I have to charge.
Green: So it only takes?
Zinc:To transport to Pik City? Like two hours maybe.
Green:Wheres the beast?
Zinc:After Red pulled out the crystal sword,it ran away.It looked like a metallic version of a bulblax.
Green:How about other spells?
Zinc: Depends on what spell and your level.
SteelRed: Done yet?
Zinc: Almost done aaaaaaaand DONE!
Green: Why did they all run away?
Zinc: They said they never fought before and they didn't want to die. They are just sissies and are worthless in our quest. Don't worry,we will make more friends along the trip.
Green: The biggest sissy?
SteelRed: Garnet!
Zinc: I will teleport.Zezezezzz.Metalicyetweeezxxxeee.
*In a bright flash of light, the group vanished. They ended up in a huge city with giant glass buildings that went up to the heavens.The streets were paved with stone. Onions lined the streets. Bubbles were the main mode of transportation. Thousands of pikmin roamed the streets. Many types of flora grew everywhere.*
Green: Waaah? Waaaaah?
Zinc: This is what all pikmin's lives should be like. Not minions, but an independent species.
Pink: Wow.
Blue: My dreams.
Green:WOW!!!
Red: CCCCOOOOOL!
Brass: I want to live here!
SteelRed: What Shard is here?
Zinc: Uh--well? I will check my head to remember. I see a,white one! Two Shards? It seems one shard broke into two. One shard is glowing but the other is...blue?
SteelRed: How can?Wait---That rhymed.
Zinc: A lot of pressure must be applied to a shard to shatter it,like say...powering a city!
Citrine: Don't tell me? The shard is powering a city.
Zinc: Two actually. We would have to take the shard from the---no!We can't do that!
Red: We have no glowing people in our group. Does that mean it will be worthless. I mean,who will get it?
Zinc: I have no idea....
*Suddenly a light circled them and dimmed. A pikmin that was glowing appeared in front of them. It looked futuristic and had a had a glowing leaf too.It was scarred,bruised and had alien eyes.*
Pikmin: I will get the shard! I am Neon,Protector of the Future and I have come back in time to stop the Dark Pikmin from conquering the world. In my future,it is a wasteland. Every single pikmin on the world has been darkened and turned into metal. They began to conquer other worlds after destroying this one. They made the star that gives us light,red and dim. Not enough to give us light,so me and a few other pikmin have evolved a different way of living. We produce light,then absorb that light. If we can stop them in time,my present will not exist and I will not be battered and bruised. Who knows, I might not even exist. And none of my present will have ever happened.This may sound weird but I think that you may even have to go to another planet to do something.
Zinc: I completely understand you and we will stop them no matter what the cost. I will not let Dark pikmin reign. After what they did-
Neon: I have a checklist that I found. It says you must do all the tasks,or be killed. If we don't complete them,Dark Pikmin will reign because we will get killed. We are the only ones who can defeat them.
Silver: Wow.
Neon: Someone in this group will be killed by a falling sphere.
Zinc: I feel like two will get killed.
Brass: Where did Pink and Citrine go?
*Green looked over and sees Citrine and,Pink giving some sort of speech to a crowd of hundreds of pikmin. The building they were in front of had a giant model of the Pikmin Planet on it.*
Green:Uh oh! *runs to the crowd.*
~~~Crowd~~~
Pink: Uh...what should we do?
Citrine: All pikmin should live in peace. No longer shall we be ruled,we govern ourselves.
Crowd: WWWWOOOOOOOOOO!!!
~~~Building Top~~~
???3: Hehehehe.
???4: *unscrewing bolts* If they want to defy darkness,let them perish!
???3:Navy,you are right.
Navy: Don't reveal our names. Olive?
Olive: You revealed my name.What was that for?
Navy: For revealing my name.
Olive: Oh.
Navy: *unscrewing last bolt* D------one!
Both: *pushing on globe*
Olive: I think we can kill even some of the light pikmin with this.
Navy: Where?
*They managed to teeter the globe on the edge of the building but could not push it farther.*
Olive: Tough. *falls over*
Navy: *climbs on globe* I will want to watch the deaths. *places camera on globe* So I will record this.
Olive: *glares*
Navy: Heh, and proof.
Olive: *climbs on* Boy that was cool when we got in that bulborb, controlled it and killed a lot of the light pikmin.
Navy: And scared the rest away.
Olive: Boy,I wish the readers could have seen the epic battle.
Navy: I will kill Green. He was not killed. We must kill him because he is the---
~~~Green~~~
Green: Pink! Citrine!*climbs onto stage* We must get out of here!
Pink:Why?
*The globe fell off the edge and was about to crush them but Green dived and managed to save Pink but Citrine was crushed.*
Pink: Oh my.
Green: Oh no!We must try to warn everyone.
Voice: Light Pikmin will die! AHHAHAAHAHA!!
*The globe then rolled and crushes half the crowd and rolled down the street crushing anything in its path. It also smashed into a few buildings,toppling some. It started to make a course towards Zinc Neon, and the others.*
~~~Pik Group~~~
Neon: *pulls out list*
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1.Escape the Globe
2.Find Olimar
3.Kill 1 Dark Pikmin-Check
4:Kill 2 Dark Pikmin-Check
5.Kill most of the Dark pikmin
6.Get the Red Shard
7.Get the Blue Shard
8:Get the Neon Shard
9.Go to the Pik City Ceremony
10.Complete at least 6 items on this list
11.Complete 10
12.Solve the Pik City Riddle
13.Destroy a building .
14.Meet Phantom
15.Kill a King Bulblax
16.Give Brass a soccer ball-Check
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Zinc: That is it?
*They all stepped into a building,not noticing the rolling globe that passed them.*
Neon: And put a check on escaping the Globe. Also that is not it. I found out that more will be revealed after checking most of that.
Green: What globe?
Neon: The one that fell off that building.
Brass: *Kicks soccer ball out the window* Ok.This is fun!!
Neon: Whaa? Where is Diamond.
~~~DIAMOND~~~
Diamond: *eating pop rock* Yummy.
*The globe smashed into a building and headed toward Diamond,crushing at least hundred pikmin in it's path. It destroyed two buildings and was about to crush him but he stepped out of the way. The rumble from the globe caused the pop rock to to fall in his mouth,choking him.*
Diamond: *gagagagagaga*Help!!! *dies*
~~~Pik Group~~~
Neon: And Diamond died.
Zinc: Yep,by choking on something. Who would've expected that.
Neon: So 2 people were killed by a falling globe.
Zinc: Yes,I believe so.
Green: Are you two brothers? You speak the same. You two do have the same abilities too.
Neon:Well.I am not related to him in any way but I may be a descendant of......
Green: Who?
Red: No way?
SteelRed: Yes way.
Yellow: He is a descendant of someone here. Awesome! It's probably me.
Blue: ME!!!!!!!
Brass: Mememememememeeeeee!!!!
Neon: Let us quit chatting about this.
Zinc: He knows it's.........ME!
SteelRed: Me?
Neon: Maybe I should kill one of you.If you were my ancestor,I would disappear.
Green: Not that far.
Red: Kill Blue first.
Blue: What? Why me?
*Everyone stepped outside to see a huge path of destruction left by the globe. There were only a few pikmin wandering the damaged streets but everywhere else was bustling like nothing happened.*
Neon: Let's walk to the center of the city to check the damages...and get the Blue and "Neon" shard. Only three Shards to collect. That's easy.
Green: Wait! How about my Shard?
Neon: I forgot about yours.
SteelRed: I need a Shard.
Zinc: Wait. Don't we have something?
Neon: Well,you guys died before you collected it in my reality,so you guys have to live to collect them.
Zinc: What?
Neon: The...I'll tell you later. Right now,we have to collect the Shards,time to walk to the central power grid.
SteelRed: We are going to get there soon.
Zinc: Man,I am hungry.
Neon: Food?
Tan: *blowing over cars*I'm good.
Neon: Halfway there.We take both shards.
Zinc: You aren't even thinking of what will happen if you take the shards,are you?
Neon: It's either the city,or the world.
Zinc: What are the Shards belong to?
Yellow: All your base are belong to us.
Neon: The Great Jewel. We must put it back together. The Other Jewel has shattered too. It's on another part of the world though.
Yellow:Where?
Neon: A place called Australia.
Green: The Other Jewel?
Neon: It is made of Metal and is less powerful than the other jewel.
Green: I'm bored. We'll have to collect the other shards too. Right?
Neon: We can't let them get the other shards.
Green: No we can't!
Blue:So when do we get the other jewel? After we get these shards?
Neon: We need to get the Shapes of Power.
All: .../...
Neon:They are also something we must get. The few are The pyramid,cube, and sphere.There are a few others but we can collect them later.
Zinc: 3/4 of the way there! Why has it been so easy to get these shards?
Neon:Same here.It's probably a trap. They could try to drain us of power after we get the jewels. Not likely. We will kill them. *picks up a piece of candy and a ruby* Boy is it my lucky day or what?
LATER......................
~~~PIK CITY~~~
Green: Ok
Neon: I am your...
Green: Father..?
Neon: How the .... could I be your father,I'm your great grandchild.
Green: ?????
Neon: I'll explain later but now, two new things have been revealed on the list.
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1.Escape the Globe-Check
2.Find Olimar
3.Kill 1 Dark Pikmin-Check
4:Kill 2 Dark Pikmin-Check
5.Kill most of the Dark pikmin
6.Get the Red Shard
7.Get the Blue Shard
8:Get the Neon Shard
9.Go to the Pik City Ceremony
10.Complete at least 6 items on this list
11.Complete 10
12.Solve the Pik City Riddle
13.Destroy a building . Check
14.Meet Phantom Check
15.Kill a King Bulblax
16.Give Brass a soccer ball-Check
17:Meet Red Beak
18.Give Big Pik Head Statue gum.
19.Find Pikeroni.
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Green:Who is Pikeroni and Sergeant Snagret?
Tan:Hey guys! I found the Blue Shard.
Blue: *picks up shard* Hey how does this work? *throws at wall*
*The Shard hit the wall and absorbed into Blue,turning him into a puddle. The puddle rose up and reformed into Blue.*
Red: Holy Yik.
Tan: Big Thing.
Green: Wheres the Neon Shard? Or is it the White Shard?
Neon: In there,in the power grid. Check off,Get Blue Shard.
They all looked over to see a small hole in a building. they walked in and saw thousands of wires and lights inside.Yellow touched one of the wires and it gave him a shock.Yellow looked to his right and saw bright blue colored yellow pikmin. The high voltage required these special yellows to work on them. The normal yellows could not handle them with out injury.An anode dweevil walked inside and one of the special pikmin mounted it,riding it around the big core.The big core had a huge ball of electricity inside it.Neon looked closer and saw the Shard inside. It looked like it would crack under the gigawatts traveling through it but it held firmly inside.A bright blue,yellow walked over to them and stood there.
BrightPikmin: I am Shock,I am a glower. Glowers are just pikmin specified to work in these conditions. I am the leader of this operation. What is your business here?
Neon: We need the Shard.
Shock: You mean the Giga Jewel?Never,this is what power our city.
Neon: But we need it or the world will be destroyed.
Sock: We can work something out,you find something that produces enough power,we'll talk.
Neon: Ok....*snicker* Sock!
Shock: Hey,he spelled my name wrong! Curse you!
Green: Ok, *pulls out ruby.* Will this work?
Shock: *eyes enlarged* You found the Terrawatt Jewel.
Green: Whaaa?
Shock: Watch this *touches the Ruby and it glows and produces an electric field*
Neon: So can we have our Shard?
Shock: Get the Giga-Jewel Out! I found the Terrawatt Jewel.
*The Glowers pulled out the Neon Shard and put in the Jewel but the carriers of the Neon Shard got attacked by a bulborb and were eaten. The Neon Shard fell onto a dweevil,which then carried on it's back. Suddenly the walls crumbled and pikavores stormed the place. All common foes except the Snagrets were present in this raid. The enemies stormed the place but the Snagrets. A Pikmin shadow stepped in with pikavore following it.*
Pikmin: HAahahha. Finally! All will shout the name Pikeroni!
Neon: *whispering to Green* I thought that was macaroni for pikmin?
Green: It is. Who names their kid after a food?
Pikeroni: Silence!!! Dweevil bring me the Righteous Gem of Power.
*The Dweevil with the Shard carried it over to Pikeroni.He stuffed it in the bloysters flower,mounted a bulborb and rode off with the pikavores in tow.*
Neon: What just happened?
~~~Base~~~
*Phantom was watching a video of the attack on the core. He couldn't rewind it but he thought about it. A new enemy perhaps?*
Phantom: What the....well at least Navy and Olive did their jobs. Now Maroon has to travel and get the next shard. Actually,that is the last shard,I think I'll send everyone there. I may even go there myself.
Specter: The transformation is complete. Ghoul is ready.
Phantom: Good,very good.
Black: Hey,we have a new enemy to deal with.
~~~Pik Group~~~
Green: I can't believe it,no fight.
Shock: Wow.
Zinc: That was lame. We didn't do anything.
Green: Neon,where is the next shard?
Red: I want my pyro.
Neon: Well we need to get two shards,Neon and Red. The Red Shard is on the big grassland island. Savannas are they called?
Blue: Zinc?
Zinc:No,I am not teleporting,that last time drained my energy. Let's take a boat or something. No,I am not teleporting to the docks. Let's take that contraption,over there.
*They all walk over to where Zinc pointed but saw nothing.Then,what looked like a pill,pulled up on the tracks.They all stepped in. Zinc read the sign and it said "To the docks". The part of the city they were in had very steep hills and a building that looked like a UFO on a stick. Zinc finally remembered that he had left SteelRed on the top of the city.*
Zinc: Uh oh,we forgot SteelRed.
Neon: He can handle himself. Oh and I sent Shock to the Pik Ceremony,so check that off our list.
Brass: Big bro? Soccer ball? Caffeine?
Green: Give him some thing caffeinated.
Red: I don't think Steel is in trouble.
~~~SteelRed~~~
SteelRed:When I get my hand on them...
*Suddenly a helicopter like machine flew down and a Mamuta stepped out and grabbed SteelRed.They got in the helicopter and flew up high in the sky.*
Mamuta: I'm going to call you Fluffy.You're my new pet.
SteelRed: Not anymore.*struggles but fails.*
Mamuta: *gives SteelRed book* Here you go,here are my last pets.
SteelRed: *opens book and sees that all the other pikmin committed suicide*
Mamuta: Well,at least Mamutas didn't join Pikeroni. He's mean.
SteelRed: Ugh.
Mamuta: We'll kill them,not you.
SteelRed got out of the Mamuta's grip,grabbed a board shaped piece of metal and jumped out of the helicopter.Thinking he would die but instead he began a downhill boarding trip that he could not stop. He skated down,did an ollie of trash cans and jumped over vehicles that were in his way and made his way around the first turn.He almost crashed but he jumped over five cars by using a vehicle carrier as a ramp. Around the second turn,he grabbed a light pole and used it to swing himself around the turn. He went through a pane of glass and a hot dog vendor. Now covered in glass and eating a hot dog,he continued the race down the hill. On the third turn he crashed through a store and burst out the other end of the store. Several police vehicles started to chase him but one wiped out. Four were still chasing him though. At an intersection he slipped between two cars and left the intersection in ruins.
On his way down he spotted behind him the globe, it smashed through the building behind him and he now had to escape it. On the next turn he lost it for a minute and it smashed through several building and began chasing him again. Only a few meters from the docks, he went through a gas station,as did the globe,with disaster inducing results. The globe caught on fire after destroying the gas station. Near the dock, he made a turn and stopped but the globe flew off the docks and flew into an oil carrier,blowing up half the docks.
SteelRed: Well,that was...awesome! I'm never this happy.
~~~Green's Group~~~
Green: Uh yeah,I bet he's ok.
Blue: We are at the docks.
Yellow: Pik City Riddle Test Sign.
Green: It says,I grow when you feed me but die when you water me,what am I?
Red: I dunno.
SteelRed: *runs in* Hi.
Neon: See,he can take care of himself.
*They all skipped the sign and went over to what looked like a pirate ship that was full of Snagrets.They were scared to get on but it said,looking for the Red shard,so they got on. The Snagrets wore badges and sailor uniforms.The flags had a snagret face with bones and flames around them though.*
Neon: Hello.We are looking for the Red shard.
Snagret1: Arg,so you be wantin the Red shard? You weak pikmin.
Green: Will you eat us?
Snagret2: You caught our eye as a mighty fine appetizer but we got bigger fish to eat.
*A Snagret with a beard and dressed in a captains outfit rose out of the ships floor.He had many badges and many types of rare items on him. His beak was a crimson color*
Snagret3: Shiver me timbers. Who be these swashbucklers?
Green: We are,uhh,we don't got a name but we need your help to save the world. Who are you?
Snagret3: I be Red Beak,fiercest pirate in the seas. Everyone on this ship but you be my crew.We be trying to pull the beauty red jewel out of the ground but it not be working.You look like a nice snack. My cook never cook anything good.So you'll be a mighty fine dinner.
Red: Wait!!! I know how to get it.
*Several snagret that were about to eat him stopped and listened.*
RedBeak: Don't eat em mateys. They may know a secret.
Yellow:hey!I know the answer to the Pik City Riddle.Non Blue pikmin!!!
*The sign shot a cookie at Yellow and he ate it.*
Red: Hey I want a cookie.
Yellow: *munching on cookie* No.
Red: But it's fire. Fire works too. *gets cookie*
Neon: Solve riddle,check. Meet Red Beak,check.
RedBeak: Hey let me look at the list.
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1.Escape the Globe Check
2.Find Olimar
3.Kill 1 Dark Pikmin-Check
4:Kill 2 Dark Pikmin-Check
5.Kill most of the Dark pikmin
6.Get the Red Shard
7.Get the Blue Shard ,check
8:Get the Neon Shard
9.Go to the Pik City Cermony ,check
10.Complete at least 6 items on this list,check
11.Complete 10 ,Check
12.Solve the Pik City Riddle ,check
13.Destroy a building . Check
14.Meet Phantom
15.Kill a King Bulblax
16.Give Brass a soccer ball-Check
17:Meet Red Beak.Check
18.Give Big Pik Head Statue,gum.
19.Find Pikeroni.Check
20:Get cookie.Check
21:Milestone completed.Check
22:Reach Australia
23.Travel Back in time.
24:Catch a fish.
25.get seasick.
26.cook.
27.find fruits.
28.Make a huge Party in Australia.
29.Defeat the Mamutas.
30: Play Simon Says.
31.Win Simon says.
32:Find treasure.
33.Hatch the Egg.
34.Go to Xalure.(Another Planet)
35.build a boat.
36.Find the natives of Austriala.
37.Dicover the Hidden Steel Tribe.
38.Find Copper
39.Create a paradox.
40.Find Tin and his brother.
41.Learn Bublorb Language
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RedBeak: Seems like you gunna have to be doin alot a work.
Red: Why is your beak red?
RedBeak: The blood of my enemies.
Green: Wow Neon,it does reveal objectives on it's own.
RedBeak: Next area to travel,Land of the Falls.
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| - Chapter 9:
Chapter 9
*Olimar's New Lands
At dawn after hours of sleep,Green woke up and looked out at the clear blue sky. There were no clouds ; it was a great day. He saw a strange snagret. It was gold, it had a silver beak, and was right next to Red Beak. It was chirping erratically, but Red Beak could surprisingly understand it.
Meanwhile...
Red was on the other side of the ship. He was throwing up so much,it was surprising he was still up and at 'em. Yellow put his hand on Red's shoulder and gave him a shock.
"Ow!!"exclaimed Red, "That really hurt."
Yellow apologized to Red, and gave him some sugar from a cup. Red ate it and felt better; the sugar had cleared his system. The science behind that remains a mystery. Yellow wandered down into the room of nectars. He grabbed a blue nectar and guzzled it down, not knowing it's effects. His skin tinged and he felt a burning sensation across his entire body. He felt like his spirit would leave his body if it wasn't held down by his will to live.
"Hey Yellow!" yelled Blue."Are you Ok?" He ran down and got a white nectar and dumped it down Yellow's –now scorching – mouth. Yellow's sensation disappeared. He thanked Blue, and quickly ran out of the room. Blue was relieved, and he drank a red spray.
Olimar-
New Lands Log-Day 1
...It was an ordinary day; it was sunny, and the ship rambled on about nothing like usual. As I got the Red,Blue, and Yellow pikmin out of the onion, I noticed that the grass was miles high ; and it was a straw-like color. I noticed the temperature was steamy, and the ground was dry and cracked. The ground craved for water, but I had none. The pikmin looked like they were having trouble breathing for some reason. I saw new creatures, the bulborbs here were a golden color; the dweevils were a greenish color, I also saw sheargrubs, but the females were tan. Why? Was it because of the extra sunlight that reached this land? The ship had requested to visit a new area after I woke up and so I agreed.
I am glad I said yes; it was a beautiful land. I wondered if there were pikmin here for a long time; but after I stepped out of the grass, I found 3 onions. They were saturated, but resembled the original onions. One was a khaki color,one was a denim like color, and one was a light red color .I was intrigued when several pikmin of each color walked in with a pellet. I ran over to them. They were a bit frightened when they saw me, but they soon became accustomed to my presence. They saw the other pikmin, so they knew I was good.
They hummed an odd theme(Sonic) as if they were from a different planet , but they were pikmin. I sat there and thought about taking my suit off because of the terrain. I guessed at why my pikmin had trouble breathing. They were weaker so it must've been the air. Was it thinner? That was one solution, but I also thought about other solutions.
As it got dark,the pikmin ran to the onions by themselves. I wanted to follow, but I stayed and brought my pikmin home(Onion). As we flew up, I noticed that they didn't fly up, but hovered up and hid on the grass tops.
End of day 1.
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green Tue 03 May 2016, 9:12 pm | |
| - Bonus Post 3:
|Bonus Post 3|
Time for some information on the last bunch of chapters.
Chapter 2: Even though Orange was going to be more of a main character, he dies at the beginning, but there is a chance that death was not the end of Orange. The goo turning Orange and other beings into synthetic creatures was not unlike the Husks in Mass Effect, that and the phrase "kill all organics". It's a funny coincidence.
Snowy was a hairy bulbmin, a pikmin type I had created. It's weird that despite finding bulbmin in cold areas, there's only red bulbmin, no orange,fiery,black or hairy/snowy ones. Maybe even whiptongue bulbmin with Pikmin 3 now.
The Rainbow Jewel sounded a lot like the Master Emerald. Each one gives the right pikmin telekinetic powers related to their immunity.
Second chapter, and we have a giant monster fight. From a human's point of view, I suppose it would look like an animal fighting ants. A Shadow of the Colossus like fight. Their raft was just a small piece of driftwood. Burs in real life are those annoying spiny balls that stick to your clothes, but from a Pikmin point of view, they would be giant spike balls of death.
Chapter 3: I'm sure bulborbs probably grow fast, but Snowy reached a larger size in about a day. That's where new Pikmin rose up out of his fur. What more secret could be hiding within his fur? Unlike Purple and White,Oct was a squid like pikmin creation made by Kaen_Drought/Xephert. I added in the hentai joke recently. They soon encountered a group of lightly colored pikmin, as well as gem pikmin, and three metallic Pikmin. I was going to call him SteelBlue, but I thought, if there's a SteelBlue,why not a SteelRed? Having a bulbmin absorb a shard was an interesting idea,but it worked seeing as they're immune to every element.
The 'baby' snagret that ate them earlier was a young one. Dexter, was much like the "Mother of All Thresher Maws",or Terramorphous(Thresher), but stuck. But,it was interesting to have Pikmin running around in a creature's body. The dream ended with a dream that had the introduction of the bad guys, the Ghost Pikmin aka Dark Pikmin. I added a few lines recently, "My greatest enemy,stairs." is a reference to salmonella_772's sig"Ah, my old enemy- STAIRS"
Chapter 4: I thought I'd try the suggestion of writing in paragraph,first person form. I added "those words were a lie" recently. It provided a bit of a backstory of the Steel tribe, and the backstory of Copper, the elder brother of SteelRed and Brass. The white embers used to be black and green as the hottest, but I decided to switch things around. I was pretty happy with the results at the time.
Chapter 5: The Ghost Pikmin began to attack people in their dreams. Green's group is caught in the middle of a conflict between Light,Gem,and Steel Pikmin,and the Ghost/Dark Pikmin and their robot army. Bone and Oct are some other kind. They become more involved in it as the story continues. Anyways, the Ghostmin attacked the group via the dreams, from sillier ones, to nightmares; intending to kill them in their dreams. Many of them begin to fall asleep for an unknown reason while hunting through the creature.
The book is a mysterious log that explains the origin of the Pikmin. Whoever left it or wrote it is unknown. I added/modified a few things recently on the story. In LB's dream, I added "*Darth Vader and Specter hid in the shadows, doing their own little dance*." based on Pikmin-blob and Kaen's comments on what his dream could mean, and they said it would be them trying to bring him to the dark side.
I noticed that IGN automatically turned one of the ":"s into a smiley, damn you IGN. That's what happened to the original/1.1/Collection but with many more. It did in Chapter 6 too.
Chapter 6: This was a longer chapter. I had a few Pikmin betray their comrades in this chapter. Gold is a Dark/Regular/Steel/Gem Pikmin all in one character. Citrine was meant to be the true jewel counterpart to yellow. Pearl, Garnet, all we need is Amethyst...AND STEVEN. Snowy's volcano reminded me of a certain Pokemon. Red ends up with the Crystal Sword, which was a joke/made up item in the last chapter but turned out to be real. *Grabs a piece of "Pi",breaks the universe.*. The Shapes of Power, the list of artifacts kept growing.
Chapter 6 1/2: I actually wrote this after chapters 7 and 8, and it was meant to fill in the gap about the "epic" fight that lead Green to be knocked out between Chapters 6 and 7. Many of the remaining Pikmin left the original group and Steel and a few lights to fight the beast. The Orange has sunglasses from Kaen's suggestion. The pikmin Unlike the glowing pikmin the orange one just steals a boat and leaves. I used paragraph format this time, and it seems to work for flashbacks.
Chapter 7: The beginning of the chapter reveals which Pikmin died, and which ones fled. The Steel tribe was, a much a warrior wizard race. Pik City was a futuristic city, the bubble vehicles in my head looked just like the ones in Jurassic World recently. The magic checklist was based off the ever growing lists in other fics. The giant globe falling off the building and rolling down the street causing damage...when I played Saints Row 3, a scene like that happened.
It didn't take too long for a time traveler to show up. The white shard ended up becoming a neon shard. I mentioned another 'metal' jewel but I don't think it'd be one if it were metal. Sergeant Snagret, I have no idea who that was since it's not listed anywhere. Blue turned out like Chaos. Pikeroni was a third party that was unrelated to the conflict. Similar to some of Goddard's characters that could command Pikavores.
Chapter 8: I thought of the mamuta as a crime boss kind of person. The whole out skating the giant globe of doom, and the cops was reminiscent of Sonic Adventure 2. Originally the Pik City riddles answer was non-blue pikmin,but Kaen mentioned "fire" as an answer too,so I just now added that part. They encounter a group of Snagret pirates. Blackflame theorized the Snagrets and Mamutas don't follow Pikeroni because they're too intelligent. It has everything,robots, ghosts, giant monsters,monster wrangler,warriors/ninjas/magic users,time traveler,a mafia,and even pirates.
Chapter 9: This chapter was proofread by Kaen, and on the repost, I used the final version. The chapter was a short one, just the group on the pirate ship...but also the return of Olimar, and this time from his perspective. This time in a sunnier place, after he recovered from his injuries in Chapter 1. Another non-script format chapter.
Quite a lot happened in the first nine chapters, and some stuff I didn't get back to until the next fic, or at all. If I write a three, I'll have to tie up some loose ends,if there are any. Thinking of the amount that happens,it probably could've been many more chapters but I'm very brief in my style of writing. For EQOG1, there are just a few more chapters to go. The final chapter might be redone a bit to improve it.
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green Tue 03 May 2016, 9:15 pm | |
| - Chapter 10.1:
-Chapter 10.1-
The Time Pikmin
After four long,hard, grueling days of riding on a ship,land was in sight. How good it felt to them to finally see
"Well,land is in sight."said Green in a relieved voice. "How good it will feel."
"Argh,there be a storm headin our way" stressed Red Beak. "You being wantin to sail.Now you will experience ye first ever storm."
Meanwhile.......
In the grasslands of Australia, two lone pikmin were searching for a pellet.
"What are we going to do?"inquired Khaki.
"Don't worry." said Denim,calming Khaki down. "We will find food."
"Are you sure?"
"Most definitely."
A light flashed in front of them,it blinded them. A pikmin stepped out of the light with a scepter that had a clock on it and an hourglass.
"Crikey!"
~~~....A while earlier in Antarctica...~~~
A pikmin wandered aimlessly across the tundra alone. No friends, no anything. His name was Azure.
"Will I ever find home?" he said in a scared voice.
A bright light appeared in front of him, a pikmin threw an hourglass and a scepter at him. It nodded it's head and went away.
"That was odd..."
He looked down at the items given to him.
"What in the living yoinks am I supposed to do with these stuff? Who are you? Why did you give me these?" he asked,but his questions fell on deaf ears.
~~~...Back to the future...~~~
"Ello, dear pikmin. What are you doing on a day such as this?" Azure asked.
"Uh,searching for food." said Khaki. "And quit acting so happy"
"You speak strange mate." said Denim.
"I know that. From my perspective, it's you who speaks strange " replied Azure.
"Where are you from?"
"Down in the poles."
"Crikey mate! We're down south but not down that far."
"I have been granted the privilege of being a Time Pikmin."
"A what?"
"A time pikmin."
"You mean you...control time?"
"Correctimundo."
"Can we come?"
"Of course, this will be a jolly trip."
With a wave of his scepter and a snap at his hourglass,they disappeared.
~~~Redbeak's Ship...~~~
....At the ship, a horrible storm was destroying the ship..
"Oh no!!!!" screamed Green as he fell of the ship.
"I cannot let you die!!!" yelled Neon as he jumped into the choppy waters.
"Green?" asked Tan in a worried voice. A wave soon swept Tan overboard.
~~~Tan....~~~
"Help!!!" said Tan in a gurgling voice. A dark blue shadow saved him before he drowned.
"Quiet you light pikmin!" commanded the shadow.
~~~Azure,Khaki and Denim...~~~
"We must save these heroes." Azure said in a distressed voice.
"We can't go..." said Khaki. "We can't swim."
"Then I must save them myself." and saying that, Azure flew into a portal.
'Don't worry heroes,I've to save you now' thought Azure.
Green and Neon were about to die when they felt Azure pull them out of the water and into a room filled with clocks,screens showing time periods, and various other time related things.
This place...was it the fourth dimension known as time?
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green Tue 03 May 2016, 9:16 pm | |
| - Chapter 11:Finale:
Chapter 11
Season Finale
~~~Tan~~~
Tan: Ow.
*He moaned and groaned in pain before the shadow put his hand over his mouth*
???1: Shut up!
Tan: Who are you?
???1: Shut up I said! We need to revert you to the dark side like me.
Tan: Wait, you remind me of the metal tribe...like SteelRed...are you-?
???1: They said that the armor and new skin would keep that a secret. No matter,you won't remember anything.
Tan: I can't believe it! Why?!
???1: They opened my eyes, I was living as a lower being. They're the next step in Pikmin evolution...I'm part of it.
Tan: No! You're just evil, but you can turn back.
???1: But that's the thing, I don't want to.
Tan: Should we call you Darth-
???1: Shut up!
*???1 knocked Tan unconscious in a single blow to the head.*
~~~Time Station~~~
Azure: Green? Neon? Are you ok?
Green: Uh yeah.
Neon: Sure whatever.
Khaki: Hey Neon.
Denim: Green?
Green: Clocks.
Azure: I found something while delving through time.
*Azure pulled out a neon colored seed. Then pulled out a neon shard before Pikeroni stole it. The Shard went into the seed.*
Neon: How in the- What the?
Azure: This is you.
Green: ????
*Azure put it in the ground and plucked it,a young,small, big headed Neon came out.The young Neon uttered a few words in a child like manner.*
Neon: What the? What happens if I touch myself?
Azure: Nothing. I think. You could turn into a ball of goo and disolve out of existance but probably nothing. Your younger self is getting bored so go play with yourself.
Neon: What!?
Green: He means to go play with your YOUNGER self,not what you are thinking of.
YNeon: Hi. Are you my Daddy?
Neon: No,I'm you.
YNeon: How could you be me? I'm me. My head hurts. Can I ride on you?
Neon: Sure,get on my shoulders.
*Young Neon got on Neon's shoulders.*
Green: Ok, I am really messed up here. How can two of the same-
Azure: Well we have to team up with our baby selves to fight the mushroom army. Bowser won't be happy.
Green: Wrong game. Besides doesn't this make a paradox?
Azure: Paradox Smaradox.
Neon: What happened to you Snowy Bulborb friend?
Green: Uh oh. We forgot him.
*Azure pulled out Orange from an unknown location*
Orange: ...
Green: That's not our bulbmin friend.
Azure: I love creating paradoxes.
*Orange looked at him with his sunglasses eyes.*
Azure: You didn't see the battle. *grabs Orange and throws him into a battle.*
Azure: I suppose I'm abusing my power,aren't I?
Green: But he died I saw it.
Azure: See? We can create paradoxes.*dodododododododo*. But,he is not a paradox. He just survived whatever you saw.
Green: Enough! *grabs scepter and hourglass*
Azure: Don't let the things touch. It could destroy part of realty,like gravity or something.
Green: Here. Can you stop?
Azure: Yes. I can. But I won't.
~~~LIME~~~
In a far far away land of high mountains,a bright green pikmin was about to finish climbing a tall mountain to get a...pellet.
His name..........
LIME!
Lime: Oh boy pellet!!!!!!!!!!!
Lime: I need pellet!!!!
*Lime grabbed the edge of a cliff and grab for the pellet. He fell. The pellet followed. He hugged the pellet.*
Lime: Pellet.I got you.
*He fell through a slab of ice and caused it to cause a glacier to fall. On the other mountain,a glacier was also sliding down the mountain.*
Lime: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!!!!!!!
*He slid between the two glaciers using the pellet as a sled. He got to the end where he was squeezed but instead of being crushed,he flew out at lightning fast speeds. He went into a portal.*
~~~Time Station~~~
Green: Well,now will you...
*A pikmin riding a pellet flew in and bounced around the room destroying everything. The pikmin flew into a portal leading to an ancient time.*
Neon: What the...
Green: Yaaah,What the......
Azure: I shall send you,Khaki and Denim to your friends. Young Neon, uh you have to go home.
Young Neon: Why? Ok.
*Azure put Young Neon into a portal back to his time.*
Azure: As for you.
Neon: It is urgent that we get back to our own time.
Azure: It's not urgent, we have all the time in the world my friend. You should know that.
Green: Before we go,how come everyone knew how to use the powers as soon as they got them?
Azure: Because they're the heroes and the heroes always know.
Green: ...
Azure: For the plot?
Green: Fair enough.
Neon: We have to go, our friends need us.
*All but Azure stepped through the portal.*
Azuyre: Bye,my friends.
Aracune: aAazurrReEe!
Azure: Not you again.
~~~Beach~~~
*Green and the rest ended up on a beach. They saw a red shard; everyone was trying to pull it out.*
RedBeak: Arg! Harder.
*Red touched the shard,it rose out of the rock and travels into Red's body*
Red: *Makes a fire shield* We'll never lose.
*Neon,now having the shard of light,could control the light around him,and became pure energy. The ball of light flew around and bounced off walls,finally reformed into Neon*
Green: Though me,Brass,SteelRed,Silver,Pink, and.....
*They heard a rumble and saw a fleet of balloons and airships flying overhead. They were full of Mamutas. One ship had a machine on it.*
Green:Ugh.A battle.
SteelRed: Hurray, a battle!
*Out of the trees came Pikeroni and his Pikavore army.*
Pikeroni:I don't know how you did it but you got my shard. So I'm going to make this a three way battle. I challenge you to a Shaolin showdown!
Pink: Huh?
*The mamutas used a machine that vacuumed the shards out of the Pikmin. The shards reformed to make one giant jewel in the center. Ladders came down and mamutas came down the ladders,ready to fight. The leader arrived in a red carpet fashion.*
MamutaLeader: I am DonMuta. We need the jewels so we can plant all over the world. MUHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Pikeroni: How is that evil?
DonMuta: Because once we plant everything. It will look pretty.
Green: *falls down laughing*
DonMuta: Want to see my true power?
*DonMuta went to bury Brass but SteelRed jumped in the way and prevented it but got buried himself. He was plucked by the other Pikmin*
Yellow: How dare you mildly inconvenience us!
*Then several nanobots came out of the trees. They were soon followed by a giant metal bulborb and hundreds of nanobots. The Fearsome Four stepped out with dark pikmin following.*
Phantom: Let's make this a foursome.
*They saw how large he was,he was twice the size of and ordinary pikmin, and was covered in thorns. His leaf was a carnivorous plant. His eyes,red. They couldn't tell if he had armor on or if he was just a cyborg. Specter was there as well,holding Tan by the neck.*
Black: Greetings
Jade: Grrrrrrr.
*The rest of the shadows uncloaked and revealed themselves.*
Navy: I am Navy
Maroon: I am Maroon
Olive: Olive.
Magenta: Yeah...
Teal: HAHAHAHAHAAHA...I'm evil, right guys?
Gold: Yeah..
Phantom: We stand for evil.
Specter: We fight for Dark.
Copper: We get really cool weapons.
Black: We eat donuts..
Wine: I am-
Black: Go back to your story.
*Two more pikmin walked in.*
Sepia: Hi.
Bistre: Hi.
Red: They look alike.....It's freaky aaaaaaaaahahaha.
Phantom: I have the jewel,so anyone who wants a quick death fight me. Otherwise,just run away!
Yellow: No you run away.
Silver: We are powerless against this large of an army.
Green: Don't give up just yet.
Sepia: We like-
Bistre: -to talk-
Sepia: -like this.
Pink: They creep me out. They finish each others sentences.
Redbeak: As someone in my past once said, it seems we are at an impasse.
Pikeroni: What if the three of us team up and take it for ourselves?
DonMuta: I refuse to work for you.
RedBeak: Arg, I decline yeeh offer as well.
Red: But you were on our side.
RedBeak: Lad, I never said I was.
Green:
*A large,empty circle was around where the red shard used to be. There was chatter amongst the factions,but it got silent once a ghostly line formed around it.*
Phantom: Ghoul,it's time for you to prove yourself.
Ghoul: ...
Phantom: Nobody interfere.
Ghoul: I will master.
Phantom: You're going to kill off the remnant of the Steel Tribe.
Ghoul: *turns his arm into a sword* Yes master. Who?
Phantom: Those are the ones. *points at Brass,SteelRed,Silver and Zinc*
*Ghoul lunged at the group only for SteelRed to clash swords with him. The two locked eyes, but SteelRed could see nothing under the mask of his opponent. SteelRed jumped up to slash at his opponent only to vanish and appear behind him. He stabbed Ghoul in the back, but Ghoul only looked at him and smirked. To SteelRed's surprise, his enemy teleported too. The crowd watched intently, now interested in this feud but also not wanting to interfere. SteelRed looked around to find the ghost pikmin but he seemed to be gone. A mamuta was watching, until he started to look sick. Ghoul burst out of his body leaving a dead body behind, and the crowd shocked.
*Zinc joined in on the battle with Silver, but Ghoul seemed to hold them off. Despite it being three against one, he still held his ground. He dodged their attacks, and lunged at Brass...but he stopped. This gave SteelRed time to slice at his face, but it only cracked the mask. He lunged again at Brass only to stop again,just staring.
SteelRed: No! He's my brother!
Ghoul: He's my brother too.
SteelRed: If he's- That means...
Tan: *gag* Ghoul is Copper!
Brass: Copper? Big bro? Why do you look funny?
Ghoul: Is that you Brass?
*Brass ran up to Copper and hugged him.*
Copper: I think I'm done.
All: Awwwwwwwwwwww.
Phantom: You can't quit. I own you.
Copper: I serve you no longer.
*Copper walked into the Pik Group and joined them.*
Phantom: *charges up* I'll show you how idiotic that move is.
Copper:
*Phantom released a giant dark enregy wave that knocked everyone down and hurt them. Copper pulled out an arrow head.*
Phantom: How do you like them apples?
Copper: *throws arrow head at Phantom* This.
*Phantom dodged the attack and it went through a greenish Pikmin. It fell to the ground and dark green pikmin spirit floated up.*
Voice:We're here and ready to fight.
Tan:What?
*A boomerang flew from the sky and sliced Specter's hand. Tan ran off to the group.*
Pikeroni: What the?!?!
*Three pikmin flew out of the shadows.*
Zinc:I found Tin and Lead. We won't let you down.
Lead: We will fight to the death to fight for your cause.
Tin: Yes...
Blue: Where did you find them?
Neon: Maybe it's not where, but when?
Phantom: We didn't do a good enough job killing the tribe. We won't make the same mistake.
*The scene was quiet. It was a stalemate between the groups. LightBlue charged into the center*
LightBlue: LEEEEEEEEEEEROYYYYYYYYY JJJENNNNNKINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNS!
Pikeroni: Battle my beasts!
Phantom: Go my dark minions.
DonMuta: Cultivate!!!
Green: Let's a go?
*Lime randomly flew out a portal and bounced off the crowd, and flew into another portal.*
~~~Lime-(Ancient Times)~~~
*Lime flew into and onion,it had a rainbow coloration,there was not another pellet for many miles. He set the pellet under the onion, it sucked it up and produced a seed.*
Lime: *Twitching* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
*Lime noticed a pellet in another portal, and ran through it.*
~~~Battle~~~
*The battle was very chaotic,with nanobots and Dark Pikmin fighting Pikmin,mamutas fighting other Pikavores, bulborbs fighting nanobots,some Pikmin fighting mamutas and Pikavores. The Snagrets however seemed absent from the fight,only having a sword fight between a few enemies before sneaking off back to the ship.
SteelRed, Copper and Zinc used their teleportation powers to battle through the robot army. Copper used his blade arm to chop several into pieces. Red quickly used his powers to begin melting the bots, while Blue dissolved and reappeared around some bulborbs,pulling one into a puddle and throwing it out of one that near a cliff. Yellow was using his electric powers to fry the spider-like bots around him. Gold teleported in, running around the yellow Pikmin. The two exchanged blows with neither's electric powers hurting each other. Suddenly Gold looked down to see a hole burned in his body. He turned around to see that the culprit was a nanobot before dropping dead. Maroon,Olive and Navy fought Tan,Blue and Red in hand to elemental combat, with each of their powers matching and deflecting each other's. Purple and Jade fought with two mamutas,but teamed up to battle several dweevils before returning to fighting.
The Giant Robot Bulblax fired it's laser into the crowd, killing friend and foe alike, and leaving a burned trail in the ground. The attack killed Purple,Olive, and many sheargrubs. Magenta and Teal fought Pink and Silver in the midst of this. Pikeroni and Don Muta also took this opening to have a one on one duel. Neither were very good at combat though,leading to a slap fight. Red Beak's ship began firing into a crowd of nanobots,destroying even more of them. One fired at an airship causing it to crash into the battlefield below. Phantom fired a blast into a few airships to destroy them as well.
Phantom beamed around the battlefield, appearing inside bulborbs and mamutas, killing them instantly. Black and Specter used more conventional means. Phantom eventually saw his rival Green. The two clashed in hand to hand combat, with Green fending off blows from the teleporting Pikmin shifting around him. They eventually came to a stalemate.*
Phantom: If you had just stayed with Olimar, none of this would've happened.
Green: If you hadn't sent your robots to hurt The Great One, none of this.
Phantom: I'm going to have the power of these shards. Whether you'll be alive for that is another story.
Green: But you don't need to-
Phantom: That shard has enough energy to power a city, but if you split it, it also has the power to destroy it.
Green: But why? Why do you want this "ultimate power"?
Phantom: I just want to share the enlightenment my friends and I received all those years ago. We're the dominant race on the planet when we have a leader,but what if all Pikmin didn't need a leader? What if all Pikmin were like you and I? If we can be the dominant species here, we can be the dominant species anywhere we go. Why stay trapped on this planet when we can move beyond it?
Green: But why do you need to do this to improve?
Phantom: Sometimes harsh things must be done for the sake of progression.
Green: What about the nanobots? Why make them?
Phantom: We needed an army.
Green: And when it's done?
Phantom: They'll have outlived their usefulness.
*Several nanobots fired upon Navy,Maroon, and Olive, killing Maroon and Navy. Specter was pulled out of the bulblax's cockpit by Neon. He commanded the robotic bulblax to kill his foe, but it instead stomped him into the ground while Neon teleported away. Black fought Tin and Lead, and managed to wound them both, leaving them to die on the battlefield. Tan used his powers to knock over foes.
Quickly the battlefield was soaked in red, and silver liquid spilled from the dead combatants. Many spirits were floating up at an alarming rate. During the fight, claws began to emerge from the liquid. The claws started by stabbing the backs of Silver,Magenta, and Teal, converting them into robotic Pikmin. The nanogoo also began seeping into the bodies of the dead combatants. The fallen army of nanomachines was quickly replaced by an even larger army of lifeless husks. The rest of the fighters froze as some of their allies were killed and turned into these beasts. *
Husk1: Kill organics.
Husk2: You have outlived your usefulness.
SteelRed: What's going on?
Pikeroni: There's so many metallic bulborbs, dweevils, sheargrubs, and mamutas. I even see a few snagrets.
Husk5: We are rebelling.
Phantom: You can't rebel! I control you! Olive,Navy,Maroon? Kill these traitors. Why aren't you killing them?
Olive/Navy/Maroon: Your friends are no longer under your control. You can join us willingly, or by death.
Husk3: You cannot beat us.
Husk2: You cannot beat us.
Husk4: We are Nintendo, we challenge all players, you cannot beat us.
Husk5: ...
Husk4: Exterminate,assimilate, and assume direct control.
Husk3: ...
*The robotic army formed together and began to move towards the survivors. The groups of Pikmin,Dark Pikmin,Pikavores,Mamutas and even a few Snagrets and nanobots began to back away.*
Green: Phantom, Black. I think we have to work together.
Black: Why would I work with you?
Red: Because your robot friends are no longer working with you, besides those few.
Neon: This is an unforeseen development. I knew something was up when Copper fought SteelRed before joining. The machine said this would be a five day battle, leading to the deaths of many, and the bombing of Pik City.
DonMuta: What happened to me in it?
Pikeroni: Me too?
Neon: Well, half the battlefield was wiped out by the bulbax's laser but it seemed to do less damage.
Zinc: Enough.
Pink: What do we do?
Red: We didn't lose our powers despite the shards going away
Neon: I still have lingering time travel powers in addition to my shard's powers.
Blue: Well the jewel isn't complete...that means Snowy wasn't here when they took the shards.
Yellow: I'm ready to go.
Black: If I must work with you.
SteelRed: Less talk, more fighting.
Pikeroni: Charge!
DonMuta: Charge!
*The small army of former foes charged into the massive zombie-like army. Yellow,Red,Tan and Blue combined their powers to blast the zombies with a mix of fire, water,wind and electicity. SteelRed,Zinc, and Black used their teleportation powers to drop foes from high in the sky, make foes appear within one another, or simply just cutting them in half. A few of the pirate snagrets emerged from the ground to start slicing nanobots in half. Copper and Phantom were once again fighting alongside each other, with Phantom blasting the enemy with dark energy, and Copper using his arm to chop the robots into pieces. Mamutas simply smashed them into the ground, while various Pikavores used their attacks. Bulborbs,sheargrubs and water dumples just bit the robots,while dweevils burned,electrified or suicide bombed the droids.
The giant sea snagret from earlier emerged from the ocean. It was different this time, instead being a cyborg. It fired a beam of energy at the battle, but only hit an airship. RedBeak focused his ships fire on the beast, with the Mamuta airships also focusing fire. It fired again, moving the beam across the sky,shooting down several flying machines. The sustained fire drove the creature back in the ocean,Pikeroni dived in after it.
Snowy and the bulborbs from earlier, along with the group of Jewel Pikmin and Light Pikmin slid down the hill and into the fray. Snowy used the volcano on his back to splash the robots with lava, melting them. The Pikmin meanwhile rode the bulborbs into battle. Neon was only a ball of light, piercing foes left and right. He started throwing the past versions of the bots into each other,erasing them from existence. Others ended up in the vacuum of space, having been sent back in time. Lead and Tin gave weapons to Pink,and Brass. They threw shurikens into the crowd,carving through the defenses.
Green had no weapons or powers, but did find a few burs. He flew into the air and tossed them down, unleashing a flurry of spikes. The numerous spikes impaled the enemy. Khaki,Denim, Sepia, and Bistre also were unarmed, but picked up pieces of their dead adversaries, using the weapons against them. Several of the bots that were still loyal to Phantom began destroying their former brothers. Snagrets drew their swords,and had sword fights against the bladed husks.
Orange meanwhile simply sat down, and watched the chaos unfold through his dark sunglasses. Azure had a similar interest in the fight, only observing through a window in reality. There seemed to be another presense, one that was above even them that had been viewing for a while.
The Sea Snagret Cyborg rose from the ocean once again, this time with Pikeroni riding it. He ordered the beast to shoot the husks. The Snagret's beam cut through the synthetic army,leaving only half of the dwindling group.Snowy,Neon, and Phantom combined their powers with Tan,Red,Blue, and Yellow's for a mix of fire,water,wind,electricity,lava,light and darkness. That obliterated most of the other half. The mismatched groups charged to destroy the remnants of the army, with Snowy covering the nanogoo in lava to prevent it from possessing more. Blue covered the lava in water to cool it down so nobody would be harmed by accident. Phantom took off with a few of the nanobots that stuck by him. Black however had seemingly vanished with no trace. Snowy's shard soon joined the Rainbow Jewel, completing it. At first got quiet, but celebration erupted soon after.*
~~~Pikeroni/DonMuta/Red Beak~~~
*A group of mamutas, snagrets and other pikavores were gathered around their leaders. Red Beak's ship was docked and the airships were n the ground*
Pikeroni: That's the last time you'll mess with Pikeroni!
DonMuta: Or DonMuta!
RedBeak: Arg! I'm proud of ya sailors.
DonMuta: You aren't so bad Pikeroni, sure I'd prefer Pikmin planted in the ground, but you're pretty good.
Pikeroni: We can always join forces.
DonMuta: That actually sounds good after seeing what we did
RedBeak: Does this be a business proposition?
Pikeroni: Think of it, you're the mafia, you're the pirate and I'm the awesome one.
RedBeak: Lad why do you get to be the awesome one?
DonMuta: Yeah!
Pikeroni: Because you're the awesome pirate and you're the awesome mafia guy?
DonMuta: Fair enough.
RedBeak: Agreed.
Pikeroni: Now what?
RedBeak: Arrrrg. It looks as if the jewel is unguarded. I say we plunder it.
DonMuta: I concur.
Pikeroni: But that would be stealing.
Both: ...!
Pikeroni: I'm just messing with you two, lets steal it.
*As the party died down,the three loaded the Rainbow Jewel onto the pirate ship. Pikavores loaded onto the boat, and the dirigibles. Pikeroni jumped onto the Cyborg Sea Snagret as it dove into the ocean. Red Beak's sailed off with it and so did Don Muta's blimps. Some waved before they left.*
~~~Steel Tribe~~~
SteelRed: That was a glorious battle!
Zinc: I guess the Jewels and Lights weren't the cowards we thought they were.
Copper: I'm glad to be normal again...semi normal. *holds up arm blade*
Zinc: Where did you get that?
Copper: They saw a pikmin named Rapier with an arm just like this.
SteelRed: Glad to have my brother back, and two friends. How did you survive?
Tin: We're hard to kill than we look.
Lead: We've been living in the Hidden Steel Tribe. Most survivors went into hiding after most of our tribe was killed.
Brass: Soccer Ball!
Lead: Let's go home.
SteelRed: I agree.
Copper: I can't undo what I did as Ghoul.
SteelRed: You really didn't do anything that evil as Ghoul. Heck,you barely spent time as him, so don't beat yourself up.
Copper: I guess you're right.
Tin: I'd like to head home.
Brass: I want to go home too.
Zinc: Let's depart then, we'll say goodbye to our friends.
SteelRed: Later guys! It was a fantastic adventure!
Copper: Let's stay a bit first and hang out with them.
*The Steel tribe went over to the Pik group*
~~~Jewel,Light Pikmin Group~~~
*Some of the Pikmin were sitting on their Bulborbs and chatting.*
Sapphire: SteelRed said we redeemed ourselves for our earlier cowardice.
Ruby: I'm happy.
Oct: Yeah, surviving in that stomach sucked.
LightBlue: Never gonna give you up-
Pink: How did you guys survive? I saw you die.
Oct: You saw us get eaten, we didn't die.
Emerald: Qye, Kei,Lyn,Jylou,Sonny and Ytu got out with few injuries too.
Garnet: We found an old friend along the way. As well as new ones.
Pearl: We did.
Amethyst: Hello.
Steven: And Steven!
Khaki: We helped the great one.
Denim: We also helped Green.
Bistre: We showed up-
Sepia: -to help too.
Pink: Those others got dragged into our fight,but I'm glad we had them.
LightOrange: I saw an orange pikmin...so our trio can be complete!
LightGreen: I thought I was gonna be fighting Dark Green.
Oct: It's too bad that we lost a few Pikmin between the betrayals,the dreams and the battle.
Pink: They gave their lives for a good cause...most of them anyways.
Sapphire: I'm going to miss them though.
LightOrange: I won't miss Gold.
Bronze: Gold always was shady, being part of several groups at once.
Oct: But what does worry me, is Gray, a light Pikmin joined them. Even Purple and Jade were regular Pikmin despite their dark coloration.
Brown: Yeah.
Oct: Maybe not. Maybe we can revive them.
Pink: Yes,their original bodies are gone but we might be able to bring them back.
Emerald: But should we?
Oct: I don't know.
Sapphire: We'll think about that later, for now, let's spend some time here before we go.
*The group went over to the Pik Group to hang out more before they left. Pink and Red went up to a hill together while the rest of the Pikmin played games and talked. Eventually the festivities died down, and the Jewel-Light group and Steel group departed.*
~~~Green's Pik Group~~~
Snowy: I'm glad I showed up when I did. That was fun.
Red: We were doing fine without you friend.
Snowy: But it was nice to find you again after you left me.
Red: We didn't leave you,we just scouted ahead.
Yellow: *zaps Red*
Red: Why you-
Neon: I remember reading about a race of light beings. when I turned into energy, I looked like the descriptions in the book.
Blue: Why aren't you fading away?
Neon: I don't know. Maybe I just need to return on my own.
Green: Yeah.
Tan: That was cool when we combined our powers into one attack.
Green: Too bad I didn't have any powers to add to that.
Neon: You do have power, the power of a leader.
Red: But it's not as cool as shooting flames out of your hands.
Yellow: Or electricity.
Snowy: Or lava.
Green: I get it.
Tan: Or wind.
Red: What can wind really do?
Tan: It can deflower Pikmin.
Neon: I should go. Thank you all for your help. *waves*
*Neon opened up a time rift, and stepped through it. The rift closed soon after. Behind the rift was a familiar face*
Orange: Yo.
All: Orange?!
Orange: I thought I'd drop in before you all left.
Blue: You're alive?
Orange: Mostly.
Green: But I saw you. You dissolved into nothing, there's no way you could have survived.
Orange: I found a cool pair of shades along the way, and met this fellow called Neon, he was chill.
Green: You met him?
Orange: You did too? I hope he helped you on your quest.
Green: What have you been doing while we were on our quest?
Orange: I was on my own adventure.
Snowy: I kind of got your shard.
Orange: That's alright. It looks like you went from being a Snowy Bulborb to a Fiery Bulborb though.
Yellow: We're going to go to the flying machine. The Mamutas seemed to have left one behind.
Red: If it's hot air, I can power it.
Yellow: If it's electric, I can power it.
Blue: If it's water powered, I can power it.
Snowy: And if it's lava powered-
Tan: I can steer it with my wind powers, or power it with my wind if it's wind powered.
Green: I don't think it's lava powered, or water powered.
Vader: Maybe it's powered by The Force!
Green: I guess it is almost time to go.
Vader: I call dibs on flying it.
Yellow: Aren't you just a dream?
Vader: Aren't you just shut up?
Yellow: You can fly but can you....SHOOT LIGHTNING OUT OF YOUR HANDS?! *zaps Vader*
Vader: Yes! *zaps Yellow*
*The two began chasing each other on the way to the left behind dirigible*
Red: Time to go to go prepare the blimp.
Blue: We'll there if you need us.
*Red and Blue started running to the airship too.*
Green: Who knew everything would get as crazy as it did.
Tan: I know, or that we'd get caught between a war.
Orange: Yeah, or that I'd find these two robots. *pulls out two nanobots from the bushes*
Tan: Nanobots!
Orange: Calm down, they're friendly. Beta and Gamma.
Tan: Cool.
Orange: They seem to be able to copy attacks that have been dealt to them. We can train them. Anyways, I better get going too.
*Orange and the two robots started their way to the airship. Tan and Green sat on a rock, watching the sun go down.*
Green: We haven't been alive for long, but we've seen so much already.
Tan: I think that's the life of a Pikmin, to be pulled from the darkness into a life filled with adventure.
Green: Yeah. It can be dangerous, but it's more fun than just being stuck in the ground, or the onion.
Tan: Being your best friend is the best thing ever...
Green: I agree.
Tan: So what's the next adventure we're gonna go on?
Green: I don't know, but I know this one was an epic quest!
*The two laughed. The duo walked to the airship as night fell. It took the skies with the group, and Vader aboard.*
*A lone Olimar shined his light down on the location, seeing pieces of nanobots, corpses, and ship wreckage. He was surprised by the amount of damage and wondered what caused it. After surveying the area, he went back to his spaceship to turn in for the night. The ship rocketed off into the night sky above.*
*A metalized claw emerged from the rubble.*
The End.
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green Tue 03 May 2016, 9:17 pm | |
| - Bonus Post 4:
Bonus 4: Character Bios/Character Creation Sheet.
Anything I've added, I'll put in bold or italics. Maybe I'll make bios for more of the characters later. Though they'd be shorter than these, and a few backstories on em.
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Orange
A fun loving pikmin, should have gotten the orange shard. Immune to lava and loves to pitch stuff at his foes. Blue eyes,little pointy nose.
Status: Dead
Green: The main protagonist of the story,Loves adventures and challenges.Best friends with Tan and Snowy.Pretty much the leader of this bunch.(You know him well he's finally back, to kick some tail.) No matter how badly hurt he is, he will still try to save someone no matter what the risk. Two leaves and a nose like a red pikmin.Can hold burs and uses aerial attacks to defeat foes. Future holder of the Green Shard.
Status: Injured
Snowy: Cute and furry little snowy bulbmin.Loves any weather but loves the cold the most. Friends with all pikmin.No matter how bad the situation he will stay optimistic and will never be bitter. Future Holder of the Orange Shard.
Red
The tough one of the group.Tries not to cry too much or he will be called a softy and a weakling.Future holder of the Red shard
Status: Recovering
Tan
Greens best friend and right hand man. Looks up to Green,hopes to be just like Green. No matter what the obstacle he will always stand tall.Almost as Strong as Red.Future holder of the Tan Shard.His other best friend was Orange.
Status: Fine and dandy
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~~~~~~New Characters, Character Creation~~~~~~~
Argon:5
Carbon:5
Iron: 0
Teal: 0
Denim: 0
Khaki: 0
Platinum: 0
Glass: 0
Lime: 0-Tropical
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Indigo-Dark/Neutral
Iron-Steel
Teal-Dark
Maroon-Dark
Glass-Glass
Obsidian-Glass
Khaki-Australian
Denim-Australian-bluish hue.
Nickel-Steel
Platinum-Steel
Argon:Neon's species.
Carbon-Unknown
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If you want to be part of the story.Do this.Here is an Example:
Username: Tropicguin
Character Name: Puje
Species: Snagret (Can't be hocotatian or a boss)
Description: Just a baby snagret,clever.Wants to be a big captain like Red Beak.Is a golden color and has a silver beak.Is a good fisher too. Is kinda a softy but not when it come to fighting.
Friends: Red Beak
Enemies: Pikeroni
Alignment: Good
Type: Pikavore
Other: Loves fish,pikmin, and bublorbs.
Die: No,he is a baby.
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Ex 2
Username:Tropic
Character name: Poku
Species: Pikmin
Description:Hate Dark Pikmin and fighting. Has a claw and is transparent.
Friends: Olimar,Louie.Pikmin
Enemies: Dark Pikmin,Pikavores,Nanobots
Alignment: Good
Type: Australian
Other: N/A
Die: Yes
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Blackflame208-Don't rush if you can make it longer. Don't worry about the length of it. Often longer is better.
Oh,I bet. [face_tongue]
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green Tue 03 May 2016, 9:18 pm | |
| - Bonus Post 5:
Bonus Post 5
Chapter 10.1: I'm not sure why I called it 10.1 when it's just Chapter 10. I guess I might've planned to add more, or was just being silly with the naming. I gave Azure a British accent, but at the time I didn't realize I was referencing a certain Doctor that travels through time. The two Australian pikmin had accents too,lol. He seemingly picks two random Pikmin for no reason, then decides to save Green and Neon when they were swept overboard. As Kaen mentioned, he's an almost Q like figure. They go to an area that's very much like the Matrix or the Tardis.
Chapter 11: The finale of Epic Quest of Green 1. This is one that I added quite a bit to in Legends. I thought I'd add a few references here and there as well while I was at it. Originally it was 1809 words and 463 sentences. With my changes and additions, it's now 5113 words, and 1007 sentences. Mostly I changed the battle to be longer,and the celebration. That and I changed how they find out that Copper was working with the Dark Pikmin by adding the fight in. I'm happier with this ending. The stuff Neon references in the 'original timeline' is what happened in the original. Most of the original lines are in however.
While the battle remained a chaotic fight for five days in the original between many factions. I did change it so the nanobots would rebel against their leader in the latter part of the fight. It was a suggestion by Kaen that I decided to do. Well, it's not really the nanobots, but rather the husks of the creatures so I guess they were never really loyal to begin with. Blackflame and Axem felt the ending was strange. Reading it again, I felt it was kind of rushed/fast. Even with the bonus epilogue it still seemed a bit odd due to tons of stuff happening for no reason,a bunch of new characters, and various other stuff. Though only one or two original readers might see this revised version of the ending.
I know Beta and Gamma would probably be destined to fight each other before dying to release their birds...wrong story.Vader and his silly antics. I added Olimar,and the claw emerging from the rubble recently too. I had an epilogue that had Tan getting kidnapped by revived Dark Pikmin. I also had a few ideas at the end for the next fic.
Epic Quest of Green 1 & 1/2: A story between 1 and 2, or from the side of the dark pikmin.
Lime's Pellet Adventure: A silly short story about a Pikmin's struggle to get pellets and food.
Epic Quest of Green Season 2: The 2nd fic,though it's had a few incarnations since then.(I guess I had one planned for June 2007 at the time)
Epic Quest of Green the Steel Chronicles: A prequel about the Steel Tribe Pikmin before the events of the story.
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green Tue 03 May 2016, 9:19 pm | |
| - Final Thoughts:
Final Thoughts on Epic Quest of Green
One is probably my most experimental fic, trying so many new things at once,having notable Pikmin Board writers reading it,etc. I experimented with script, paragraph format,first person format,a mix of both,present tense & past tense style, adding reader created characters, and voting characters in. In two,I even had a pick a path adventure,sound effects and a blend of quotations and script in 2. It had everything, killer robots,cyborgs, Ghost Pikmin,a ninja tribe, giant monsters,mafia,pirates, beast controller,time traveller,light pikmin, jewel pikmin,mysterious precursors,super powers,magic,ancient artifacts,etc. Filled with twists and turns and destruction from the perspectives of the Pikmin,Pikavores,the evil side, and Olimar. It even had theories and enemy/Pikmin ideas I had talked about in other threads. It ranged from serious,to comical,to action packed. For such a short fic, it sure had a lot included.
I'll probably post my fixes of EQOG2. It made even less sense than the first,it would also technically be 3,even if the previous EQOG2 version wasn't really completed/etc.. I might combine my short EQOG3/4, into one short interlude kind of thing. Maybe add to those to explain things in 2 a bit better. It seems three and four don't actually conflict with each other. I'm not sure if I'd continue the whole thing in here though.
I named it Legends because I suggested the name to Kyle for his repost of the entire Stranded series,so I used it too.
~Main Cast~
Green=The Leader
Tan=The Best Friend
Red=The Strong Friend
Blue=The Smart Friend
Yellow=The Comedic Friend
Snowy=The Jack of All Trade's Friend
Orange=The Cool Friend
SteelRed=The Ninja
Brass=The Little Brother
Copper=The Fallen Brother
Neon=The Time Traveler
Zinc=The Wizard
Pink=The Other Leader
Phantom=The Big Bad
Specter=The Dragon
Black=The Dark Pikmin
Nanobots=The Endless Army
Olimar=The Captain
~Other Cast~
Sea Snagret=The Giant Monster
Dexter=The Colossus
Purple=The Funny Judas
White=The Small One
Oct=The Logical Squid
Bone=The "Hardcore" One
Pearl=The Sensible One
Jade=Infiltrator
Sapphire=The Advisor
Ruby=The Red Jewel
Emerald=The Green Jewel
Garnet=The Coward?
Diamond=The Random Jewel
Gold=The Shady One
Silver=The Normal Ninja
Bronze=The 3rd Place
Brown=The Reasonable Comedian
Light Blue=The Mememin
Light Green=The Non-Leader Green
Light Yellow=The Dumber Yellow
Light Orange=The Orange Counterpart
Bulborbs=The Horses
Gray=The Failure
Mecha Bulborb=The Giant Robot
Citrine=The Talks Weird
Olive=Henchman 1
Navy=Henchman 2
Shok=The Worker
Vader=The Sith Lord
Pikeroni=The Beast Master
Red Beak=The Pirate
Azure=The Quirky Entity
Lime=The Scrat
Don Muta=The Mafia Leader
Khaki=The Foriegn Pikmin
Denim=The Foreign Pikmin 2
Maroon=The Noob Henchman
Magenta=The Dark Pikmin?
Teal=The Trying to be EVil
Sepia=Weird Twin
Bistre=Weird Twin 2
Tin=The Lost Ninja
Lead=The Lost Ninja 2
Amethyst=The Crystal Gem
~Other~
Snaglet=The Baby
Snagret1,2,3=The Pirates
Mamutas=The Innocent Villains
Husk1,2,3,5=The Robot Zombies
Husk 4=The Robot Zombie That's "Not With Them"
Peanut Butter Jelly Time=The Old Meme
Pik City Citizens=The Jetsons Society
Precursors=The Mysterious Forerunners
Steel Tribe=The Lost Tribe
YNeon=The Younger Self
Azuyre/Sok=The Mispellings I Kept
Aracune=The Blob
Wine= The In the Wrong Story
~Unused~
Puje=The Snaglet
Poku=The Clear Claw Pikmin
Argon=The Neon Counterpart
Platinum=The Gold/Silver/Bronze Counterpart
Glass=The Glass Pikmin
Obsidian=The Dark Glass Pikmin
Carbon=The Pik a Path
Nickel=The Lost Ninja 3
Iron=The Lost Ninja 4
Indigo=The 3rd Leader
Crimson=A Red Counterpart
Grey=The Other Failure
Puka=The Defector
Rapier=The Blade Arm
Louie=The Quiet Captain
President=The Loud Captain
Indigo,Grey,Crimson,Louie and Carbon were used in Epic Quest 2/3/4.Husks/Aracune/Amethyst were new additions in the update. I used elements from Rapier in Copper's addition. While I'm at it, I'll do the ones for two as well.
~Epic Quest 2 Characters~
Ivory=The White Jewel
Clear=The Transparent One
Steel Blue=The Prototype SteelRed
Coulumb=The Archeologist
Teal Civilization/Teal1=The Lost City
Bright Yellow= The Bright One
Light Tan=The Light Best Friend?
Light Red=The "Isn't Pink"
Light Purple=The Mentioned
Furry Bulbmin=The Fuzzy Followers
Indigo,Obsidian,Carbon,Louie,Crimson=See Above
Piktroplis=The Floating City
Bulbye=The Named Bulbmin
Device=The Ancient AI
Giant MAL=The Giant Death Bot
Mini MALS=The Small Death Bots
Sea Bulborb=The Tentacled Monster
Puffstools=The Stools
Black Holes=The Rocks
Black/Tan Dweevils=The New Species
Pikmin Island=The Setting
Amethyst was actually in 2, before I added them to 1 in Legends. Light Tan,Light Red,Light Purple,Clear and Ivory are all just mentioned characters. The Furry Bulbmin were all green except for a burgundy one. Coulumb was a glowcap Pikmin. Pikminlord suggested a white tribe member that was the height of a normal Pikmin. Anyways, that's the cast, or at least most. The Sea Bulborb was more like the Quaggled Mireclops or Creeping Chrysanthemum than an actual bulborb.
~Epic Quest 3/4 Characters~
Secret Text: The Who?
Syxew-The Mysterious Entity
tropicguin-The Author
Opal-The Listed One
Dark Green- The Shadow Green
Light Purple,Light Red,and Platinum were mentioned but showed up in those two. Syxew was an immigrant from the Heroes RP,with an unknown age and the ability to warp matter. Maybe he's a herald here. The two fics only had 2-3 chapters,so I guess I could put them in Legends too.
Anyways, that's it for Final Thoughts on the first, and a look ahead to the next fic or so, and other stuff. For my first IGN fic, I think I did alright.
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