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| Subject: Epic Quest of Green 2  Tue 03 May 2016, 9:45 pm | |
| I had combined the two fics in the commentary but here I'll split them up. - Prologue:
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It had been a reasonable amount of time since their original quest...
........Green,Red,Yellow,Tan,Blue,Orange and Pink. The colors of our surviving crew.
Green and the surviving members walked down a path full of pellets, and dead carcasses of bulborbs, snagrets, sheargrubs, and an arachnorb. Strange,considering it was night time.
"Wow, what happened here!" said Red in a surprised voice.
"I guess a massive group of pikmin came through here." replied Green.
They continued down the path, confused that they had not seen the large group of pikmin.They finally found the massive group of pikmin commanded by Louie. They looked up to see a massive Man at Legs,or at least something that looked like it. It was a light green, it's metal exoskeleton glistened in the moonlight. It was beginning to fall apart. It opened up, a red laser pointed at the army of pikmin.
The laser shifted to greenish color and incinerated a line of pikmin unlucky enough to be in it's way. Green picked up a Red pikmin, wound his arm up, and tossed the pikmin into the opened up section.
It crumpled like paper. Several gray pellets fell out. The gray pellets merged together,forming a black hole. Dozens of pikmin from the army were sucked into it. Yellow was very close to it, he got sucked into it too.
"Wait a minute,black holes tear you apart, this did not?" said Blue.
Louie and his remaining pikmin ran off,along with the group. The hole continued to suck in trees and idle pikmin before closing.
"We have to get far away from it!" yelled Green
"What was that!?" screamed Red.
"How should I know!? It just started shooting at us and when I threw a red Pikmin to kill it,it released those gray pellets. It took Yellow!"
"It must be a self defense mechanism. Something to keep it from falling into the wrong hands? Maybe it's something to maximize casualties?" replied Tan.
"What if there's more of them? The Pikmin...the planet can't survive these if there's many more of these." said Green
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green 2 Tue 03 May 2016, 9:46 pm | |
| - Chapter 1:
----------------------CHAPTER 1-Nanites take over------------------
"Green, what happened to Yellow?" said Red.
"Well,I do not know." replied Green.
They continued to run after Loiue and his army for safety as he was running to the base, where Olimar would be, then they would really be safe.
"Why are we running after Loiue for safety?" said Blue.
"Because." said Red.
"Loiue and safety?"
"I guess."
"They are under his command, we are not, lets get in--"
His voice trailed off as the got to the base where the ship and onions gave a feeling of safety.
Louie ran over to Olimar, who was beginning to take pikmin out of the onions.
"What Louie?" he said.
"I found a new species of arachnorb."
"You discovered a species, wow."
"I guess it killed a lot of the fauna here"
"Yeah."
"I'll get some more pikmin then."
Olimar went under the Red Onion to call pikmin. Green,Red,Pink,Tan, and Blue watched from a distance.Orange walked near the Blue onion..As Olimar called red pikmin out, ghosts rose out, then a gray goo started dripping.Then it burst open consuming Olimar, Orange, Louie,and all of the pikmin following them. nearby, ghosts floated up.
The gray goo moved to the onions and the ship, consuming them as well. Dragging them down, then destroying them as well. It moved outward consuming everything in its way.
A bulborb walked near by, then it started gushing out gray goo. Green ran with friends following closely behind, until the gray goo was out of sight. They ran into a Green Furry Bulbmin family all but one was green, it was white. There were twenty little ones.
"They are like me." said Green.
"But.AAAAAAAH!, They'll tear us apart!" shouted Red.
"If you keep saying that,I will." said the large bulbmin.
"Wait a minute.......Snowy?"
"Yep, us bulbmin mature fast."
"Wow, why are the babies green."
"I found them and took them under my wing."
"Where?"
"I followed a waterwraith, it disappeared and the area changed, and I found them sitting there, then, the area...."
"What?"
"Must destroy pikmin." said Snowy in a robotic voice.
The bulbmin backed away as Snowy fell over and spilled gray goo. The gray goo moved towards them.
"Come with us."
Red,Tan, Blue and Pink ran off. Green stayed to call the bulbmin and followed a few seconds later.
-=-=--=--=-=-=-=-=-Yellow-=--=-=--=-=--=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-
"Where am I?" said Yellow.
He looked around and saw only grass and tree.Idle pikmin sat around him. He got up and touched one, it brightened up. He did this to the rest of the pikmin, they followed his commands.
"Sweeeet!"
He saw no creatures around.
They walked to a river. It was full of "treasure".
"Whoah! I gotta show this to Olimar."
" If I can find him. Ok.how many are there of you?"
Yellow counted for a minute.
"35!..10 Reds, 15 blues,a purple, 4 whites and 5 yellows."
To be continued....................
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green 2 Tue 03 May 2016, 9:47 pm | |
| - Chapter 2:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>CHAPTER 2<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
*......As several lighter colored Pikmin ran down the Forest Navel's winding curves, they remembered it in the winter, so white. The large evergreen plants that swayed so wistfully in the winter wind. Though it was dimly lit, the puffstools and wollywogs came back from the southern weather to a forest creeping into fall.*
Light1: So are we here.
Light2: We must be Light Yellow and Light Red.
Light Yellow: Of course Light Green.
Light Green: Why is this chapter in script format now.
Light Red: Puffstool!!!!!!
A puffstool ran towards them, it was very different, It was huge,and dark green, with some white spots on it. It's antenna glowed a bright shade of red as it waddled,especially when it approached more closely.
Light Red:I just noticed something.
Light Green: What?
Light Red: Light Yellow was killed by Brown in the last fic.
Light Yellow: Have you heard of undiscovered onions?
Light Yellow: Ahhh!!!!!!
The puffstool approached, unafraid of the pikmin. Light Yellow was deeply in fear of the creature and bolted off into the tall grass. Light Green and Light Red, did not fight as there was no time, the puffstool sprayed it's deadly spores which transformed the duo into dark red mushroom pikmin. Their yellow eyes stared off into the tall grass
???: Good job. By either Puffstools or nanites, I will control all pikmin and beasts.
------------------Green and Others-------------------------
*Green sat with a group of 20 furry bulbmin around him. Most were dark green, some light green, and a Burgundy one which had somehow hidden itself among the group when they first met.*
Green: So...do you talk?
*None of the bulbmin replied.*
Tan:Let me try.What is your name?
*Still, none replied.*
Red: Who wants white pikmin cookies?
All: I do!
Red:Well,I don't have any, see, they can talk, you just didn't ask the right questions.
Furrybulbulbmin1: So now what?
Green: We......
Burgundy Bulbmin: Fight, Carry and Get eaten?
Green:No, by the way, do any of you have names?
Furrybulbmin1:No!
Green: Red, I make you in charge of naming at least half of them if you like.
Red: They are all Reddy, there.
Tan: Lets name the brownish one......Bulby!
Red: Thus leaving 19 other ones without names.
Green: Night is coming, the magic orb of light is heading down below.
Red: Don't you just mean the sun?
Green: Magic Orb of Light!
-------------------------Yellow----------------------------
*Yellow searched desperately for a way to get across the raging currents, he found a log, he and his group of pikmin walked inside; they almost got through it.*
Yellow: Convenience...How do I dismiss, move, wait..........
*Yellow moved all his pikmin left, this destabilized the log, it began to roll, pikmin on the edges were tossed out by the spinning motion, the log hit a rock throwing more out. A pikmin was near the edge. It screamed wildly and was smacked by a branch, catapulting him. The log approached a steep drop...*
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green 2 Tue 03 May 2016, 9:48 pm | |
| - Chapter 3:
---------------Chapter 3 The Beast Returns----------------------------------
*The twenty bulbmin still sat around Green, anxiously waiting for names.*
bulbmin1: So......?
Green: So,now what..
*Just then, they all heard a bang and then they heard another one. Then a lighter tinted yellow pikmin came out of the grass with deep fear in it's eyes. It ran into Green, knocking them both down.*
Green: Ouch!!What was that--
Light Yellow: AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!! THEY ARE COMING!!The Stools!!!!
*Red unable to contain his laughter, burst into laughter.....*
Red: Stools, "Aaaah! Oh noes!". Stools!!!
Blue: Could you waste our time on anything more insignificant.
Tan: Actually he could, don't try him though.
Green: Wait, I remember him, he is one of the insignificant characters that barely got any lines and died one chapter after he appeared. Light Yellow?
Light Yellow: What? Run!!
*Just at that moment, a large silver bulblax machine wit one red glowing eye,about five times the size of the regular adult emperor bulblax. At it's side were two puffstools. The creature made a metallic roar that scattered the bulbmin.*
Light Yellow:Aaaaaaaaaaahhh!!!The Beast!
*Light Yellow picked up one of the bulbmin and tossed it at the gray beast, it chomped down without mercy, they all saw a purple ghost float up*
Pink: AAAAAAHHH!!!! You killed it!!!
Light Yellow: It would have killed us.
Pink: You heartless little!!
*Green grabbed Pink and Light Yellow. Blue,Red and Tan grabbed three bulbmin and followed, leaving the rest of the small,fragile bulbmin to fend for themselves.*
Red: I'm sorry I laughed at you Light Yellow.
Light Yellow: It is alright...
Bulby: Why did that pikmin throw my brother at that abomination.
Green: You have quite the vocabulary for a young creature.
-------------------------Yellow-------------------------------------
*The log fell a long way before finally hitting the sharp rocks that laiid below.The log split up into many pieces,sending Pikmin flying. Yellow felt the cool water hit his dry skin, he knew something was wrong, he opened his eyes and realized he was underwater. He saw a figure grab him and closed his eyes again.*
*He woke up to feel a sandy substance on him.*
???: You awake?
???2: Looks like he is not.
???3: Let's throw a big rock on him and see if he wakes.
???: No...Light Blue....That would probably crush him. Then he would not be able to help us.
Light Blue: I wanted to do that...Light Orange!
Light Orange: Light Blue, Don't reveal my name!
???: Quiet, both of you, remember, I am the one who brought you two back.
Both: Ok........
Yellow: Where am I and who are you?
???: You do not remember me?...Neon?
Yellow: What!!?I thought you went back to the future!
Neon: I did.But nothing had changed. My world still lay in ruins. Pikmin and beasts are both being enslaved by the darkest ones.
Neon: I managed to save the shards, they are safe in that onion over there.
*Yellow looked over to see a glowing Green onion*
Yellow:Wow! Did you make that?
Neon:Yes I did. Night is coming, so we must go in it.
----------------------In a Dark Base------------------------------
*Two very dark pikmin stood in a world that was void of light. Ruins of cities, onions and forests lay around them.*
???1: You know you orders, kill Neon. He thinks he can hide by going back in time! Now go!
???2: Yes, my Darkest Master!!
???1: Good, I have calibrated the staff to the time you must get to.
???2: Thank you. Bye Master.
*In a tap of the staff,he was gone.*
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green 2 Tue 03 May 2016, 9:48 pm | |
| - Chapter 4.1/4.2:
--------Chapter 4-1..A Secret of Pikmin is Discovered.------------
----------------------Green--------------------------
They came to a seashore full of sheargrubs. The bugs burrowed into the sands of the beach, and much like worms,they made the beach must smoother as they did it. This did not matter as every day new sand would wash in for the sheargrubs to repeat their routine until death. Trees surrounded all sides,and a bulborb drank from the water. This made the group calm as the machine could not follow them,hopefully.
Green: It is beautiful.
Tan:Yeah.
Light Yellow: And so....what now, we are trapped.
*Pink had a very saddened look on her face.*
Pink: I hope those bulbmin are alright...
Blue: They can fend...I think they are,
Red: Yes, at least I hope.
Green:Chances are they survived, if they ran....
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*There was a rustling noise.The crunch of dead leaves caught Green's attention.*
*A silver figure appeared out of thin air,Green ran to attack it, but it jumped causing him to collide with a rock.*
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Silver ???: Stop! I am a friend.I am searching for Neon.
Green: Your name?
Silver: Silver.
Green: Whaaaaaat?!?!?
Silver: I am part of a federation meant to keep time from being tampered with. Neon too. We keep history how it is going.
Green: But you were....smited.
Silver: Or so it seemed, we cannot be destroyed..by normal means.
Green: ...?
Silver: Black has sent a rouge agent back to the past to destroy Neon. We must find him and protect him. I also need to keep time in order. Maybe I should investigate on you few and "end your game"...
Red: How do we know you are not?
Silver: If I were.....you just know these things. Besides, How would I know of you?
Red :True,I still do not trust you.
Green: Camp will be set up here.
Tan: Yes, the orb of light is going to be down soon.
*Everyone pitched in grabbing leaves,twigs, stones carcasses and whatever they could find.They made a good sized camp and had a feast.*
*They had their fun naming the bulbmin with names related to Bulborbs. They decided make a raft just in case.*
------------------------In the Air------------------------------
The glowing green onion soared up to the sky, Neon was able to pilot it. The onion was not quite a normal since the onion usually took care of the flying part,or was it a hive mind of the Pikmin inside?
Yellow: SO that is why you are back?
Neon: Yes. Also the reason I brought these pikmin back, I also need company too.
Light Orange: Yeah!
*Light Blue was sleeping, far of in some distant world.*
Yellow: So where are we going?
Neon: Back to Piktroplis.
Yellow: Huh?
Neon: Sister City of Pik City.........I'll describe more.
-----------------Chapter 4-2--------------------
It was pitch black outside, dark as a piece of coal. The only light that shown was the moon. This completely excluded the Onion that Neon piloted skillfully.
Outside of the cockpit, they noticed the first sign of civilization they had seen in hours.INearly fifty onions rising up into the night sky. Neon was so elated that they had arrived at their destination so fast.
"We are here!" Neon announced loudly.
"Ugh." Yellow replied in a tired voice."I was actually sleeping."
Light Orange's eyes also opened,Light Blue however was in a deep sleep.
"Oh.Pikmin Pellets, My favorite.Thanks Gray." he said with his eyes closed.
---------------------Pikmin Light Blue Dream-------------------
"These are delicious! What are they made of?" he said.
"Oh, well, carrots,bulborb, noodles and my secret ingredient." replied Gray.
"What is it?"
"Oh, it's a secret."
"To everyone?"
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The glowing onion landed on the floating city in the lake. The glass buildings glisten in the moonlight,onions lined the streets.The roads were a metallic green, the grasses had pellets hidden within them. Bulborbs and Pikmin of all types walked the sidewalks in uniformity. There were many lights that shined,lighting the streets. This was all on a large island with two very small islands in the north, close together.
Neon accurately parked the onion on the Onion pad. A bulbmin greeted them upon their arrival.
"Welcome to Piktropolis,sister city of Pik City,much cleaner than it though" announced the bulmin. It walked off and got lost into the streets. Neon,Yellow and Light Orange walked to a building that was built for information on the city.
They walked in. Many Pikmin were inside, searching the maps and books trying to get to their destination.
"So ignorant.." Remarked Neon.....
They walked over and found a manual labeled "Piktropolis"
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green 2 Tue 03 May 2016, 9:49 pm | |
| - Chapter 5:
========================-CHAPTER 5======================
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------------------ NEON & Others ---------------------------
After tedious searching.They eventually found what they needed to know.
============================THE SKY PLATFORM========================
........For those of you who need to know about the sky platforms, they are above the Rusty Gulch Platforms and they are like them, only paved in precious metals.Only the Teal Pikmin,The Spinning Leaves, were able to construct this at first until it began to take form.They took other pikmin up to assist in the building of these platforms.They eventually finished and created a large hub in the middle.The Teal Pikmin were not satisfied with this however.Legend says that they built a space elevator.This is not true,The only thing close to it is a tallpole that reachs into the thinnest of clouds.There are Teal pikmin left on Earth, they have been contructing an onion since the rest were lost.
~Tin Pikmin
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"So that such a lust for height, they built too high, too far from earth and perished" commented Neon.
"Why do we need to know this?" asked Yellow in an angered voice.
"Calm yourself. We must investigate what happened,I have this feeling."
"So we are going to go on a feeling....wait, heights?" he said calming down."I love high places."
"Then we depart now.Let's eat first."
They walked to a brightly lit restaurant that had a discount on noodles. Neon was here before. He searched his steel trap of a mind to remember why he had to come here again but nothing came up.He just dismissed it as a thought and followed Yellow and Light Orange.
Yellow and Light Orange had already ordered and got to their seats, making sure to save Neon a seat.
"And what do you want today?" asked the Pikmin over the counter.
"Just some water."
"How about some noodles."
"Nah, just some water."
"Order the noodles." the pikmin persisted.
"Just water, that is all I want."
"ORDER SOME NOODLES, SIR!!!!!"Screamed the pikmin.
Neon heard a click in his head. He noticed Yellow about to take a bite of the noodles. He grabbed a knife and threw it at Yellow, knocking the noodles out of his hand.
"Don't EAT THE NOODLES!!!" he warned.
The tables sank into the ground, along with the counters and the pikmin.They all ran out of the building which was soon consumed by the hungry ground.All the buildings began to topple over, they were not destroyed however, just bended.Crowds of Pikmin turned purple and melted into the ground.One of the two satellite islands rose up and it looked like a giant bulbs.Suddenly there was a rumble that knocked Neon off his feet.They needed to get out of there but his device still needed to charge. Onions flew up but were caught by the tentacles of the island. It was pure chaos.
They heard a loud roar.So loud it began to disintegrate pikmin near it. The island began to rise out of the water. Neon looked down and saw what he had feared.
=====================Green's Camp==============================
"Ok now we need..."
Green was interrupted by a loud roar followed by a rumble. Green dashed outside, curious of what it was. The other pikmin followed.
There was a large shadow emerging from the sea. Lights dotted it. Suddenly, the shadow dropped down at a quick speed,back to a low position.
"WHAT IS THAT!!" screamed Light Yellow.
"It's.....a......I can't make it out." replied Red.
"Say, if it just fell, shouldn't there be a wave?" inquired Blue.
"There should." replied a voice.
They all searched around for a source of the dark voice but found none. A figure appeared, a familar one to be exact. Out of the trees came another.
"It's beautiful, isn't it Gray." said the voice.
"It's real cool,Navy..." replied Gray.
"Pick that that super magnet up." said Navy in a commanding voice.
"Why am I the low one?"
"Because,you have no masterminded schemes."
"NAVY!"
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| - Chapter 6:
======================CHAPTER 6, THE CULVTIVUS======================
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--------------------------NEON---------------------------------------
...Neon began reminiscing about his adventures through time.He thought about taking his friends back through time, that however, would shatter the brick wall of time.He grabbed out a scepter. He slammed it onto the ground, it caused a massive shockwave that rippled throughout the island. Rumbles even went throughout the calm ocean.
Neon: That should do it..*puts scepter away*
Yellow: But how will we escape.
Neon: Time of course.
*Light Blue was running to this pikmin who had a jar of cookies. It held the cookies out for Light Blue.*
Light Blue: Nummy Yummy Cookies!!! *grabs cookies*
*The pikmin melted into a tentacle which almost snatched him, but he ran to tell Neon about the cookies.*
Light Blue:So how are we going to eat?
Neon: Um.....well, this is a bad time to finally tell you, the island is actually a massive sea bulborb...or a giant quaggled mireclops...or a wraith?. Run to the front, it has cookies!
*Light Blue dashed ,almost getting crushed by falling onions, tentacles and boulders, he made it to the front however,then he was eaten.*
Light Orange: How could you?
Neon: In the book of time,he is not supposed to die.....from my memory.
Yellow: I noticed you glow.
Neon: Wow.....you noticed.
Light Orange: Sorry to interrupt you friend fest, but....*Points to the front of the giant monster*
Neon: Nothing a quantum bomb won't fix....
Yellow: What's that?
Neon: Well it is shaped like a cookie and it tastes like a cookie too...Uh oh.
===========================Green & Friends==========================
Green: You won't get away with this.
Navy: Oh but I will.
Gray: I helped.YEAH!
Navy: You can't do anything,now go get some cookies.
*A small light shined, as bright as the sun, it began to increase in size, then it disappeared. Where nothing was before, stood Neon, Yellow, Light Orange and Light Blue....*
Neon: Hi, we had to go back in time before the quantum detonator destroyed the monster, we prevented Light Blue from eating the coo-bomb..Now we are here.
Light Blue: That was good..I wanted it, so I put it in my pocket.*Cookie appears in his hand*
Light Orange: But we don't have pockets and is that the BOMB!!!
Light Blue: *Swallows cookie* What bomb?
Light Orange: RUN!!!
Navy :We must kill him, take the bomb out and you sacrifice yourselves for us.
Green: Or we could just build a cannon out of your parts and ours and build it an launch him to the bulborb.
Blue: We could possibly go back in time, stop him from ever grabbing it, stop the awakening of THE SEA BULBORB. Or go back again, take the bomb, save Light Blue and blow the thing up.
Tan: How about a vote? All in favor of running?
*Light Orange,Light Yellow and Pink rose their hands.*
Tan: In favor of us dieing and letting a small group escape?
*Navy and Gray rose their hands up, Silver began to lift his up, but pulled it down immediately.*
Tan: Those who want to do what Blue said?
*Neon and Blue raised their hands*
Tan: And those who just want to build a cannon and launch Light Blue?
*Everyone but Silver, and those who had voted raised their hands.*
Tan: Silver, what do you propose?
Silver: Huh? What? Uh...I thought we were going to cut him open or something.
Tan:Those in favor of cutting him open or something.
*No hands*
Tan: It's settled, we build a cannon.
*Everyone ran to get supplies, even the bad guys.*
Neon: This is too slow.
*Neon took Light Blue, time around them began to flow in a time lapse fashion.
...The cannon was finished in a short time.*
*Navy stuffed Light Blue into the cannon, knowing to put cookies in there. Green pulled the lever,and Light Blue was launched at an amazing speed*
*There was a bright green flash,it shined for several seconds,like an evil green menacing firefly. It died down soon after. A huge chunk of meat, landed on Light Yellow and Light Orange, crushing them. More scorched chunks fell, all missing the cannon, but crushing two of the bulbmin.*
Tan: All those in favor of our 34th option, dissolve Light Blue...
Green: We are done.
Tan: Oh...I've been doing that for an hour.
Green: We launched him already, now for Gray and Navy....
*They were nowhere to be found,but a white pikmin came out of the brush.*
White: .oot iekooc tnaw I.
Pink: Calm down.
Tan: What is he saying?
Blue: He probabally speaks a primitive language.
White: Evitimirp gnillac ouy ohw!!!
Blue: See,he gets infuriated and he doesn't even understand us.
White: *kicks Blue* ymmud!!
Green: Calmness is what you need, do you want to come with us?
White: Y..s....e?
Green: Uh....yeah.
*White began to bounce around.*
====================In a Far OFF Mountain===========================
*On the top of one of the tallest volcanoes known to pikmin kind, a lone bright green pikmin climbed the mountain.His name was Lime, or so he called himself.*
Lime: I want those pellets, I know there is a bunch of them..hmmm, yummy.
*The volcano was very quiet, inside, he saw a massive base, many pikavores, robots, ghost like beings and dark pikmin roamed around the heated crater.There were several figures talking.One of them was fuming with anger over something.*
???1:YOU IDIOTIC MORONS!!!!YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO KILL THEM!!!!!!
???2: But.
???1: YOU COULD HAVE ESCAPED!!!I WOULD HAVE GOT MY SPECTAL DWEEVILS TO GET YOU!!!!
???3: It is not our fault.
???1: Maroon and Gold could do this job, better yet, I'll send Brown and Olive and you Gray too..Have a huge party with the good guys!
???2: It won't happen again your darkest.
???1: It better not.
???1: I'll send some bomb rocks, and some pikavores to help.I hope you do not fail, or go off, then I will hunt you down and decimate you.Green is who we have to destroy, that and anyone who stands in our way.
???2: All hail evil!
???3: ALL HAIL EVIL!
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| - Chapter 7:
======================Chapter 7.================================
======================The New Lands============================
----------------------------------Green and Friends----------------------------
Green: So we have defeated them...right?*sighs*
Tan: I have tallied up the dead, three bulbmin, and three pikmin. They were Light Pikmin.
Blue: Interesting.
Pink: *holding Bulby* I hope that we get out of here or these little cutes will not make it.
Neon: Remember the Steel and Jewel tribe? We can get them,but we can't teleport because my device is broken.
White: Nobrac llac lli.
Red: Can we get him to speak Pikmin?
White: Y...e.....s?
Neon: Hey! I can always call up Carbon! He may be in another dimension or time.
Neon: Let me locate him. *his device lights up*
Device: He is in the Sky Platforms.
Blue: Huh?
Neon: It is a place we cannot get to by normal walking.
Neon: We still need to get the Jewels and the Steel Tribe.
Red: Jewel? Cowards!
Green: Didn't they help us in the final fight?
Yellow: We can always steal that guys ship.
Neon: What guy?
Yellow: That guy going crazy over that treasure. He's in a black and gold suit. Let's steal his ship.
Pink: We could leave him stranded!
Green: Let's go.
Tan: Yeah
*The ship was the same color as the suit and a label said Hocotate Freight on it.They all ran to the ship, it opened up, Neon sat in the pilots seat while everyone else sat in the cozy beds and furniture below and raided the President's food.*
Pink: I feel so guilty about leaving that guy down there.
Red: We left Louie, what's the difference?
Pink: True.
Neon: I don't see much. I will fly much higher.
*There was a red dot that seemed to move closer. Then a Red pikmin hit the window of the cockpit. Neon made the ship hover, he opened the cockpit and let the battered creature in.*
Neon: What happened?
Pikmin: I was all like Neeeeeeeoooooooooow!!! Then I went Woooooooooooooooossssh, then I just Splaaaaaaattttt. I'm Crimson and I go Kapow.
Neon: I knew I should've brought that stupid translator.*tosses Crimson down*
Crimson: HI.
Green: Welcome. We need all the help we can get.
Yellow: I heard your awesome story. Tell me more.
White: M..e Too.
Red: I wanna hear this too.
Silver: MY First line!
Green&Blue: Might as well.
Crimson: So I was-
*There was a loud bang and a crash, followed by the ship tearing apart into little pieces.*
Green: What? What happened?
Neon: I don't know, I never saw it coming. It just appeared out of nowhere. We are on some metal surface. We didn't go down so I have no idea.
* They saw something that resembled the rusty gulch levels. It extended into a complicated maze going up, down , sideways , and every which way. They did not see anyone however. Glow caps and pellet posies littered the area. It took time but they also noticed a massive amount of treasures*
---------------------------------Steel Tribe-------------------------------------
*Steel Red, Brass and Copper sat around a fire that sat near a stream. Zinc was setting up a tent made of twigs.*
Brass: Big brother, do you think anything bad will ever happen.
Copper: Hopefully not.
Steel Red: If it does, we will be ready. Right?
Brass: Yeah. I wonder what ever happened to Green, Tan and them . I also wonder what happened to those Jewel Pikmin.
Steel Red: Cowards!!
Copper: I really can't say.
*Brass went off to throw pebbles.*
Zinc: Those Jewels, I kind of resurrected all of them. Here is a list and how they died.
-------------------------------Deaths-----------------------------
Bone: Died in dream.
Jade: Killed by the light pikmin.
Diamond:Killed by a globe falling, causing him to choke on a pop rock.
Ruby: Killed by a stray fig wort.
Light Blue: Exploded.
Light Yellow and Orange: Crushed.
Sapphire: Fell off a cliff.
Emerald: Eaten by a pellet posie.
Garnet: Shredded by a treasure.
Obsidian: Light shined in eyes, burned insides.
Light Green: Tripped into a fire pit.
Light Purple: Silly pikmin shenanigans.
Light Red: Brain freeze.
Light Tan: He walked to another pikmin and fell.
Brown: Constipation.
Amethyst?: Silly Pikmin shenanigans.
Bright Yellow: Silly pikmin shenanigans.
Citrine: Um...... he just did.
Ivory: Played with bombs.
Gold: Just ate a bad noodle.
White: He's alive why?
Tin: Dish washing incident?
Steel Blue: Never existed.
Clear: ^See above
The Rest: Eaten by pikavores.
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Zinc: Keep in mind, these are the latest deaths.
Steel Red: So.....?
Zinc: Some are just death prone.
Zinc: The Jewels and Lights that I brought back joined forces. Jade, Gold and Purple however...
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green 2 Tue 03 May 2016, 9:53 pm | |
| Technically Bonus 1 for EQOG2 - Bonus 6:
Bonus 6
Chapters in 2 were a bit shorter than those in 1, and had a mix of script and paragraph format. My changes in Legends 1 probably make the context of some things in 2 different now.
Prologue: I added sentences after Louie,discussing the black holes. Mostly due to criticism that they weren't really surprised,ignoring the other ridiculous things they've seen and experienced on their journey that is...and the fact that they do run and nobody but Blue commented. That's why I listed the black holes as rocks.[face_tongue]. Yellow ends up getting sucked in as well. Anyways, I chose the Man at Legs style enemy because I thought it as one of the cooler bosses.
Chapter 1: Snowy Bulbmin return again, with greenish...and a reddish one...and Snowy. He comments that he followed a wraith and ended up somewhere else. A few people get consumed by the gray goo. The gray goo sounds almost like the plasma wraith, with it consuming creatures and making it's own. Killing certain creatures while preserving others. I'm not sure if it auto changed Louie's name back because I remember fixing his name. I could imagine the fear of something that can destroy the onions and kill the safe pikmin. Grey goo in real life is hypothetical world ending scenario where self replicating robots consume the Earth while building themselves.
Chapter 2: The Stoplight Pikmin, Light Red,Light Green and Light Yellow,lol. Using puffstools to gain control of Pikmin,I bet you could have a mechanical puffstool. Fight,carry, increase and be eaten is the full thing,but the bulbmin was close enough. The Pikmin throwing and commanding Pikmin in the first few chapters, seems they've evolved.
Chapter 3: Green has more fourth wall breaks in this fic. Neon went back...to the future. The silver bulblax from 1 mysteriously returns. The Ghost/Dark Pikmin seemed to have gained control of the time master's technology.
Chapter 4.1/4.2: It's really just chapter 4 though, but they were so short that I combined them. Red still seems untrustworthy of Silver. I added in the part of how the onions fly recently. Light Blue always seems to encounter Grey. I added "to everyone" recently. Piktropolis is much like Pik City, but also different in a way. I'm not sure what Neon meant with "so ignorant", maybe of their own destruction in the future.
Chapter 5: Such lust for height? "WHOOOOOO?" They explore the city, but soon find out it's not as it seems. It's some sort of Cthulhu creature that was masquerading as a city,luring Pikmin in. I wonder how loud it would have to be to destroy Pikmin.
Chapter 6: Cultivus seems to be the latin word relating to cultivate. A quantum bomb turns out to be a real theory, a bomb so sensitive that even a photon of light will detonate it, so just looking at it would detonate it. I was thinking recently of having the quantum bomb simply transporting the creature to an alternate dimension,and that concept exists in Futurama with the quantum interphase bomb.
I originally called the monster a bulborb, but it's so eldritch that I changed it so that it could be anything from a bulblax, to the new quaggled mireclops or the plasma wraith. Neon uses his staff to speed up time around them, or rather slow them down. If you can't tell,White is speaking backwards, so I sorta used part of Pikminlord's idea. Sending Brown, interesting considering he questioned how Pikmin could go to the dark side. Though maybe they're not the same,maybe some others aren't the same. Lime shows up again too.
Chapter 7: Originally this was also chapter 6, no idea why I had two Chapter 6s. Carbon, in another dimension or time. The President shows up,only to have his ship taken, and soon crashed. You have both the Dolphin and the Ship operating at the same time. I forgot where the Neon onion yet, but maybe they needed a ship to get to the platforms. Zinc has shown that he's brought Pikmin back from the dead,and they die in silly ways.
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| - Chapter 8:
======================Chapter 8- Carbonation============================
====================The Salt Flats=============================
*A small pikmin with beady green eyes, and a rough jet black skin was on the ground, covered with some salt. His body craved water. His pores had absorbed so much salt, he was bone dry. He sifted through the salts in a desperate attempt to find water, it had failed. He collapsed on the rough, painful ground. He lay there, he read his note to himself.*
"To whomever has the chance to save me, My name is Carbon, I need water, you will find an arrow on this paper . If this paper is not nailed to the ground, don't bother following the arrow, I am probably buried by now. "
*He grabbed a small metal staple and stabbed the letter into the ground.*
Carbon:Why? Why me?
*He continued his trek to find something remotely relating to water. He was slow and weak, he collapsed again. There was a loud crack, suddenly a black substance sprayed out of the ground, he drank it, it had a weird taste. He kept drinking it, not knowing what it was. His beady green eyes turned a deep shade of red, his body began to shake violently. He closed his eyes, not knowing what would happen. When he closed them, he saw red.
*After a few hours, he awoke in the arms of his savior, a shiny pikmin.*
???: Are you alright?
???2: His eyes are greening, now what?
Carbon: Aaaaaaaahhhhh!!! Who are you?!?
???: I am Light Green, that is our group, the people are. Garnet, Ruby, Emerald, Sapphire, Diamond, Light Tan, Light Something, Brown, and uhh....you get the picture.
Garnet: He is a weirdo.
*Garnet was a weirdo himself, and prided himself in being better.*
Garnet:Yeah.
Light Green: Shut up!
*Light Green was a lighter clone of Green, almost, except for his smarts and such.*
Light Green: Who said that?
Emerald: I'm scared.
Sapphire: Hello person.
Ruby: This is a mystery...
*He looked to see many tall, pine trees that riddled the land. Their camp was not in the forest, but near it. The trees provided a shade that could not be beaten.*
*Light Green carried Carbon over to a small water hole. Carbon gulped it all down, leaving no water safe from him.*
*A black substance drained out of him when he drank the water. A black dweevil and a Tan dweevil sat over towards this sandy hole. The black dweevil sprayed Carbon. The substance surged through him, he let out a scream, then the Tan one sprayed him with sand.*
Ruby:Let's kill him.
Emerald: Don't hurt the dweevils, they're nice.
*He eventually felt better after getting sprayed with a small drop of water. He grabbed some supplies and awaited nightfall. He grabbed a tent and also packed it. Once the cool night came, he did some last minute searching for anything helpful, and departed into the pine forest.
He noticed pine cones and broke pieces off of them and grabbed some of the bright red, and orange leaves, he grounded them up into a spice and threw them in a pouch made of a shear-grub carcass. He used the brown leaves as a paper to log his progress. he trekked onwards through the dark forest that lay ahead. Whiskapillars at off of 3 plants, one had red berries, the other purple, and one with blue. The blue ones were a mystery to him, he fought off the whiskapillar and grabbed five of each berry. He bit into the blue one, a really salty taste overcame him. He remember salt, he did not like it, he would wait and use it for enemies.*
==============================Sky Platforms==============================
*The spread out remains of the ship and some of the passengers layed on the rusty platfroms. Green broke a glow cap and used it's light to shine the darker paths.It was only a blue one.*
Green: I hope this will do.
Pink: I'm scared.
Red: Don't worry, we'll get out of this. Crimson though..
*They looked over to see Crimson impaled by the ship's radar.*
Neon: Well, we go on.
Blue: Wasn't he ali-
Tan: I don't remember a thing.* looks to both sides*
Neon: Hmmm, his stupidity must have killed him.
Silver: Well, this is sure great. *loads his device* I guess-
Neon: What are you doing Silver?
Silver: In case we see any -- enemies.
Neon: Good thinking.
Silver: Yes......very good thinking indeed.
Blue: I was thinking the same thing.
Pink: Will you three brainiacs please rebuild the ship or something if you are so smart?!
Green: The ship parts are in pieces, we need to find some way to get down.
*The group proceeded to walk down one of the winding paths, they found a luminescent glowcap, Tan was about to touch it.*
???: I wouldn't do that.
Tan: Why not?
???: The electricity that would surge through you would kill you.
Tan: And who are you?
???: I'm Coulumb.
Green: So, what are you going to do.
*The pikmin stepped out of the shadows, revealing a blue "yellow pikmin". His coloration was a sky bluish with a mix of indigo near his glow cap leaf.*
Tan: Mushroom Pikmin!!! Run!!
Coulumb: I'm not a mushroom pikmin, I am a glowcap, see, over the years of the second yellow onion being up here, if a glowcap is brought to it, it produces pikmin like me.
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| - Chapter 9:
======================Chapter 9.==================
======================Rising Tension...=============
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-----------------------Steel Tribe-------------------
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*As they sat in the shade below a large tree. They heard a booming sound. *
*It continued and got louder.*
*It kept getting louder and closer.*
*BOOOOOOOOOMMM!!!!*
*A large green arachnorb that resembled the MAL burned through the trees. It's greenish laser aimed at Copper, who was eating a leaf.*
Bang!
Bang!!
Bang!!!
*Three shots had been fired at Copper, all three had missed and instead hit Zinc, killing him.*
Copper: "NOOOOO!"
Steel Red: "We can't stay here, we must leave."
Copper: "Why? Why does it happen? Revenge?"
*The massive beast opened up, pointed a red laser downwards. It dropped a red sphere. *
*There was a loud crack.*
*It opened up, revealing a bunch of smaller MALS, only the size of a dweevil, but three times as powerful. There were ten that burst out of the crimson sphere. They directed their attention to Copper and Steel Red. *
*The duo dashed away, leaving a trail of dust behind them,not realizing that Brass was not with them*
*A Mini MAL moved towards Brass.*
Brass: "Hello. Wanna play soccer?"
* The Mini MAL snatched him up and went to the large MAL, a stray dweevil was torn in half by two Mini MALs. Dwarf bulbrobs nearby were turned into swiss cheese by one MAL. Everything was set ablaze.*
*The Smaller MALs brought the beasts to the bigger MAL, it sucked them up, and dropped two red spheres.*
*The spheres opened, revealing more.*
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------------------------------------------------Carbon----------------------------------------------
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-Day 1
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"I have managed to escape those crazy pikmin, make some spices, and make some progress today. I have listed them.
-Found Ultra Salty Spray.
-Gathered a Whiskapillar.
-Created a fire.
-Defeated some dwarf bulborbs.
-Found a shiny rock.
I found this very intriging rock today. It was this Bright Neonish like color. I have no idea what it is, it gives me energy to continue though, so I won't discard it. I have seen no pikmin or creatures beyond what I called, the Line, everything is dead past that point. I do not know whether to continue or not. I will let an outside force to tell me that. Here are some choices-
A:Continue.
B:Turn Back
C:Climb to the tree tops, then continue
If you may, decide my path oh great ones.
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=================Green&Others.======================
Coulumb: "The second Yellow Onion is close to death. After Glowy the Pikmin forgot to defuse a Bomb Dweevil."
Green:"Oh, we have led some people to bad luck before."
Yellow: "Yeah, we basically killed Olimar, Louie, a bunch of pikmin, some other people, and we left The Prez stranded on this planet."
Pink: "I told them not to each time."
Red: "Didn't we kill Olimar twice?"
Green: "Oh yeah. This nano-bot thing killed him, and broke Red."
Neon: "I wonder what it would be like if Olimar had never crashed?"
Silver: "Life would continue on."
Red: "He would come eventually, wouldn't he?"
Blue: "Hopefully, the onions would have never been activated."
Neon: "We'd probably get him down to Earth eventually."
Red: "Earth?"
Yellow: "What's that? Is it a pie?"
Neon: "No, it what us time people like to call this planet."
White: "Eip!!!"
Neon: "WHAT?"
Yellow: "He wants pie, like me."
Red: "First off, we are stuck here, second, you are testing me, so shut up."
White: "You."
Yellow: "You tell him."*laughs*
*Red snatched Yellow and dangled him over the edge of the platform.*
Red: "You think this is funny!?!?!"
Yellow: "No!!NO!! It isn't!"
*Green ran over to Red and tried to pull him away, Tan joined in, so did Neon.*
Neon: "Let him go! He needs to live!."
Green: "You can't do this Red. Just let him go."
Red: "OK!"
*Red let go of Yellow's leaf. Yellow began to fall. Neon dived after him.*
Green: "You killed them! I should kill you!"
* Green snatched Red up by the neck.*
Silver: " Idiots."
Tan:" Shut up."
Silver: "Idiots"
Tan: "Shut up!"
Silver: "Idio-"
*Tan punched Silver and both fell to the ground, Pink ran to both trying to seperate them but instead was thrown back into the group of bulbmin.*
Bulbmins: "You hurt Mama."
* The bulbmin rushed into the situation along with Pink. White and Coulumb just sat down and bit into a glowcap.*
Zaaaaaaaaaaappppppppppppppp!
*No one noticed the lightning that had stuck nearby.*
*Red escaped and started hitting Green, who began returning fire. Green drop kicked Red who fell into the massive melee between most of the group. His leaf was torn and he bounced out, kicking Green. Red came in for a tackle but missed and slammed into one of the barriers. Red grabbed a glowcap. He held it like a sword and swatted at Green. Green grabbed the glowcap and split it in half. He threw the two halves at Red who dodged them. Both became deadlocked.*
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| - Chapter 10:
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================= CHAPTER 10- The Cavern==================
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--------------------------Green and Others.----------------------
Green: You will die on my watch.
Pink: He's going to kill him.
Tan: Just cool down and let him go.
*Green's grip began to slip, Red began to fall before Pink and Tan pulled him up.*
Coulumb: Look what we've been reduced to.
Red: *Cough* So- *Cough*
Pink: Why?
Silver: Ahh, we needed that.
Tan: We didn't.
Silver: You need to shut up, time won't work if we fail.
Red: *Cough*
White: Ah.
Green: I'm so sorry Red. I don't know what came over me. Friends? *Holds hand out*
Red: *grabs Green hand* Friends.
Coulumb: I have this thing I'd like to show you.
Pink: Come on Bulbye.
Bulbye: Ok.
Green:....You named them?
Pink:Yeah.
Pink: All one of them....WAIT!! ONE!!
Green: Where'd the others go?!
Bulbye: They went with this one guy. He took them away.
Tan: Well, we have to get them!
Coulumb: But.
Silver: Ok, show us the thing.
*Coulumb ran off, the rest of the group followed. There was a huge glowing stone, it had glowcaps locked within. There were also carvings on the sides. They were unknown, just a bunch of scribbles to Green.*
Coulumb: This is the stone. It helps the Yellow Onion fly, it also is the shattered remains of an ancient rock creature. That's the legend.
Green: Wait, I've seen this before, this is a crystal shard! I haven't seen this one before. It's, a silverish color.
Silver: Ah. It is mine.
Tan: Neon said he had our shards, didn't he?
Green: No, he had them in an onion.
-----------------------------NEON-------------------------------------
* A shadow watched over them, it had blood red eyes. They were on the ground*
Yellow: You can't do this.
???:Yes I can.
Neon: But I thought...
???: That's what goes in your brain, that I didn't have any shards.
Neon: ...
----------------Carbon--------------------------------
I have decided to return to those crazy pikmin, I have heard the ground rumbles. I have seen the trees in a blazing inferno, I also found two more shiny rocks. A darker pikmin touched it. It died. I met up with another darker pikmin, Maroon is his name. Maybe he can help repair my time device so I can return to base. That or find Neon or Silver in this time.
Maroon doesn't talk much.
Should I meet with the Jewel Group?
A:Yes.
B:No
C: Dance around a pie.
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| - Chapter 11:
========CHAPTER 11---Shard Prevailing===
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Green: So, we get to have it?
Coulumb: No.
Green: Yes
Coulumb: No, we need it.
Green: We need it more.
Tan: We could always *cough* take it.
Red: or *cough* kill *cough* Coulumb.
White: *cough cough cough*
Blue: We need *cough* to leave.
Silver: *cough* We sure are *cough* sick.*cough*
*On the wall nearby, there was A red,blue, yellow, and green dot versus a Black, Gold, Grayish, and a faded Brown.*
*Silver touched the shard and absorbed it*
Silver: Ahh, Raw absolute power is mine. Muahahahahahahahh!!!
Tan: *whispering* Silver, don't do that, they will know.
Silver: No, I have to report to Black and Navy.
Tan: Why?
Silver: *louder* To negotiate.
Tan: I'll come too. *wink*
* Silver leaped up and flew upwards, Tan was latched on.*
Tan: *cough* Um..oh yeah. I will stop you!
Green: Silver has the shard!
*Silver and Tan disappeared in a bright flash.*
Coulumb: The shard is in the right hands.
Green: No! It's in the evil hands!
Coulumb: Right where it needs to be.
*Green grabbed Coulumb and threw him against the wall. A yellowish ghost floated upwards.*
Red: That filthy traitor!!
*************************NEON,YELLOW*********************************
Neon: Oh no. I just need to activate...
Yellow: Your thing, I can bite and pull it out.
*Yellow pulled Neon's device out. It fell down, activating, transporting them both to a random time.*
*They found themselves in a metropolis. It was in the sky, teal pikmin walked around. They noticed the platform was a shining metal. A big pole led up into space, there was an elevator that led up to it. A pikmin walked up to them.*
Teal1: Welcome to the city in the skies. We want to build to space and leave this place for a much higher place.
Yellow: We're back in time!
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Carbon greeted Maroon, the two soon became friends. They found a big block, and a river. They used teamwork to push the block into the river. They then hopped onto it and floated down the river.
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green 2 Tue 03 May 2016, 9:58 pm | |
| At the time I hadn't been sure if it was ended or not,so with commentary, I ended it. Then explored that it might be a different dimension. So EQOG2 was sort of the same Green,but a differing dimension. But this is the end of 2.(tried to make a 3/4 but it didn't really work,lol) - Chapter 12:
++++++++++++++++CHAPTER 12+++++++++++++
-----------------------------EVIL BASE--------------------------
Black: You have done well my friends.
Silver:Thank you.
Black: And Tan, as for y,--- you will become my right hand man. You have done well. Your triple agent-ing has brought you here. You will be a force to be reckoned with. I was hoping they would die in the space ship crash. You tinkered with the parts, it failed.. I must also praise you for your placement of the nano goo, the releasing of the giant MAL and the robo-bulborb thing. The prototypes worked, now I know that my construction did not got to waste. Nobody is even aware.
Tan: Thank you.
Black: Think of it, hundreds of super soldiers piloting the robotic beasts. The conquering of the world could not come any sooner. I was planning on the Jewel Group killing Carbon. Sadly I have had to send Maroon in there to do it.
Navy: Don't forget Coulumb.
Gold: We must kill the four great ones. The green, the blue, the red, the yellow. We must kill Neon and Carbon as they have their space time devices, once we take those... I heard of another agent..They were on a covert mission but I'm not sure who it is.
Black: We can't kill them yet.
Olive: Word just came in from Copper. His plan to kill his two brothers failed.
Indigo: Yes..we must kill them before word reaches the group of who is in our army.
Gray: They killed Fluffy too.
Gold: Meh, that giant beast thing almost ate me.
Black: There is also a shadowmin force ready for the attack?
Navy: Yes sir.
Black: The zombiemin and Dweevil armies are ready?
Gold: Yes.
Black: Have you released the giant puffstools Gray?
Gray: Well,..yeah..
Black: I have the strange matter set inside of a magnetic box. It will tear apart anything, so be careful while releasing it, or you might kill yourself.
Gold: We need as little resistance as possible.
Black: TAN!! ORANGE!
Orange&Tan: Yes sir!
Black: You must assassinate the covert time lord. There are three, one from the past, one from the present, and the future timelord. You must kill the present one.
Orange: Yes...Master..
Tan: Well, won't they be in for a surprise.
---------Neon,Yellow-------------------------------
Teal1: At the top of our space needle thingy.. is a huge rock. Over there is a store. I like pie.
Yellow: We have to go up there to charge it.
Neon: My spacial transponder still works.
*He pressed a button.They were on the rock.*
Yellow: So what happens now?
*Neon connected his device to the rock. It caused it huge shockwave that destroyed almost the entire platform, leaving only a little bit left. The rock was fine.*
Neon: Want to stay for a show?
Yellow: Yeah.
*They bounced off the rock. They saw a ship heading towards them. The ship crashed into the rock and hurtled to Earth. Olimar was in it.*
Neon: He wrecked in a relatively uncivilized part for a reason. He activated the primitive onions to increase the population for a reason. The reason why there were none in the onions on his return, is due to us, we led the advanced pikmin to more civilized parts, same with his return.
*Neon pressed a button and they were gone.*
=============Green+Friends=========================
Pink: You killed him!
Green: He betrayed us.
Red: I have to agree with green.
Blue: I concur.
*Yellow and Neon had arrived. A green flash occurred afterwards*
*Orange and Tan had arrived.*
Orange: Hi.
Tan: Hi again.
Green: Tan, you're alive.
Neon: *points device at them* Stay away.
Tan: But.
Neon: We know who's in your army, I got a little tip from a pikmin.
Orange: WE ARE NOT EVIL!
Tan: Yet.
*Neon lowered his weapon. Tan pulled out a box and threw it at Yellow, Red, Blue and Green.Neon jumped in front of it, it broke open, releasing strange matter. The strange matter ripped him apart, atom by atom. He was gone in a flash. His device was launched out. Tan grabbed it.*
Tan: Ok, now, you four are the only people we really need.Everyone else is expendable.
*Tan shot at White, blowing him into pieces, and killed the bulbmin*
Tan: As for Pink..
*He shot at Pink, the shot stopped. Pink grabbed it a threw it back at Tan.*
Pink: Did you know killing a Time Agent is a serious offense?
*Pink threw a device at Tan, he dodged it,it hit Orange, killing him.*
Pink: That is punishable by death.
Green: Your a----
Pink: Time Agent. Yes, I was selected. I became the Present Time Agent. There were many, after the massacre. Seven remained. Me, Neon, Carbon,Azure,Silver and two others who we banished for their role in the uprising.
Red: Who?
Pink: Copper and Black. They had a major part in it, so we took away their devices. We banished them to this time, where they seem to be screwing the world up again. Their robots and shadowmin are plaguing the world now.
Blue: So....
Pink: Me, Neon, and Carbon all came here. Azure was doing a colonization operation in Antarctica. He could not help us after his device malfunctioned though. He and his colony was transported to this small rock close to the Sun. They could not cope and were killed. Tan was the one who tinkered with it and caused it. He is a murderer.
Tan: That is...
*Tan threw a can of a substance at Pink.*
Red: Pink!!
Pink: Don't forget your mission Red,gather as many people as possible. The Dark Alliance extends far longer than you know. Lots of the people you met we in it. Some of the Jewels,Copper, and you just saw two of your friends in it. They've infiltrated everywhere.
*Pink faded away into a cloud of dust.*
Red: *Crying* Why us? Why can't it just be someone else?
Green: I thought that Me, you,Tan,Silver,Neon,Yellow,White,Orange,Pink,those,and everyone else would be fighting side by side. Now, there's just Me, you, Yellow and Blue.
Yellow: I don't understand, how could they all be time agents?
Green: Maybe something pulled us somewhere? Maybe they became ones in the future? Even if it's a different...dimension? Universe?
Red: Huh?
Green: I don't understand why we acted so harsh too, it must be the dark influence. Maybe Copper and Tan, and others got corrupted? This is all weird.
====================Carbon,Maroon===================
They had stopped at a huge lake, where there was a slightly submerged city with small boats it in water roads. There were just blue pikmin. They floated to this building bustling with activity. They went to the top on of a tower
They both looked down. It had to be thousands of pik-feet tall. They stood at the edge...
Maroon: This is nice...
Carbon: Yep.
Maroon: Bye.
Carbon: Where you going?
Maroon: I'm staying here.
*Maroon pushed Carbon off the building. Maroon had his device in his hands.*
Maroon: I've killed Carbon. Now to decimate this city.
*A flood of robotic flying bugs flew in. They swarmed into one spot. They beeped for a few minutes.*
*The entire area became engulfed in a massive explosion. It killed everything within a few hundred to a thousand pik-mile radius. This included ten cities and numerous towns full of pikmin and beasts. Ones that Black had not controlled, and a few that he did control.*
*A crater remained where the island used to be. Lava burst out of the surrounding areas.The entire Island was gone.*
The End?
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| - Bonus Post 7:
Bonus 7
Chapter 8: Carbonation,pun time. I decided to introduce Carbon finally, a lost Pikmin wandering the world, writing down things in a log kind of fashion. This was the Pik A Path character, where readers could pick his options. Light Tan, and Light Something,lol. We see the Tan and Black Dweevils in this chapter,new kinds of dweevil. Tan and Silver acted a bit off.
Blue Yellow Pikmin in E1,2 sort of appear in the games, seeing as they glow/flash in 3. Coulumb is a unit of electric charge. Charles-Augustin de Coulomb is one of the names inscribed on the Eiffel Tower. A glowcap Pikmin would be pretty cool though.
Chapter 9: The Steel Tribe makes an appearance again. The Line,where everything past it is dead. The group ponders what would've happened if Olimar didn't crash. Then Red gets angry for little reason and drops Yellow, and Green gets angry at Red. That leads to a brawl amongst the group. White and Coulumb eating a glowcap...lol. Also used sound effect in the chapter, inspired by Mario Paradise. Ultra bitter/spicy sprays, why not Ultra Salty or Ultra Sweet sprays,no idea what they would do though.
Chapter 10: I almost forgot to change it to Chapter 10. And the brawl soon ends, and they come to their senses. Carbon shows up again,and is revealed to be a time agent as well. Bulbey, not too far from saying "bu bye". Mysterious figure attacks Neon and Yellow, silver shard is revealed.
Chapter 11: All that coughing. Silver and Tan have ended up working for the dark side. Green just straight up kills Coulumb for his betrayal. Bite and pull it out..reminds me of a scene from MGS3...but only blue Pikmin have mouths. They end up in the past, before the ruins were ruins. Carbon and Maroon teaming up to survive.
Chapter 12: Triple agenting? Ok Ocelot. This is where Tan's been revealed as one behind some of the events in the fic. Phantom was the bad guy in the last, but Black is the bad guy here. Also is revealed that the Jewel Pikmin, Orange and Copper are working for the evil army as well. Maybe Copper never left the dark side to begin with,or just went back. Shadowmin and Zombiemin, the shadowmin I believe would be converted Pikmin,and Zombiemin could either be lifeless husks, or just the mushroom pikmin. As well as a covert time agent working with the group. Black calls them a time lord...
Spacial Transponder...maybe they're more than time Agents. Neon and Yellow release the rock from the Sky Platform. They end up causing the meteor to crash into Olimar's ship, setting off the events of the first game. They return to the present, as Tan,Orange return to the present as well. Tan tries to kill Green,Red,Blue, and Yellow before Neon sacrifices himself to protect them,only next line to say he needs them and that everyone else is expendable. Maybe he knew what would happen when he did that. He kills White, and the Bulbmin too, and tries to kill Pink,only for her to throw the attack back,killing Orange instead. Pink is revealed to also be a time agent.
Neon, Carbon and Azure are known to be time travelers. Though Silver,Pink,Black, and Copper ended up being Time Agents after a...massacre. When I wrote the fic, I hadn't watched Doctor Who, so it's coincidence that the backstories line up. Only Copper really doesn't really fit into being a time agent, and I guess Pink and Silver too. Tan is revealed to have messed with Azure's tech, causing the destruction of an entire colony. Pink fading into dust, something different than the strange matter. Strange matter is theorized to either disappear, or convert other atoms into strange matter. I guess I did both with Neon's death. Interestingly, Tan is not a Time Agent but kills some. Kaen had suggested him as a villain in EQOG1,lol.
Yellow's line, and the other lines after I added recently, to give theories why things might be different, and why they fought. Carbon and Maroon section remained unchanged though. They visit a Venice like city and to the top of the tower. Maroon does a one liner before pushing Carbon off, presumably killing him. Maroon,using a swarm of nanomachines, destroys the large surrounding area in an explosion,killing many. In the original a snagret flew him out, but here I didn't explain it.
This is where Epic Quest of Green 2 ended up ending. I don't know why I just ended it there,maybe I was just tired of writing at the time,but I wasn't posting much on IGN around the time either. But that's kind of where the story closes off. I did continue it off in 3/4, with different explanations/paths. Though I guess they could be combined into a 2 1/2 kind of story(or first chapters in another). I haven't had a true three quite yet. Maybe it's like 2, where I had a few before I had a true one.
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green 2 Tue 03 May 2016, 10:07 pm | |
| It's 3 and 4,but it's much more like 2 1/2. Epic Quest of Green 3 & 4(Unfinished). Here are the lost fics. There were a few lost fics that had been deleted but these survived. This is a the bonus incomplete fic, I could combine em and write a 2nd half one day. Epic Quest of Green 4:New Lands December 30th 2009 Fic - Prologue:
The Lost Fics(Epic Quest 2 1/2?)
~~~~~~~Epic Quest of Green 4: New Lands~~~~~~~
[Why exactly is this the 4th, and not the third, because I had made a second one, but it was deleted, so I made another one, but accidentally called it EQG2.So technically, this is the 4th one in the series.]-2009
------------------------------PROLOGUE----------------------
Green was sitting in a chamber. Black was looking at him with an evil glare. Green had no idea how he got there, where he was, or when he was..
Black-So, you though you could win.
Green-Good al-
Black- But evil has won! This is great.
Green- But how could....thiiiisssssss....*trails off*
Black- Your friends are dead,or converted. I thought I killed you too but you showed up.
*Suddenly, a bright light appeared, then a shake which crumbled the already battered structure of the base.There was a noise, like a snagret's call. It was faint, but it grew louder until the noise became unbearable. Green felt a pluck, then everything was dark.He heard another noise, this time, more gentle.......He woke up to see a snaglet, golden down glistening in the sun. It's feathers were more of a metallic, silkish down.It's beak was a darkish crimson.*
Snaglet-You ok?
Green-Ahh!! A snagret.*holds head*Who are you?
Snaglet-Syxyw.
Green-Where am I?
Syxyw-You are in your correct dimension.
Green-Well, where was I before?
Syxyw-You were in a dimension where the worst possible situation happened.
Green-Huh? The worst possible thing?
Syxyw- It's where Black stole materials from Pik City and all your friends got converted to the nanites.This dimension is the one you are supposed to be in, you happened to get caught in my travel portalite. Well,it's one of many bad futures.
Green-When?
Syxyw-After the events of your first or second major Quest.
Green-Hmmmmmm.....the second one probably.
Syxew-Sure....anyway, I'm not sure if your friends are time lords here,I believe Black was torn apart by my vortex,his island might be gone too. You can call me Syxew instead if my name gets...complicated.
Green-So wait.....Tan isn't evil?
Syxew- Black managed to manipulate the timeline...and dimension, it took a lot of time to restore it to something normal... I might accompany you in your quest to find the artifacts if you're unable to.
Green- How did he...win?
Syxew-By erasing you from the timeline. Azure and I managed to restore your creation though.
Green-But even in the regular version...most of my friends died,or betrayed me.
Azure-We might be able to change that...maybe.
Green-What..what are you?
Syxew-I am a snaglet, an eternity of life has taught me how to control space and time. I know a lot.
Green-The artifacts.
Syxew-Yes, there are many spread across the lands.......
Green-So....?
Green-So.....who will join us?
Syxew-All your friends, a regime of pikmin colors..
Green-So all my friends?
Syxew-Yes, and old enemies and some new people. We need assistance, and bringing back Pikmin from your various adventures should help.
Green-Why?
Syxew-Well, when I repaired this problem, it caused a new one, it basically tore apart the continent we were on I think.... I've discussed this with everyone I've talked to, you can choose to come with me and give rebirth to this place, or just refuse my offer, and your quest will end here.
Azure- Come with me if you want to live.
Green-...............
---------------TO BE CONTINUED-------------------------------
[I love introducing different concepts into this, my fight scenes will probably be long,there will be alot of characters in this one.This is the 4th one.]-2009
- Chapter 1:
---------------------------Chapter 1..The Battalions-------------------------
*Syxew disappeared into the darkness,leaving Green and a mass of pikmin around him.*
Green-We must disband into teams if we plan on covering the areas. I'm not sure where some of you have been pulled from,or how some are even alive,or not evil. I had time to come up with a list..
---------LIST---------------
-------------Green Clan---------------
-Green-Leader
-Red-Co-Leader
-Silver-Co Leader
-Blue
-Navy
-Carbon
-Azure
-Diamond
-Ruby
-SteelRed
-Brown
-------------Tan Clan-----------------------
Tan-Leader
Pink-Co-Leader
Brass
Zinc
Garnet
Pearl
Amethyst
Jade
Snow
Gold
Maroon
DarkGreen
Light Yellow
------------------Indigo Battalion----------------
Indigo-Leader
LightGreen-Co-leader
LightPurple
Opal
Copper
Bronze
Purple
Platinum
Gray
------------Orange Brigade-------------
Orange
Yellow
Light Blue
White
Emerald
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Tan-Thank you for assigning me my own group.
Pink-Me too.
Indigo-Don't know why I need one...but thanks.
Orange-We gets to go bam bam prkoey.
LightBlue- Peanut Butter Jelly Time!!!
Maroon- Your group is bunch of misfits.
Yellow-No it isn't we are a part of intelmolectual stuff and sorts.
Maroon-....ok........
Gray-Why is Grey here?
Grey-Cuzzz.mah intellect is needed in the safashin uv teh world.
Gray-Hmmm.....You're stupid.
Grey-No, U is.
Steelred-Shut up before I kill you both.
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green 2 Tue 03 May 2016, 10:10 pm | |
| Epic Quest of Green 3 July 2010 Fic - Prologue:
-Epic Quest of Green 3-
-Prologue-
The moonlight made the Flint Beetles glisten in a stunning green. Olimar sat down on a rock. His face was covered in sweat as his air condition'd suit began to cool him down so he would not collapse. He monitor'd his vitals on his small pad, hand sewn into his suit. The circle was yellow, it was almost time to go into his ship.....but there were still stray pikmin scatter'd across the land.
Olimar: *whistles*
Olimar: *whistles*
Olimar: *whistles*
+++++BAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGG!!!!+++++++
Olimar: What was that?
``````````CRAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!`````````
The flora around him became burned, he saw a large shadow, none that he had ever seen.......a maroon aura around it pulsated on and off seemingly endlessly. Olimar couldn't make out the shape, but it didn't look like a shape he had seen on the Pikmin planet before.
{{{{{{{CRAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSHHHHHHHH!!!}}}}}}}}}
*Time had passes since the events of EQG2.............. most of Greens friends were killed...... the nanites were all destroyed along with the dark pikmin army when the dimensional bombs detonate'd....The Pikmin Island was gone, nothing left but a large crater that had eventually been filled with water. By some force, they escaped it.........through time, they were pulled into a moment of time..........away from the island, then returned to find no island there.*
-Green, Red,Blue,Yellow-
Green: WHY ME! WHY?! HE WAS MY BEST FRIEND! HE WAS EVIL!*starts punching the ground*
Red: Calm down.............we didn't know he had involvement in time travel.......we didn't know he was involved in the Nano Army.
Blue: Yeah....... its all gone.......all who we knew, all who we loved.....they are gone, all we have is us four, its been long and in that time, our friends died, got revived, only for their lives to be snatched..just like that......and this time, there is no way...
Yellow: Sad I am.....
Green: You are right, I guess all we can do now is find Olimar.....I guess. I have this feeling that...he's alive? He must've escaped the nanites.
Blue: Yes, we wouldn't be here with him, we'd still be in the ground.........
Yellow: I need a hug.
Blue: Well....we have no evil to deal with....so..
Yellow:We still have pikavores.
Green:Agreed, lets not get our hopes up......
Red:Well, lets go back to the Pool of Perplexment. That is where Olimar should be.
Yellow:I lubs water.
Blue:Yeah, but you drown in it.
Red:I hate it....love killin them wogpoles.....
Blue:Guys......wheres Green?
-Indigo,Light Blue-
Indigo: So......um......
Light Blue:I like turdles!
Indigo-Wanna go on raft.
Light Blue:To see turdles?
Indigo: Errrrrrrrr.......yah........
Light Blue:???????????????????????????????????!
Indigo: What?
Light Blue:MONKEY! [face_monkey]
Indigo: Errr....what?
Light Blue: A MONKEY! [face_monkey]
Indigo: Uhhh........where?
???:I AM NOT A MONKEY!!!!!
Light Blue: Hey you ova there?
Light Blue:I see you, ova there.
???2: What?
Light Blue: Why don't you come, ova here?
???2::Losers........
Light Blue: Heys, you came, ova here.......... *hugs*
*The shadow threw Light Blue off.*
Light Blue: Awwwwwwwww.........
???: *swings rock at Light Blue.....it made contact.*
Indigo:You....you...........monster!
???2:I don't think he's dead.
*Light Blue's body remained motionless, no breathe coming from it*
--------------------Light Blue---------------------------
*There in front of Light Blue, was a shining light.*
Light Blue: SHIIIIIIINNNNNNNYYYYYYYY!!!!!!
* He began running towards it when a shadow hand pulled him through the wall*
Voice: I see you have laugh.
Light Blue: Are you my mommy?
Voice: No. I am going to drop you in a room......a very dark room. *smirks*
Light Blue: Oooooooooooooh!*licks*
* LB fell into a square room *
Grey: Do you have any idea of what time it is?
Light Blue: Its...........
Grey: What?
Light Blue: Its half past.....
Grey:WHAT!!!!!
Light Blue: PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME!!!!!!!!!!
Grey:WHAT!?!?!??!?!?!?
*Grey turned into a banana and the room brightened up, full of dancing yellow bananas.......and a pickle*
Light Blue: Peanut Butter Jelly!
Banana: Peanut butter jelly with a baseball bat!!
Light Blue: Peanut butter jelly with a baseball bat!
*A banana struck Light Blue over the head with a baseball bat. Then more dancing banana's started to beat Light Blue with baseball bats.*
Voice: HA!
End Prologue
--------------------------------------------------
3,despite being written after 4, would likely be set before it. I'm just posting them in chronological order.
- Chapter 1-1:
-----------------------------Chapter 1-1------------------------------
Green: So..............
Red: Olimar.....where is he?
Yellow: Dead?
Blue: I guess he gets that for trying to go out at night.
???: You gotta help!
Blue: What?
Blue: Are you ok?
???: Yeah....I'm Indigo. Someone tried to slice me up.
Blue:Calm down.
Indigo: I almost got killed.... I AIN'T CALMING DOWN!!!!
Red: Hey!
Indigo: Don't go down there....
Green: We gotta see.
Indigo:It's your doom.
Red: Why?
Indigo: They killed my friend....Light Blue.
Red: So where are we supposed to go?
Green: Enlighten us.
Indigo: Just...... off of this place.....to.... the place.
Green: You're cut.
Indigo: OH GREEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAATTT. You finally noticed!
Green: Ok..........
*The group went up the nearby hill and saw a far off island.*
Red:There!?!?!?!
Indigo:Yeah......... Pik City.
Yellow: Pik City..... it got destroyed and sunk into the sea a long time ago!
Indigo: No..?
Red: Yah... it did.
Blue: I thought Phantom had a bomb there, he had to have detonated it when he lost.
Indigo: But I was just there.......its fine.
Green: I guess we can investigate..... I mean there is an island..... and....
Yellow: I guess. *grabs stick.*
Red: I doubt it.
Blue: We can take this vessel!!
*There lie a soda can. Red and Yellow began to push it in. A voice unknown to everyone talked. They did not know it was there but it talked and no one heard it..*
They do not know
Blue: Lets get there soon.
Red:Yeah. I hope so.
Green: Lets leave now.
So oblivious.
Yellow: I wonder if it is there.
Red:Yeah.
I mean.... Pik City.....hahahahahhahahhahah!!!!!
Green: Lets go to Pik City! The ruins most likely.
Yeah......go there!
To be continued.
- Chapter 2:
= = C h a p t e r . 2 = =
Green:So...onto Pik City we go.
Red:Yep.
Green:Kinda makes you wanna.
Red:Break into dance?
Indigo:Nope.
Yellow:I'm hungry!
Blue:Catch a fish.
Yellow:No.
Blue:Then you have to deal with it.
Yellow:I'll eat this pie.
Indigo:I will....later.
-There was a small crackle, then a pop....The sea floor below them collapsed and created a whirlpool that sucked them in. The can sealed up the hole. They fell a long way into the consuming darkness until finally being halted by the ground. They were in an underground sea cave-
Green:Where are we?
Red:I can't see..
Blue:That's because you are face down.
Yellow DIRT!! OMNOMOMONOM.
Green:Well, lets explore this cave....
Yellow:There's no glowcaps anywhere?
Green:We'll use the sunlight we have to find a way out
Yellow: Or we can sit here and eat...pie!
Indigo: Oh boy!What flavor?
Yellow: DIE FLAVORED!*Karate chops Indigo*
???:WHO GOES THERE!!!!!
Green:Uh...us.
???:YOU DARE BRING LIGHT INTO MY LAIR!!YOU MUST DIE!
Indigo:That's the same voice I heard earlier........
???: *makes a weird noise*
Crimson: Oh no. It's gunna kill us!
-A massive Empeoror Bulblax stomped out of the darkness. It had glowing red eyes, it loomed over the group and looked down and stared into Green.-
Bulblax:You gotta be kidding me, I was hoping to have a good fight and meal but a measly few pikmin....HA!!!
Green:We may look small but we are stronger!
Red:Bring it on!
Green:YEAH!
Red:We'll fight!!
Bulblax: *Stomps and licks face*Yum.
-The Bulblax stomped around then jumped up and tried to crush Green and Red but they rolled out of the way. The bulblax began to stick out his tongue .-
Yellow: *Finds Bomb Rocks* Oooh. Fancy......I wonder what this does*Begins chucking bomb rocks*
-They began sticking to the tongue of the bulbax, who slurped them up all in one gulp. There was a loud explosion and the Bulbax collapsed. The cave began to shake-
Crimson:Nice.....but you broke the cave.
- They began to run but quickly got swept by the flood waters. They kept going and going until finally water surged them up through some form of a geyser. They landed in the middle of an intersection. Around them was a giant glass like city.Onions lined the grassy roads, many different colors of pikmin roamed the street, even beasts roamed the city.-
Green:It can't be...
Red:But..
Blue: It was destroyed!
Yellow:Look! A pie shop!*runs off, almost getting squashed by an onion.*
Blue:Well...we can see it.....
Green:And I can feel the ground
Red:It looks like it did before.
Green:So how are we here.
Orange:Hey Gais.
Green:But aren't you dead...
Orange:No. I found this place when I was swimming around
Blue: Only I can swim.
Orange: No. I can too. I may be a non-swimming pikmin but don't underestimate me.
Red:Yeah. Remember, he got ate by a sea snagret.
Green:Yeah....and I swam too.
Red:Well....lets head to the nectar shop there*Points*
Crimson:This place is.....amazing.
Red:I still have a weird feeling.
Orange:Same here too....
Crimson:You guys are just stressed out.
****Pie Shop*******
Yellow: One Pie.
-The teller gave him a pie, he sat down at an empty table, two pikmin sat down too.-
Yellow:This pie looks awesome.
Purple:It does!*drools*
Yellow:Uh.....PURPLE, WHITE! I thought you were dead.
White:We were dead.
Yellow:.......
White:.....
Yellow: *Hugs*
Purple: *Drools on Yellow*
Yellow:Ew.
White:We followed you guys here.
Yellow:You did.?
White:Yeah. We should hang out more. I got nectar!
Purple:Ya know what'd be awesome.....is if this place sold tacos.....that would be like...amazing!!
White:IT WOULD!!!
Yellow: Or taco pies!
Purple: *Faints in happiness*
White: Don't expect mouth to mouth.
Yellow: I wonder where my friends went......?
White:Lets wait til Purple wakes up, then go.
Yellow: Yeah, I ain't dragging him.
White:That'd be a job for....BLUE!!!
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green 2 Tue 03 May 2016, 10:12 pm | |
| - Bonus Post 8:
Epic Quest of Green 3*
Prologue: Three almost seems like a bit of an epilogue to two, or even a side tale to Epic Quest of Green. Light Blue is always a returning cast member, having shown up in all four fics,lol. Olimar is back,because reasons,lol. But he does always find himself getting in trouble. I used the " 'd " a few times in this, and sound effects. It has a bit of an epilogue, but with dimensional bombs(maybe it is after 4?), the evil forces probably weren't vanquished. I added the part of "I have this feeling". Maybe Pikmin can sense when Olimar's around,even if they don't see him. "We have no evil to deal with.". Well, maybe not,lol,or it's just a spinoff of the Pikmin surviving. Light Blue and his PBJ Time again,but with Grey.
Chapter 1: I originally experimented with colors in this chapter,having the names colored their color. That and the HR, the line across some. I'm surprised it still works on the new board. Kept in the highlights though. They meet Indigo, and soon discover that Pik City wasn't destroyed(but in original 1,it was). I 'm not sure who the disembodied voice is,ghosts?
Chapter 2: I originally had names in bold. Actions are in a unique way too,with "-". The title was made with the old nametag maker.They end up in a cave,lit only by mushrooms, I wonder if there will be a crab battle,lol. "You dare bring light into my lair,you must die.*dies*". Orange...swimming? I guess he's just that cool. Just call Olimar, he'll just pick Purple up. Pik City ended up surviving, despite rumors that it had blown up.(it did blow up in original 1 though). I imagine Purple sounding like an Elcor.
Final Thoughts on 3: This was meant to be directly after 2. So it would probably come before 4,not by the dates I posted them though,lol. Maybe it happens the same time as 4. But this was one where I decided to go with the dark future that was made, and decided to just do a recap of the evil being destroyed(maybe an extra chapter to 2). But I decided to have them go on light hearted adventures,rather than some of the gritty stuff that happened before. They would still have to fight remnants of the evil forces along the way though. But it would be a smaller group, and less characters than the others.
Epic Quest of Green 4: New Lands
Prologue: I kind of wrote this kind of thing to explain why 2 had so much difference. Though I changed a few lines/added some in Legends, so things are more ambiguous. Despite being written before three, it fits well after three ironically. It reminds me of Adventure of Orange X with the different universes/timelines and such. Syxew/Syxyw is a character from the Heroes RP, with the superpower to teleport. I decided to import him into the story here,or make a similar character really,lol. I added Azure's line since Syxew's proposal reminded me of Terminator and Mission Impossible. One complaint was that it wasn't explained how evil won, so I added in that part.
Chapter 1: So many groups of different friends, and even some foes. Looks like a lot of people are alive, and not evil. I added Garnet here,lol. Platinum,Opal,Dark Green and Light Purple are new ones here. So many groups of Pokemon names. (Red/Blue/Yellow/Green)/(Gold/Silver)/(Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald)/(Diamond/Pearl/Platinum). I'll have to make a group just of them. Time travel and magic is complicated, seeing as many are revived/different. a Grey/Gray joke,heh. Orange's Team seems more like a small strike team, a strike team of the sillier characters. Anyways, this would technically be the final, where it ends.
Final Thoughts on 4: I didn't really know where to go,but also wasn't sure if I really liked the dark future I had made. Though it've been independent from that. It would've been more like two though, while 3'd have been more like one. The idea was to have the groups go to different dimensions or different destroyed areas, to help repair the damage caused by the last two-three fics. Really none of the characters make sense to be there, but with universes/time travel, that does happen. I might incorporate some of the concepts in another fic. Speaking of that idea, my fic made a cameo in Adventure of Orange X.
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green 2 Tue 03 May 2016, 10:14 pm | |
| Ratings and Misc Statistics for All EQOG Fics,including remakes before this. - Bonus Post 9:
>>Ratings<<
Epic Quest of Green 1: 4/6/2007 to 5/27/2007 [Final Post: 10/31/2008] 83 posts
Chapter 1: Kaen(8/10) Blackflame(8.5/10)
Chapter 2: Kaen(8/10) Blackflame(8/10) Axem(8/10)
Chapter 3: Kaen(7/10) Blackflame(7.5/10)
Chapter 4: Kaen(8.5/10) Blackflame(8.3/10)
Chapter 5: Kaen(6/10) Blackflame(7.8/10) Axem(7.5/10)
Chapter 6: Kaen(6.5/10) Blackflame(7/10)
Chapter 6 1/2: Kaen(8/10)
Chapter 7: Kaen(7/10) Blackflame(9/10)
Chapter 8: Kaen(8/10) Blackflame(8.5/10)
Chapter 9: Kaen(8.8/10) Blackflame(8.5/10)
Chapter 10: Kaen(7.5/10)Blackflame(8.5/10) Axem(8.5/10)
Chapter 11: Kaen(8/10) Blackflame(7/10) Axem(7/10)
Other: Chronotrigger(5/10)
Averages: Chapter 1(8.25/10) Chapter 2(8/10) Chapter 3(7.25/10) Chapter 4(8.4/10) Chapter 5(7.1/10) Chapter 6(6.75/10) Chapter 7(8/10) Chapter 8 (8.25/10) Chapter 9(8.65/10) Chapter 10(8.16/10) Chapter 11(7.33/10)
Total: 7.845/10
Epic Quest of Green 2: 7/28/2008 to 11/23/2008[Final Post: 11/23/2008] 114 posts
Prologue: Kaen(7/10) elderblackpuddin(4/10) Fiery(6/10) goddard(7.5/10)
Chapter 1: Kaen(7/10) elderblackpuddin(5/10) Fiery(6/10) goddard(8/10)[lol,5,6,7,8...]
Chapter 2: Fiery(9/10) goddard(8.9/10)
Chapter 3: Kaen(7.6/10)
Chapter 4.1: Kaen(8.2/10)
Chapter 4.2: Fiery(8/10) Kaen(8.45/10)
Chapter 5: Fiery(8/10) pikminlord(9/10)
Chapter 6: pikminlord(9/10)
Chapter 7: Fiery(7/10) pikminlord(8/10)
Chapter 8: Fiery(8/10)
Chapter 9: Fiery(8/10)
Chapter 10: pikminlord(8/10)
Chapter 11: pikminlord(8/10)
Chapter 12: No ratings.
Other: Pikminpower (8/10)
Averages: Prologue(6.1/10) Chapter 1(6.5/10) Chapter 2(8.95/10)Chapter 4.2(8.2/10) Chapter 5(8.5/10) Chapter 7(7.5/10)
Total: 7.888/10
Epic Quest of Green 4 New Lands: 12/22/2009 to 12/30/2009[Final Post 12/31/2009]16 posts
Prologue: goddard(7.5/10) salmonella(8.7/10) fiery(4/10)
Chapter 1: goddard(5/10) salmonella(5/10) thepikminmaster(5/10)
Averages: Prologue(6.73/10) Chapter 1(5/10)
Total: 5.862/10
Epic Quest of Green Collection: 5/20/2010 to 5/20/2010[Final Post 5/20/2010]3 posts.
Chapter 1,2,3: No ratings.
Epic Quest of Green 3*: 7/7/2010 to 7/27/2010[Final Post 8/20/2010] 20 posts.
Prologue: rssp(10/10) thepikminmaster(7/10)
Chapter 1: rssp(10/10) thepikminmaster(8/10)
Chapter 2: rssp(10/10) thepikminmaster(9.7/10) tompikmin(8/10)
Averages: Prologue(8.5/10) Chapter 1(9/10) Chapter 2(9.23/10)
Total: 8.91/10
Epic Quest of Green 1.1: 6/1/2011 to 6/29/2011[Final Post 6/29/2011] 25 posts.
Chapter 1: zachpikmin(7/10) fireball(8/10) Viper(7.8/10)
Chapter 2: Viper(6/10)
Chapter 3: Viper(6/10)
Chapter 4: Viper(8.9/10) fireball(7.9/10)
Chapter 5: Viper (10/10)
Chapter 6 and 6 1/2: Viper(10/10)
Chapter 7 and 8: Viper (20/10)
Chapter 9: Viper(9/10)
Averages: Chapter 1(7.6/10) Chapter 3(8.4/10)
Total: 8.555/10
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Epic 1 and 2: 7.871/10
Epic 3 and 4: 7.836/10
Epic 1.1: 8.555/10
Total: 8.08733/10
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Total Days: Epic Quest 1: 51 days,Epic Quest 2: 118 Days ,Others: 57 days. Total: 226 days
Total Amount: 261 posts
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Epic 1:12 Chapters,Epic 2: 14 Chapters,Epic 3: 3 Chapters, Epic 4: 2 Chapters, Epic Collection: 3 Chapters, Epic 1.1: 9 Chapters.
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E1/2: 26 Chapters
E3/4: 5 Chapters.
Collection/1.1: 12 Chapters
Legends(All fics): 29 Chapters
1/2/3/4/Collection/1.1/Legends: 72 Chapters
Word Count might be later.
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green 2 Tue 03 May 2016, 10:16 pm | |
| The lost epilogue of EQOG1,various questions, word counts between the originals and the fixes(what you're currently reading) - Bonus Post 10:
Bonus Post 10
Previous EQOG1 Epilogue(2007)-
Epilogue-
After 2 weeks, our gang was living the good life....
Sepia:Uh, well.
Orange:Roll the dice.
Green: Ok!Ok!!
The dice rolled and landed on a 6.
Green:You owe me a pellet.
Red: Bang!
Then out of the bushes came a shadow,it snatched Tan.
???:You will be good Evil pikmin.
... and it flew off.
Green:Tan!!!!!
Blue looked over and saw a pikmin that they never wanted to see again..it was Gold..
Blue:But how?
Gold:I survived..
Navy:I can't wonder how you survived..
Then a Gray pikmin stepped out of the shadows..
Gray:Hi?
Gold:Yes he was revived too.
Navy: But how in the?
Green:Where did Pikeroni go?
...............To be continued in EQOG 2
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Questions
=EQ1: Chapter 1=
What happened to Green and Orange?
What will happen to Blue?
Will they reach land soon?
Favorite Character
Least Favorite Character
=EQ1: Chapter 2=
How will Snowy change if he gets the shard.
Who are Specter and Black?
What is the gray goo?
Is what Snowy said just a rumor?
Favorite Character?
Least Favorite Character?
suggestions ?
=EQ1: Chapter 3=
Cameo?
Favorite Character?
Least Favorite Character?
Who is Copper?
What color will the next shard be?
What is the Crystal Sword?
Should I keep writing this?
=EQ1: Chapter 4=
Did he die?
=EQ1: Chapter 5=
DREAM Meanings?
Cameo?
Favorite and Least Favorite Character?
=EQ1: Chapter 6=
Favorite and least favorite characters?
Who could the future pikmin be?
The next Shard to be found?
Who is Ghoul?
Who do you think are some of the ???S?
Who will join the Dark Pikmin?
What is Pik City,will they get there?
What are te Shapes of Power?
=EQ1: Chapter 6 1/2=
Was this the best chapter so far?
Who is the glowing pikmin?
=EQ1: Chapter 7=
CAMEO?
6 1/2 chapter?
What are the metal shards?
Could there be more Jewels?
What happened to the globe?
What was the list for?
Who is Neon's ancestor?
Why do you think that most of the group ran away?
=EQ1: Chapter 8=
Is this the best chapter yet?
Austriala,how different will it be?
Pikeroni's objective?
Mamutas Objective?
Why did the Snagrets not join Pikeroni?
How about the Mamutas too?
What is the Land of the Falls?
Cameo?
Any anwers to anything about the list?
=EQ1: Chapter 9=
No question
=EQ1: Chapter 10=
Suggestions?
New colors you would like to see?
How is Azure going to affect the story?
Who is the shadow that pulled Tan out of the water,what was his purpose, and who are they working for?
Near the end of Season 1...
Suggestions for season 2?
What happened to the nanobots?
Next shard to be recovered?
=EQ1: Chapter 11=
Which ideas do you want to see?
=EQ2: Prologue=
What was the black hole and why did it form?
Good format?
Comments?suggestion?
=EQ2: Chapter 1=
Where is yellow?
Suggestion/comments.
=EQ2: Chapter 2=
Who is ???
Will anyone survive the large deop of the waterfall?
Out of all the furry bulbmin, how many will make it?
Light Yellows fate?
Suggestions/comments
=EQ2: Chapter 3=
Rating?
Why is Neon back?
Who are the darkest ones?
Suggestions, Comments?
=EQ2: Chapter 4.1=
Rate?
Why were those two brought back?
The color of the agent?
Name the bulbmin. Suggest names...?
Suggestions,coments...?
=EQ2: Chapter 4.2=
Rate?
=EQ2: Chapter 5=
Rate?
Comments?
The island, wht is it?
Navy..Gray?
=EQ2: Chapter 6=
Rate?
Comments/Suggestions
=EQ2: Chapter 7=
Rate
Favorite Character?
Least Favorite character?
Where are they?
Should Jewels and Lights be included?
What about Carbon?
Suggestions?
=EQ2: Chapter 8=
Rate.
Suggestions/comments.
=EQ2: Chapter 9=
RATE?
Neon, Yellows Fate.
Carbon, please choose his path.
Brass's fate and the steel tribe's fate.
Suggestions/comments?
=EQ2: Chapter 10=
Rate
Shards?
Maroon, good, bad, neutral?
Carbon.
=EQ2: Chapter 11=
Rate
Were you expecting this?
=EQ2: Chapter 12=
No question
=EQ4: Prologue=
Rate?
Who remembers this fic?
Who remembers Syxew?
How many chaptys should I make?
First Quadrilogy?
=EQ4: Chapter 1=
No question
=EQ3: Prologue=
Remember EQG1? or EQG2?
Who is the voice...and shadows?
What does Light Blues dream mean?
What happened to Olimar and Green?
Get the pop culture references...... other than PBJ Time?
=EQ3: Chapter 1=
No Question
=EQ3: Chapter 2=
Rate?
Better Format?
Did you get all the references?
How is Pik-City back? And why is it an island?
Favorite Character?
Least Favorite?
Funniest?
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*I was going to post the answers, but I guess you can probably read through the originals if you really wanted to see that.
With comments about the original chapter too( for word count..
Epic Quest of Green 1: Original(14414) Legends(18282)
Epic Quest of Green 2: Original(8444) Legends(9691)
Epic Quest of Green 3: Original(1646) Legends(1651)
Epic Quest of Green 4: Original(616) Legends(800)
Total Amount of Words: Original(25120) Legends(30424)
I'll have a word count of commentary later, once it's been posted.
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| | Subject: Re: Epic Quest of Green 2 Tue 03 May 2016, 10:18 pm | |
| The next is final thoughts on the entire saga,statistics,and even links to originals,and most used words. - Final Thoughts Total:
Final Thoughts
I noticed that Oct, Bone, and Specter never really show up again in the future fics,but all the others do through various means. Maybe they'll have to show up again one of these days. Maybe Specter and a Ghost Army and Oct n Bone are fighting it during the events. I might write out recaps for another fic in case nobody read these. If I had finished 3 and 4, they would have probably been 10-15 chapters,kind of like the first two. I guess I didn't really have the writing spirit to write 8, and 9 chapters respectively. I mean if I did now, I might be able to write those 17-20 chapters and have 2 completed fics, but I might just leave those as a 2 1/2 or recap kind of thing.Though if I did combine the two into one "3" fic, I would only have 5 or 6 chapters to write,lol.
With Epic Quest of Green, I never really went in with a plan. I just wrote, one time writing something in an hour. So it's a fic that I wrote as I went along,with only a few general plans.Even as they got "more serious", I still tried to keep the humor,and randomness in them. I've explored numerous methods and concepts in them,actually all of them. I do always seem to have one or two fics before I end up completing one. I do introduce a bunch of unique concepts though. I'm not sure how many other fics have Pikmin fighting an army of robots,or how many star Pikmin but also have Olimar. Though the fics were kind of short, and had a ton of stuff happening in them. They probably could've instead been 15 to 20 chapters. Combined,the two fics equaled 24 chapters, the average length of many fics. Combining 3/4, it's up to 29. If you split 4.1/2 it'd be an even 30. I'm kind of the George RR Martin of the Pikmin board though, having lots of characters getting killed in my fics. That and lots of destruction/battle scenes where tons of unnamed people are killed.
I don't know if I'll post fun facts about stuff I've done in RPs, fics I've shown up in,and other fics I've written. All that might be after this is a final stat roundup. It's a sham that the Pikmin board is dead, but I at least completed this,and OLJTIGN. I don't really know if my fic is one of the major fics, but it is one of the older,more enduring fics. Olimar and Louie's Journey to IGN was one that I took over from Axem,but did have the most amount chapters I had written. It made me think about writing stuff again, that and talking to Stealthy about various ideas makes me think about writing stories about various things again. One time I have to find that short story I wrote where a guy got sent back in time and had to survive. Maybe that's for a different thread however.
2016 was meant to be more...relaxing,and focusing on real life stuff. However I got caught up in making my 100k, playing Borderlands 2, playing Mass Effect, and working on this. All of those things have definitely been time sinks the last two months. If I write another,it would probaby be a time sink,so I don't know. At least with this,people probably wouldn't need a recap. If I can,I'll try to post this one drawing that I found of EQOG characters from years ago, what actually gave me the idea to make Legends. So that post might come after this one.
It's crazy that I wrote something when I didn't even have 1k, and now I'm fixing up/adding commentary to it 9 years later. They were definitely my most experimental fics. After three attempts, I finally finished a commentary/fix of those fics. In 9 years, I've had quite a bit happen, and I've grown as a person. My writing style has evolved as well,and I've gotten spell check [face_tongue]. Standed and Adventure of Orange were certainly a big inspiration when writing it, because I read a bit before I joined IGN, except for AO3 which I was reading and commenting on when I joined IGN. It's almost the 10th anniversary of this fic, just one more year, also almost my 9th anniversary posting here too.
Thanks to all the readers who have read all these, and any future readers...if you exist. Kaen for helping me improve with my writing. Also,apologies for being harsh on you Pikminlord,pikminpower and other users. Thanks to Blackflame/Axem for Special thanks to Axem for saving them from auto deletion,and being a friend all these years.
For some final stuff after the final words...
Epic Quest of Green Legends: 2/8/2016 to 2/24/2016 [Final Post: TBA] ???
Links to the Original Fics
http://www.ign.com/boards/threads/the-epic-quest-of-green.139798766/
http://www.ign.com/boards/threads/epic-quest-of-green-2-another-fic.168014403/
http://www.ign.com/boards/threads/epic-quest-of-green-4-new-lands.187899158/
http://www.ign.com/boards/threads/epic-quest-of-green-collection.192189544/
http://www.ign.com/boards/threads/epic-quest-of-green-3.193652883/
http://www.ign.com/boards/threads/epic-quest-of-green-1-1.202789758/
http://www.ign.com/boards/threads/epic-quest-of-green-legends.454702965/
Other Links
http://www.ign.com/boards/threads/i...my-epic-quest-of-green-was-deleted.165661342/
http://www.ign.com/boards/threads/t...-way-between-realms.453988063/#post-501814752
http://www.ign.com/boards/threads/make-a-creature.97612005/
**Not counting this,or the words after this**
Total Word Count: 40,954 Words
8426 Sentences
243775 Character
196478 Characters (without spaces)
60109 Syllables
5175 Unique Words
3907 Paragraphs
203 Minutes Estimated Reading Time
10014 Difficult Words
Top Words: (Excluding Grammar words like "The"/etc)
1. green - 499 times (8.6%)
2. pikmin - 367 times (6.3%)
3. red - 330 times (5.7%)
4. yellow - 259 times (4.4%)
5. blue - 240 times (4.1%)
6. up - 218 times (3.7%)
7. chapter - 205 times (3.5%)
8. light - 202 times (3.5%)
9. tan - 198 times (3.4%)
10. neon - 196 times (3.4%)
11. orange - 159 times (2.7%)
12. will - 144 times (2.5%)
13. 10 - 141 times (2.4%)
14. time - 139 times (2.4%)
15. like - 137 times (2.4%)
16. get - 112 times (1.9%)
17. down - 105 times (1.8%)
18. just - 104 times (1.8%)
19. snowy - 104 times (1.8%)
20. me - 93 times (1.6%)
Any questions?
I hope you enjoyed the read, and the bonus info throughout this. See you later.
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